Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer [CLOSED]

[Arcaii]

Image/Description:

He also has a large scar on his back left leg, the leg is twisted with very little fur. The paw is mangled.
Name: Harepaw
Gender: Tom
Clan: None yet. Something in very thick woods.
Rank: Apprentice / Elder
*Honorary elder, he was made an elder at 10 moons. See below. (He's only 20 moons now)
Personality/Skills:
Calm, friendly, he's the kind of cat everyone likes to go too. The apprentices love to go to him for advice as he was a very skilled cat when he was an actual apprentice. When his leg isn't hurting as much he can still show them basic crouches and other moves but not struggles with anything more advanced. He was definitely a -claw cat before the accident and loved the thrill of the fight. Now he worries about his clan in battles and such, he often feels guilty about not being able to fight beside his clanmates. He feels like he is a burden as the other elders all served there clan and earned there rest, he feels like he hasn't given enough and doesn't deserve a life of relaxing.

*I need more, I know this, I'm just not sure where to go with his character.
Important Notes:
Harepaws mentor fell pregnant while training him. Her mate became his new mentor. While out hunting they heard reports of foxes in the camp and raced back. A fox was attacking his old mentor and her mate was prepared to get in the way. Harepaw got there first, as a kit he had never known his father and didn't want more kits to experiance that. The fox broke his leg twisting it and shredding his paw. The wound and break were not fixable and so now he lives in the elders den.

Alright, onto work!

Name Type: Traditional
Name Reasoning: I think that, to be kinder to him, he should at least get a warrior's name, or a rename. I can't think of a reason for him to stay Harepaw through his whole life.
Alternate Name: Twistedfoot/Brokenfoot. Both names describe his injury.

Character Assessment: Poor thing. Hopefully he can find some way to be useful to the Clan other than helping apprentices (such as patching up dens or watching kits).
Anyway, he's a really solid character. I'm interested to see whether he loses his self-loathing or if it'll chase him through his whole life.
Character Suggestions: None!

[I r o n.]

Image/Description: A muscular pale ginger (I beleive) cat or here
Name: Sandheart
Gender: Tom
Clan: Someday, he shall be in a Clan,
Rank: Deputy
Personality/Skills: First of all, Sandheart is a confident, strong and nobel cat. He is not afraid to stand up for what he beleives in, nor to challenges. He is also quite strickt and bossy, but if you really get to know him, he can be kind and soft at times, but normally he is how he is.
Important Notes: Murr, I've been thinking about a backstory, but..

[no longer here]

Image/Description: jet black tom with a large russet patch of fur on his chest and green-brown eyes
Name: robinfur (-leap, -tail)
Gender: tom
Clan: fanclan
Rank: medicine cat
Personality/Skills: moody, selfless, quick learner, great climber, can jump really high
Important Notes: robinfur did not want to become a medicine cat. when he was very young, he aspired to be like the warriors. robinfur practiced with his litter mates and the other kits in the nursery; pretending to be brave warriors in different situations. he complained and complained that he couldn't be made an apprentice earlier, so in a fit of anger and frustration when his mother told him he had to wait, he snuck out. robinkit (at the time) watched the apprentices practice and picked up easily. he used the new techniques on his litter mates, and despite them being uncoordinated, he always seemed to come out as the winner. to the medicine cat (toadwhisker), robinkit looked the most promising as an "heir". due to the promising looks of being able to pick up on things easily and the selflessness he showed with his friends were all very promising. when it was time to choose an apprentice, toadwhisker picked robinkit (now robinpaw). now, he would have been ecstatic if his new name rang across the camp as a warrior apprentice. but that wasn't the case. robinpaw dreaded being a medicine cat. he took it out on his mentor; giving her attitude and often sneaking out to practice with his friends. he was mostly angry at starclan for even giving the medicine cat the idea of considering him. however, he slowly grew into the role and became proud of himself when he could remember what herbs treated what and how to apply them. robinfur still wishes he became a warrior, and if there is a battle, he is eager to jump in and help.

[Arcaii]

Image/Description: A muscular pale ginger (I beleive) cat or here
Name: Sandheart
Gender: Tom
Clan: Someday, he shall be in a Clan,
Rank: Deputy
Personality/Skills: First of all, Sandheart is a confident, strong and nobel cat. He is not afraid to stand up for what he beleives in, nor to challenges. He is also quite strickt and bossy, but if you really get to know him, he can be kind and soft at times, but normally he is how he is.
Important Notes: Murr, I've been thinking about a backstory, but..

Name Type: Traditional
Name Reasoning: His name fits him well. I ain't got much to say!
Alternate Name: None!

Character Assessment: I should note that -heart cats can be good, but they do tend to push the boundaries of morality to achieve their ends. I feel like there would be just as many -hearts in Slytherin as in Gryffindor.
Anyway, there isn't too much here that I can find an issue with.
Character Suggestions: Just keep that first bit up there in mind.

