A simple dreamer ★ Tryout thread for Plumerian #423

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Re: A simple dreamer ★ Tryout thread for Plumerian #423

Postby quitting,, » Mon Jan 26, 2015 5:34 am

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      Music.. Music is Kale's heart and soul. For years he has admired others work, and when he hears the frivolous tunes of famous composers such as Beethoven or Mozart, his heart skips a beat and he is lost in a melodic trance as his eyes close and his paw makes little dips and curves in the air. Music is what makes him happy. No, not the pop music you hear on the radio nowadays; but piano solos and duos, and the music they would play for royalty centuries ago.

      When sad, Kale will listen to music; and he will forget all his worries. His family never knew why he listened to this music at such a young age, though they didn't dare to argue. What was bad about such a thing, besides the wonders it beheld? While other children were listening to pop stars and doing hip dances to them, Kale would be off in the corner. His headphones plugged in, his mind would swirl and dance with the melodic tunes as he was in his own little world.

      He paints in his mind when he listens; intricate swirls and patterns, dancing on the walls of his mind as suddenly the music stops as the strings play furiously. Then, oh- booming, powerful gusts of red wash over him as allnthe instruments play. Then, suddenly, light little colours form into butterflies as the flutes chime in, playing their happy little tune.

      And, with that, it is now clear of what goes on his mind.
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Re: A simple dreamer ★ Tryout thread for Plumerian #423

Postby quitting,, » Tue Feb 03, 2015 6:41 pm

[Before you look at this post; please make sure your on a computer c: This post is really wacky if your not on a computer and your on mobile. It's a nightmare actually, hehe. I'm not sure what happened haha]


His worst nightmare:
Kale could only describe his worst nightmare
with a few simple words; break in. He is
absolutely terrified by the thought of a masked
stranger breaking into his lodge and stealing everything
he's ever worked for. Though no one would ever decide
to break in to his little lodge, he is always troubled
that some plumerian may come and steal all his musical
notes and pages. [though why would someone want that?]

He dreads waking up in the middle of the night- for even
if he hears a tiny little bump, even if it's a mouse, he will
yell and dive under his covers. If he does happen to get out
and check, usually only if he has to go to the washroom,
he carries around a stuffed bear from which he got as a
child. After checking, he'll hop back into bed and leave
the nightlight on, hoping that whatever the cause of
the noise was will suddenly disappear and leave.
Most Embarrassing Moment:
When Kale was around 12, he had been invited
over to a birthday party; though he would not
know of something extremely horrible and
embarrassing to come. When he had gotten
there, he had met the birthday boy; a spoiled
child whose parents worked at the same place his
mother and father did. Kale absolutely hated him;
though what was going to happen later he didn't
mean to wish to happen in anyway. When they
began setting out the birthday cake, the boy
had demanded to get the largest piece.
Not caring, Kale didn't mind getting the
smallest piece. As he began to walk
back to his seat, he had tripped on a
cord and sent his cake flying, right
on top of the boy's head. After crying
for a bit, he was sent home and his
parents getting nasty looks from
the boy's parents.

okay so yeah this is a big space;
unfortunately it may take a bit
so let's just talk for now!
How is your day/morning/night?
I'm doing good, thank you!
ok anyways yeah woot woot
toot toot hey yo yo yo yo
Being random kkkkkkkk
because I can yo yo hey
and I need to mhm mh
wow this is long lmaooo
just a little more okay just
just a little more and then it's
gonna be done okay just believe
meeeeeee

Why Greenland?:
Why would Kale choose such a place as Greenland? Simply put, since he was a boy he's always wanted to explore desolate places where not many people go. Ever since he had heard of Greenland once as a young boy reading a book, he has loved it's beautiful tundras and mountainous spaces. Not to mention forests. When he was finally old enough to go out on his own, he explored Egypt and the northwest territories before landing in Greenland. It was stunning; he loved it more than any other place on the world. And what not a better way to show your love, by living there? So that's simply what he did; he bought a piece of land, and slowly built his dreams there.

