✎ωαяяioяs: тнε ⅾεεя{fan-fic}

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✎ωαяяioяs: тнε ⅾεεя{fan-fic}

Postby quit... » Thu Feb 19, 2015 12:33 pm

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cloudclan
leaderxxxxxflightstar- a bright brown she-cat

deputyxxxxxbravestrike- a large tom with black spots all over his pelt

medicine catxxxxxfeatherstorm- a grey she-cat

warriorsxxxxxacornfall- a bright golden brown she-cat {loudspark's sister} {apprentice;; dogpaw}
treeleap- long-limbed bright brown tom, and he has a white nuzzle
softtail- a white she-cat with black paws and a fluffy tail
forgottenshadow- a pitch black she-cat
wolftrail- a dark grey tom with white speckles on his pelt {apprentice;; tinypaw}
loudspark- a golden brown tom {acornfall's brother}
copperstone- a copper colored tom with brown spots
nightwing- a blue-ish grey she-cat
goldencloud- a bright golden she-cat with white speckles

apprentices
xxxxxtinypaw- a rather small she-cat with pitch black fur
dogpaw- a very large tom with brown fur

queensxxxxxsilverlake- a small she-cat with white speckles. mother of copperstone's kits: deerkit {a dark brown fur tom with white spots}
leafwind- a tortoiseshell she-cat. mother of loudsparks' kits: mirrorkit {a white she-cat with pale brown spots}, hallowkit {tortoiseshell she-cat}, and foxkit {a bright golden tom}

elderxxxxxbrightmist- a small she-cat
battlewing- a pitch black tom
echoscreech- a tortoiseshell she-cat with bright blue eyes





batclan
leaderxxxxxflintstar- a dark grey tom with black speckles

deputyxxxxxwiltingrose- a pitch black she-cat

medicine catxxxxxdawnchase- a golden she-cat {apprentice;; windfall}

warriorsxxxxxgoosewind- a white tabby tom
blackflame- a black she-cat with white paws {apprentice;; hawkpaw}
bluefrost- a blue-ish grey she-cat





pineclan
leaderxxxxxwolfstar- a grey tabby tom

deputyxxxxxgreyflame- a light grey tom with weirdly bright green eyes

medicine catxxxxxsafeheart- a white tom

warriorxxxxxambervine- an amber colored she-cat with black stripes
redoak- a golden brown tom with a white chest
tallfeather- a lean tom with a pure white pelt
seawing- a small she-cat with beautiful blue eyes {apprentice;; swiftpaw}
softflower- a golden she-cat with white spots





dewclan
leaderxxxxxrunningstar- a large tom with brown dapples

deputyxxxxxgreysong- a grey tortoiseshell she-cat

medicine catxxxxxstonetalon- a dark grey tabby tom

warriorxxxxxrobinflight- a brown she-cat with a white chest {apprentice;; soundpaw}
lightstep- a tiny tom with black paws {apprentice;; bouncepaw}
breezeclaw- a tom with a white pelt
nightrun- a pitch black she-cat
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Re: ✎ωαяяioяs: тнε ⅾεεя{fan-fic}

Postby quit... » Fri Feb 20, 2015 1:15 pm

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chapter 1

deerkit ran out of the nursery, his thick fur sticking out as always. "i'm finally becoming an apprentice today!" he bounced around. mirror came out running too, "we are finally becoming an apprentice." she correct him and giggled. deerkit pawed at mirrorkit, "or that." deerkit's mother, silverlake came rushing over to him. silver lake started grooming him, "for your apprentice ceremony you have to be clean!" deerkit moaned loudly, "mom..." mirrorkit giggled even more. as his mom stopped grooming him deerkit ran off, "come on mirrorkit!" mirrorkit chased after him.

dogpaw and tinypaw stopped them in their tracks. "why hello mother's tom.." tinypaw giggled at deerkit. dogpaw yowled, "mom!" he ran around bumping into mirrorkit many of times. deerkit yowled, "stop dogpaw!" dogpaw laughed even harder, "oh come on kit, i will always be older and better than a runt!" mirrorkit shrunk and stepped back. deerkit hissed loudly, his fur rising up. tinypaw giggled and pushed mirrorkit into the mud. dogpaw mewed, "good idea... mom won't love him that much anymore." dogpaw pushed deerkit in the mud.

flightstar was already on the high-rock, no one had barely noticed. "clan meeting! clan meeting!" deerkit and mirrorkit started slowly walking up. flightstar continued, "two apprentices, mirrorkit and deerkit are at the age to become apprentices." she nodded while looking at them a bit confused. "deerkit, you have reached the age of six moons, and it is time for you to be apprenticed. from this day on, until you receive your warrior name, you will be known as deerpaw. Your mentor will be treeleap..." treeleap smiled in pride, and walked up the rock. "I hope treeleap will pass down all he knows on to you." flighstar continued on, "treeleap, you are ready to take on an apprentice. You had received excellent training from copperstone, and you have shown yourself to be curious and brave. You will be the mentor of deerpaw, and I expect you to pass on all you know to deerpaw.." treeleap walked up to deerpaw, he touched noses with the apprentice. "hello deerpaw."

she smiled at mirrorkit, "mirrorkit, you have reached the age of six moons, and it is time for you to be apprenticed. From this day on, until you receive your warrior name, you will be known as mirrorpaw. Your mentor will be loudspark. I hope loudspark will pass down all he knows on to you." loudspark walked up the high-rock and smiled at mirrorpaw. "loudspark, you are ready to take on an apprentice. You had received excellent training from bravestrike, and you have shown yourself to be patient and clever. You will be the mentor of mirrorpaw, and I expect you to pass on all you know to mirrorpaw." loudstrike then walked up to mirrorpaw and touched noses with his new apprentice. "hello mirrorpaw."

everyone started cheering their names, "mirrorpaw! deerpaw!" they repeated over and over, then it started to softly go down. silverlake ran up to deerpaw, "my little kit is an apprentice!" she paused and looked at his fur, "the one time i tell you keep your fur clean." she shaked her head. then she smiled at him, "i still just can't believe it." deerpaw laughed, "i bet i will be a warrior in a second!" silverlake looked at him for a while. silverlake then smiled, "don't grow up too fast deerpaw.."


chapter 2
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Last edited by quit... on Sat Feb 21, 2015 4:07 am, edited 1 time in total.
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LIFE STARTS ALL OVER AGAIN
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hay is for horses! haueheh my na
me is BUNKYY. funny thing is tho
ugh, when i was a young adorabl
x x x
x
e child i called santa bunky and
now its my username! i talk too
much --- mm m thanks bye

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WHEN IT GETS CRISP IN THE FALL
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Re: ✎ωαяяioяs: тнε ⅾεεя{fan-fic}

Postby quit... » Sat Feb 21, 2015 1:07 am

heh finished... i kept the text big since i couldn't really read it that well DX
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LIFE STARTS ALL OVER AGAIN
┏────────────────────┓

hay is for horses! haueheh my na
me is BUNKYY. funny thing is tho
ugh, when i was a young adorabl
x x x
x
e child i called santa bunky and
now its my username! i talk too
much --- mm m thanks bye

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WHEN IT GETS CRISP IN THE FALL
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