[Arcaii]

Image/Description: jet black tom with a large russet patch of fur on his chest and green-brown eyes
Name: robinfur (-leap, -tail)
Gender: tom
Clan: fanclan
Rank: medicine cat
Personality/Skills: moody, selfless, quick learner, great climber, can jump really high
Important Notes: robinfur did not want to become a medicine cat. when he was very young, he aspired to be like the warriors. robinfur practiced with his litter mates and the other kits in the nursery; pretending to be brave warriors in different situations. he complained and complained that he couldn't be made an apprentice earlier, so in a fit of anger and frustration when his mother told him he had to wait, he snuck out. robinkit (at the time) watched the apprentices practice and picked up easily. he used the new techniques on his litter mates, and despite them being uncoordinated, he always seemed to come out as the winner. to the medicine cat (toadwhisker), robinkit looked the most promising as an "heir". due to the promising looks of being able to pick up on things easily and the selflessness he showed with his friends were all very promising. when it was time to choose an apprentice, toadwhisker picked robinkit (now robinpaw). now, he would have been ecstatic if his new name rang across the camp as a warrior apprentice. but that wasn't the case. robinpaw dreaded being a medicine cat. he took it out on his mentor; giving her attitude and often sneaking out to practice with his friends. he was mostly angry at starclan for even giving the medicine cat the idea of considering him. however, he slowly grew into the role and became proud of himself when he could remember what herbs treated what and how to apply them. robinfur still wishes he became a warrior, and if there is a battle, he is eager to jump in and help.

Name Type: Misplaced Traditional
Name Reasoning: I've got to say, I'd be hard-pressed to think of any cat that could be black with a red chest. I don't think that's a thing that happens in the world.
Anyway, Robin- is meant for a reddish-brown cat, not a black one.
Alternate Name: Dippertail/Rooktail. Both prefixes describe a black cat with markings, and -tail is suggested for his agility.

Character Assessment: Thank you for reminding me to put up the Forced Into Medicine Cat Role thing on the front page.
Ignoring the fact that he is in dire need of more characterization than some history (seriously, four or five listed traits isn't much to judge on), and his unrealistic coat colors, I think this cat reaaally needs overturning. His history doesn't make any sense within the context of a Clan.
The reason a Clan exists is to give cats a better chance at the harsh life of a feral animal, which requires teamwork, which requires harmony, which requires that each cat be kept happy. If an apprentice very clearly wants to be a warrior, there's no way in all the planes of reality that the leader would force him into the medicine den. Medicine cat life is one that you have to dedicate yourself fully to, at the expense of skills such as hunting and fighting, and only cats who are truly invested in that life and are happy to make sacrifices like the inability to have a mate would be chosen for it. If the leader was stupid enough to make that decision (and I honestly can't imagine one that dumb), the medicine cat and deputy would both be quick to convince them to rectify the situation.
So the apprentice is intelligent and cares about his friends. I would hope that all Clan cats were pretty selfless, given the way their system needs to function. Just because a cat is smart doesn't mean they automatically need to become a medicine cat. A brilliant battle tactician or a genius hunter would never be forced into that position.
Character Suggestions: Just make him a warrior, and please develop his personality more. A history means nothing if your present day character is flat. Also change that marking to white.

[.kestral]

I think with Harepaw due to the cat he is he would have refused a warrior name or a rename. He kind of insists on remaining Harepaw until he earns his warrior name. If that ever happens. Which obviously is unlikely.

[Arcaii]

Ahh, I see. That's fine, then! Renames aren't a requirement.

[I r o n.]

Image/Description: A muscular pale ginger (I beleive) cat or here
Name: Sandheart
Gender: Tom
Clan: Someday, he shall be in a Clan,
Rank: Deputy
Personality/Skills: First of all, Sandheart is a confident, strong and nobel cat. He is not afraid to stand up for what he beleives in, nor to challenges. He is also quite strickt and bossy, but if you really get to know him, he can be kind and soft at times, but normally he is how he is.
Important Notes: Murr, I've been thinking about a backstory, but..

Name Type: Traditional
Name Reasoning: His name fits him well. I ain't got much to say!
Alternate Name: None!

Character Assessment: I should note that -heart cats can be good, but they do tend to push the boundaries of morality to achieve their ends. I feel like there would be just as many -hearts in Slytherin as in Gryffindor.
Anyway, there isn't too much here that I can find an issue with.
Character Suggestions: Just keep that first bit up there in mind.

Thank you, Arcaii, I'll keep that in mind C:

[roxyuniverse]

Name: Lionstrike
Description: A furry muscular golden tom
Important Notes: An adept fighter

[WilloweWolf]

Image/Description: Here.
Name: Shadowfire
Gender: Tom
Clan: Fanclan
Rank: warrior
Personality/Skills: Shadowfire is a very stubborn, fiery tom with a very strict moral. He will follow the Warrior Code if it means killing his own mate,which causes some to think him evil, even though he's really a very good cat. He's ambitious, but humble in his own way, preferring to obey orders rather than grovel in any way. He is proud of his morals, though some cats think he should lay off and be a normal clan cat. He isn't one to hide his opinion, and usually wins his arguments with the sheer force of his argument. He'll bite off the head, in a manner of speaking, of any cat who opposes his morals, and the apprentices don't really like him because of his strict rules. He's a very good fighter, if not the best hunter(partly because his pelt stands out a lot in the green of the forest).
Important Notes: