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by dkb02 » Sat Jan 03, 2015 7:03 am
Gotta leave soon, but figured I'd post the new lines:

PPS. What do you guys think? Be honest, looking to see if it needs corrections. These little guys can be found in Fluff Fields or the Cloud Kingdom once they're released!
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by elizae » Sat Jan 03, 2015 7:12 am
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So cute! Reminds me of a squirrel....
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by Bella278436 » Sat Jan 03, 2015 7:17 am
dkb02 wrote:Gotta leave soon, but figured I'd post the new lines:

PPS. What do you guys think? Be honest, looking to see if it needs corrections. These little guys can be found in Fluff Fields or the Cloud Kingdom once they're released!
hm.. Maybe make the tail a bit smaller, it seems even bigger than the adults tail, and try making the body a bit smaller. Also, maybe try making the outlines just a bit thinner, the lines for the head/body are a lot thicker than those compared to the adults?
these seem a bit too big compared to the adults...

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by isopod » Sat Jan 03, 2015 7:18 am
Bella278436 wrote:dkb02 wrote:Gotta leave soon, but figured I'd post the new lines:

PPS. What do you guys think? Be honest, looking to see if it needs corrections. These little guys can be found in Fluff Fields or the Cloud Kingdom once they're released!
hm.. Maybe make the tail a bit smaller, it seems even bigger than the adults tail, and try making the body a bit smaller. Also, maybe try making the outlines just a bit thinner, the lines for the head/body are a lot thicker than those compared to the adults?
these seem a bit too big compared to the adults...

Agreed, maybe just the tail and a bit on the lines. But other than that, its so cute.
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by dkb02 » Sat Jan 03, 2015 11:11 am
Leaping Stones wrote:@dkb02
So cute! Reminds me of a squirrel....
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Thanks, I still might fix the PPS a little. Also, I pm'd Fitters, and they said you guys will probably still breed.
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by toyotathon » Sat Jan 03, 2015 11:57 am
dkb02 wrote:Gotta leave soon, but figured I'd post the new lines:

PPS. What do you guys think? Be honest, looking to see if it needs corrections. These little guys can be found in Fluff Fields or the Cloud Kingdom once they're released!
It kinda looks like its missing a ear. Also, for Cloud Kingdom ones, you should make them have wings

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by dkb02 » Sat Jan 03, 2015 12:41 pm
Bella278436 wrote:dkb02 wrote:Gotta leave soon, but figured I'd post the new lines:

PPS. What do you guys think? Be honest, looking to see if it needs corrections. These little guys can be found in Fluff Fields or the Cloud Kingdom once they're released!
hm.. Maybe make the tail a bit smaller, it seems even bigger than the adults tail, and try making the body a bit smaller. Also, maybe try making the outlines just a bit thinner, the lines for the head/body are a lot thicker than those compared to the adults?
these seem a bit too big compared to the adults...

Okay! And also the tail is the same as the adults...
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