Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer [CLOSED]

[Arcaii]

Ah, thank you! I was beginning to plan that arc, and was starting to wonder if it would work or not. They have good knowledge of kittypets, so they'd be extremely negative towards this kit, especially since it reveals he is not only from another clan but of kittypet ancestry. The cat's arc is important to the central arc, so I wanted to make sure it wasn't too outlandish.

That sounds good, then. Over time, the Clan may get used to him, especially if he proves himself to be a rather competent warrior, but the other Clans would probs hate him regardless.

[Arcaii]

{hello again! could I get an analysis on this cat? I'm mainly looking for a harsh personality critique, as well as some ideas for flaws and quirks that might enhance her character.}
name: Goldshimmer/Goldstar
note: I know her name isn't very good; I created her when I first read warriors when I was younger. Long story short(ish), years ago I was a part of a warriors fanclub on another site where the members joined as 'apprentices' and received warrior names after a few months. I chose the name Goldpaw, and she was later named Goldshimmer by the 'leader', and I eventually became the leader 'Goldstar' myself. She's been with me a while, so I'd rather not change her name, even though it's definitely non-traditional.
gender: female
clan: fanclan
description: Goldstar is a slightly small, green-eyed, golden-furred Maine Coon with a white tail-tip, white paws, and a white underbelly and muzzle.
personality: Goldstar tends to keep quiet in order to avoid a confrontation. She's also a strategic planner, and it bothers her when others don't think before acting. Usually preferring to be alone or with a few close friends, her leadership position is a bit overwhelming for Goldstar, but she knows that she must do what is best for her clan. She may seem, at times, tentative and passive, but she knows how to command cats with her riveting words, even though she speaks with a calm and quiet voice. Goldstar may also have a hard time accepting a mistake on her part, and will feel shame and self-resentment even after other cats have forgotten her error.
skills: Goldstar has a knack for swimming and fishing. She also loves to hunt, although her skill isn't particularly above average.

Comin' right up.



Name Type: Lyrical
Name Reasoning: As you said, it's not a very traditional name, and I do understand if you want to keep it. Of course, me being a traditionalist, I will recommend something else.
Although, I have to say. Goldstar.
Heheheheh.
Alternate Name: Since Goldenstream isn't exactly, uh...appropriate, Cloverstream/Morningstream. Both prefixes describe a golden cat, and -stream is for her swimming and fishing ability.

Character Assessment: I mean, honestly, I can't see anything wrong with her.
I'm genuinely surprised! She's a pretty good character. She has some faults - being passive and self-berating when she makes a mistake - as well as some virtues - plans ahead and is willing to sacrifice her own comfort. You did ask me for some suggestions, though, so here we go.
Character Suggestions: You have a good base for her, so it's time to build up on that. Decide on exactly how passive she is - is she willing to back down from a war, or does she just let any lazy warrior get away with not contributing? How well does she earn her status, and is there anyone who thinks there should be a different leader? Does she do well under stress, or put up an act that hides her terror of the situation? How quickly does her job age her? What makes her stop, look around, and smile, bringing up a sincere belief that this is what she was meant to do, however temporary the feeling is?

[Arcaii]

Image/Description: xXx
Name: Emberheart
Gender: female
Clan: fanclan
Rank: warrior
Personality/Skills:

Emberheart, the twenty moon old warrior. This youngster is easily influenced by her emotions-which is how she got her warrior name. Emberheart was born to two warriors by the names of Robintail and Blackclaw; she was the only kit of the litter that her mother bore. Contrary to the stereotype, Emberheart was not spoiled as a kit; In fact, her parents pushed her even harder because of it. This she-cat has a keen sense of right versus wrong and to accompany these strong ideals, Emberheart is also rather outspoken about everything in general. She'll say what she's thinking without hesitation. Her words are always painstakingly honest; she's a heartbreaker who wears her heart on her sleeve one could say. Her mother died from green cough after Emberheart became a warrior but the words of Robintail still echo in Emberheart's mind- 'learn not to care, emberheart' and oh, Emberheart tries. This warrior tries not to let her emotions influence her actions but such a thing is easier said than done. Honest to a fault and compassionate, Emberheart makes an adequate warrior but she's still quite young and immature. Naive and innocent, Emberheart still has much to learn.

