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by montmorency » Thu Feb 26, 2015 11:20 am
OOC- YES THIS IS SUCH A GOOF DIARY-ιηѕєят тιтℓє нєяє-
Well, I saw Lone Claw again. Still strange like last time I saw him. Part of our conversation:
"Still up to your 'secret business'?" I asked him. "Of course! That's pretty much what I do!" Lone Claw replied. His eyes widened a little. "Did I say too much?" he muttered. His green eyes darted around, as if they were searching, or maybe scanning the area.
Well, I met this wolf:

The white and gray wolf walked past me, sending a chilling feeling down my spine. "Who are you?" She looked at me. "Bastet," she snapped. Funny. That's the name of the Egyptian cat goddess. Well, mostly cats at least, I thought. "Okay. I'm Archie," I said. Bastet nodded and turned around again. Then I noticed the little ghost-like things floating around her. Then I also noticed her eyes. "What are those ghosty things floating around you? And what is with your pure white eyes?" I asked the gray and white wolf, just out of curiosity. "They're ghosty things. And they're just my pure white eyes, too. Better?" Bastet turned around again and walked away. "Very explanatory," I muttered.
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by montmorency » Thu Feb 26, 2015 3:10 pm
OOC - I got her personality correct-ish? Good!gσ∂ѕ σƒ σмєηѕ
I had a dream last night... I'll write what is was like; I remember most of it.
I sat up in a strange place, it looked like an empty room in a pyramid. I looked up. Anubis! Ra! Horus! What were they here for? Hopefully it's not for an omen or something, just a strange dream, I thought. But then Anubis began to speak. Beware an animal thats fur color is black, it's only just coming back," Anubis said. "What?" I asked. "Beware an animal thats fur color is black, it's only coming back," Ra whispered. "Beware an animal thats fur color is black, it's only coming back," Horus whispered. The three Egyptian gods faded into nothingness, and I bolted awake. Then it hit me.
Anubis delivered the message first.
Anubis was pretty much the god of death for Egyptians.
That could only mean one thing.
The animal thats fur color is black will kill me.
OOC - This entry is really bad, but you get the point, right?
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by montmorency » Sat Feb 28, 2015 9:50 am
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"Who are you? Do you know anything about this strange beetle 'rain'?" a brown-ish wolf asked me. She must've known a little bit about me and how I kind of... explore and go into the pyramids. She looked like this:
click to see her (pretend Archie included it as a picture)
"Oh, um, no, not really. I remember Cleocatra sent tons and tons of beetles here a while ago, but they were live beetles," I replied.
"Okay. Thanks for at least answering. Has anything strange been happening in the pyramids?"
"No, not exactly. But also, who are you?" I barked.
"Oh, I forgot! I'm Hatari. You're something like Archibald, right?" the brown-ish wolf said.
"Correct, but I like to be called Archie. Now why are you quizzing me?" I asked Hatari.
"Okay. It's just because I'm writing a book about strange things happening, and I've heard about you. It seemed you knew a lot about here, especially regarding the mummies and things," she replied.
"Alrighty, any more questions?"
"Nope, not right now." Hatari shook her head slightly.
"I guess you can ask me more questions if you need to. But know I might not be in the 'city' here extremely often," I told the brown-ish wolf.
"Okay. Bye." Hatari turned around a trotted away.
How do you like my paragraphing? I personally think it's better than before.
The name Hatari kind of sounds, or at least looks, like Atari, I thought, loping by the pyramid.
Then I saw this wolf:
click to see her (pretend Archie included it as a picture)
I stopped and looked at her. "What are you doing so close to the pyramid entrance?" I called, glancing at the pyramid guard and then back at the white, gray, and blue-ish wolf.
"My friend dared me to go into the pyramid!" the gray, white, and blue-ish wolf replied.
"Don't go in it. I'm sure you'll get lost," I said.
"Naw, I won't get lost." The gray, white, and blue-ish wolf smiled. "Oh, and my name is Sage," she added.
"Okay, Sage. Trust me, you'd at least need a map, or make a map while you explore the pyramid." And don't go in the pharaoh's chamber... You'd probably try and open Cleocatra's sarcophagus, I added in thought.
"I'll keep a mental map." Sage turned around again and continued to walk closer to Cleocatra's pyramid entrance.
"Whoever dared you is stupid," I muttered. "Don't. Trust me. If Cleocatra wakes up, you're dead," I said, still trying to convince Sage to not go into the pyramid.
"Oh fine. Next time I'm going in if you're not here." She smiled mischievously.
"Well at least I saved you this time," I grumbled.
I turned away and began to walk to me and Samuel's 'campsite'. Hopefully Sage never goes in. And hopefully is she is stupid enough to go in, she doesn't wake Cleocatra. She sounds like a fun wolf, but pretty crazy.
I entered my tent thing and began to dust a few artifacts off.
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by montmorency » Sun Mar 01, 2015 10:47 am
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Wandering around town, just as usual, thinking about the 'prophecy', bumping into somewolf.

"Who are you?" I asked, almost automatically.
The gray and white wolf stared at me silently for a few seconds, and then spoke, "Saber."
Saber aslo had empty, pure white eyes. "May I ask, why are your eyes so... different?"
"I'm a ghost, stupid," he croaked.
"Did you expect me to know that?" I retorted.
He nodded. "A little bit," he replied.
"Well, goodbye I guess." I walked away from Saber, waving a goodbye for a few seconds.
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