Why Mozart?:
When he was a child, Kale
once saw a documentary play
on the famous composer,
Mozart. He loved learning about
his world, and his life at that time.
Since then, he had listened to his
music every day- though he admits
at first he found it absolutely strange.
But he soon found.. such... such grace
in learning the different notes and things
like a Treble clef and Soprano.
Habits:
Some habits Kale has:
-Fiddling with paws when embarrassed
-Flicking tail back and fourth when nervous
-Chuckling when unsure or nervous of something
-Avoiding eye contact when lieing
-Blushing madly when happy
-Running tongue over teeth repeatedly when working
-Stuttering a lot when meeting a stranger
-Jumping slightly to one foot or another when excited
-Puffing out cheeks when flustered or mad
-Eyes go wide when sad or struggling not to cry
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Re: A simple dreamer ★ Tryout thread for Plumerian #423

Postby quitting,, » Wed Feb 04, 2015 11:27 am

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Izusa
Izusa is one of Kale's great friends; though he has to be slow and quiet around her, considering she's extremely shy. Kale thinks of her sort of as a sister figure; he has a strong connection with her and loves to just have a quiet hang out with her at his lodge. Though he only sees her hewn she occasionally comes to Greenland. They'll usually sit at one of the tables outside and drink green tea while smiling and watching nature around them. Though they don't speak very much to each other, it seems they can connect just by actions, facial expressions, and emotion.

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Saiya
Saiya is Kale's best friend; he loves to hang out and have a good laugh with her. The two are often seen walking through the tiny towns when she comes and visits him in Greenland. Usually visiting the seaside, the two love to find her it crabs and race them to see who wins. He also occasionally finds seashells for her; just because he finds them beautiful to look at. He loves showing her around the island, and he admires and loves it when she compliments his home. It makes him feel warm and tingly inside; though he admits he could never love her in 'that' sort of way.

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Sugar
Though not exactly friends, he loves listening to her scripts and rolls she must play in movies- and he's glad she also shares his love of music. Though not exactly the type he likes- but it doesn't matter to him. More of acquaintances then anything, he still says 'hey' to her when he sees her filming in movies in Greenland from time to time.
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Re: A simple dreamer ★ Tryout thread for Plumerian #423

Postby quitting,, » Wed Feb 04, 2015 3:56 pm

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      Why Kale?
      Now- you may have known of the vegetable 'kale' before you even began to read this form; but if not, then there you go. Though truthfully, he was not intended to be named after the leafy green vegetable. He is named from a popular unisex name, commonly given to males; trust me, he is in no way resembling the vegetable.

      Kale was named when his mother once met a marvelous,,and extremely smart man- in no way meaning to be a romantic situation. They.. They were great friends, you could say. The one fateful, dreary night, he had taken his last breath- crushed by a falling border as he was in the mountains. His mother had been torn for grief, same with his father. His mother blamed herself for his death- she says if she had been willing to come with him that day, they would've both been alive. Though his father would remind her that then he wouldn't be the same- he would loose his mate and his unborn child as well.

      When his mother gave birth to him, the first thing she saw was his brilliant blue eyes- automatically making her think of the marvelous and smart man. That is where the name came from; as he stared at her, she breathed deeply and would mutter the name, "Kale."
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Re: A simple dreamer ★ Tryout thread for Plumerian #423

Postby quitting,, » Fri Feb 06, 2015 12:14 pm

I know this is the end of my form, and I know it isn't the best coding or the prettiest, or the
longest form but this took me days weeks to put together, right until the night before the end date; I know there are amazing and great forms out there, and I would be lying if I said mine was the best.
I would like to say thank you for the chance that I may get my first Plumerian, and my dream Plumerian. I would draw him in my notebooks, even though no one would know what I was drawing I would; I would hold him dear to me and I would make him go on little adventures in my head as I fell asleep. Thank you so much Akua; I know it must be hard to judge and I just wanted to say a little thank you for reading my thread. Yes, I know- so much thank you's!
Anyways, I hope you enjoyed my little thread I put together <3

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