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Redline please! by Kodian

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Redline please!

Postby Kodian » Tue Jan 20, 2015 5:51 am

I mostly need the help around the back legs, paws, spine + body, Although you can change or tell me what I would need to change, ect. Oh, and It may Look skinny but that's just my style, so you don't have to edit that, unless needed.

I want to make this into a lineart, and the legs really bug me. I never could really draw them that well, and I want everything to be just perfect.

And oh that skull! Even if I use a skull reference I can never get it to look more fox like! Although I guess it's just how I'm used to drawing and got accustomed to it.. :/
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Re: Redline please!

Postby huskyhiccups » Tue Jan 20, 2015 5:57 am

The body is too big compared to the head, or the head could be bigger. Also, it depends from character to character, but the legs are too long. (Sorry, I can't redline right now, I might do it later)

A tip I learned fro another artist:
always flip your art the other direction. It helps you see mistakes or things that might look silly. Then flip it back and make corrections. :P
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Re: Redline please!

Postby Kodian » Tue Jan 20, 2015 6:00 am

kootra wrote:The body is too big compared to the head, or the head could be bigger. Also, it depends from character to character, but the legs are too long. (Sorry, I can't redline right now, I might do it later)

A tip I learned fro another artist:
always flip your art the other direction. It helps you see mistakes or things that might look silly. Then flip it back and make corrections. :P


Well, the head was actually larger, but I thought it was too large so I drew it smaller.. but thanks anyway
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Re: Redline please!

Postby RenaiRoa » Wed Jan 21, 2015 5:34 am

I think your style looks absolutely amazing just the way it is :b


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Re: Redline please!

Postby Kodian » Thu Jan 22, 2015 2:26 am

RenaiRoa wrote:I think your style looks absolutely amazing just the way it is :b


Thank you ^^ I like my style, too, haha. But there's still some work around the anatomy that needs to be done, though.
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Re: Redline please!

Postby Kodian » Thu May 28, 2015 10:06 pm

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Re: Redline please!

Postby The Orphaner » Fri Aug 07, 2015 1:43 pm

Its perfect!!!! I wanna color it!!!!!!!
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Re: Redline please!

Postby Kodian » Mon Aug 10, 2015 6:07 am

Firestar<3 wrote:Its perfect!!!! I wanna color it!!!!!!!


I've improved a lot since then, and, um, I have a deviantart account. There are a couple of linearts of mine, and I'm sure you'd like them.

Here's a link to one of them; http://killingnightmare01.deviantart.co ... -549333378
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Re: Redline please!

Postby The Orphaner » Mon Aug 10, 2015 1:03 pm

¤AvivA¤ wrote:
Firestar<3 wrote:Its perfect!!!! I wanna color it!!!!!!!


I've improved a lot since then, and, um, I have a deviantart account. There are a couple of linearts of mine, and I'm sure you'd like them.

Here's a link to one of them; http://killingnightmare01.deviantart.co ... -549333378


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