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by TheSongOfTheStars » Mon Jan 26, 2015 1:03 am
That sounds like a star-trek plot XD VERRRRY confusing
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by TheSongOfTheStars » Mon Jan 26, 2015 2:53 am
True, but this just sounds so much like something they would have done
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by shade. » Mon Jan 26, 2015 5:25 am
I think if you write it out that would be a lot less confusing, although I grasp what you're saying. It's very original, and dependant on the scenes/emotions you throw in, it could appeal to many different genres and people. I feel like it's the kind of book that is very interesting if staged correctly, and there's a tricky balance I probably couldn't write there.
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by watermelon. » Mon Jan 26, 2015 5:27 am
Honestly, confusing plot could be better - as long as it's written well. I've read really awesome books before, and when my friends ask me what it's about, I go into this big long description of it. Then they get confused, and yeah. So honestly, a lot of books out there have stuff like that.

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by noal » Mon Jan 26, 2015 5:41 am
@watermelonnyum11, shade. ; It's the same for me. Actually, in the description I typed up I wasn't even half down with what the story is about. I have got the idea for it in my grasp, and I just want it to represent true meaning or realizing who you really were before you plummet into the abyss of death.
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by Zoethian » Mon Jan 26, 2015 5:46 am
Marking. I was from the old thread--, hi, guys! How's everyone doing? Good writing? Reading anything new?
Just as a question, why aren't we meant to post forms yet, etc? I don't want to post questions/prompts until everything is less-chaotic xD
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