Important Notes: Thank you so much! I hoped I used the -heart suffix correctly but please let me know if I misused it. Also, I think the cat in the picture is a tortoiseshell, hence the prefix Ember- but I'm not 100% sure. Again, please correct me if I'm wrong; I'm not the best when it comes to these kind of things. uwu

Don't fret about messing up, man. The important part is that you're trying to do it right!

Name Type: Traditional
Name Reasoning: The cat in the picture is actually a brown tabby, from what I see. I do know that you're going for a tortie, though, so her name fits her just fine.
Alternate Name: None, just change the picture to a tortie. (A quick Google image search provides plenty of examples.)

Character Assessment: She's golden! Or...black and brown? Whatever.
She fits the -heart qualities near perfectly. Most -hearters don't try to stifle their emotions, but she clearly just feels too much to properly silence herself, so I think it works out fine.
Character Suggestions: Decide on her precise moral lining. -heart cats can be just as idealistically wrong as they are right - the only requirement is that they strongly believe in what they say 100%.

[Dalek]

{hello again! could I get an analysis on this cat? I'm mainly looking for a harsh personality critique, as well as some ideas for flaws and quirks that might enhance her character.}
name: Goldshimmer/Goldstar
note: I know her name isn't very good; I created her when I first read warriors when I was younger. Long story short(ish), years ago I was a part of a warriors fanclub on another site where the members joined as 'apprentices' and received warrior names after a few months. I chose the name Goldpaw, and she was later named Goldshimmer by the 'leader', and I eventually became the leader 'Goldstar' myself. She's been with me a while, so I'd rather not change her name, even though it's definitely non-traditional.
gender: female
clan: fanclan
description: Goldstar is a slightly small, green-eyed, golden-furred Maine Coon with a white tail-tip, white paws, and a white underbelly and muzzle.
personality: Goldstar tends to keep quiet in order to avoid a confrontation. She's also a strategic planner, and it bothers her when others don't think before acting. Usually preferring to be alone or with a few close friends, her leadership position is a bit overwhelming for Goldstar, but she knows that she must do what is best for her clan. She may seem, at times, tentative and passive, but she knows how to command cats with her riveting words, even though she speaks with a calm and quiet voice. Goldstar may also have a hard time accepting a mistake on her part, and will feel shame and self-resentment even after other cats have forgotten her error.
skills: Goldstar has a knack for swimming and fishing. She also loves to hunt, although her skill isn't particularly above average.

Comin' right up.



Name Type: Lyrical
Name Reasoning: As you said, it's not a very traditional name, and I do understand if you want to keep it. Of course, me being a traditionalist, I will recommend something else.
Although, I have to say. Goldstar.
Heheheheh.
Alternate Name: Since Goldenstream isn't exactly, uh...appropriate, Cloverstream/Morningstream. Both prefixes describe a golden cat, and -stream is for her swimming and fishing ability.

Character Assessment: I mean, honestly, I can't see anything wrong with her.
I'm genuinely surprised! She's a pretty good character. She has some faults - being passive and self-berating when she makes a mistake - as well as some virtues - plans ahead and is willing to sacrifice her own comfort. You did ask me for some suggestions, though, so here we go.
Character Suggestions: You have a good base for her, so it's time to build up on that. Decide on exactly how passive she is - is she willing to back down from a war, or does she just let any lazy warrior get away with not contributing? How well does she earn her status, and is there anyone who thinks there should be a different leader? Does she do well under stress, or put up an act that hides her terror of the situation? How quickly does her job age her? What makes her stop, look around, and smile, bringing up a sincere belief that this is what she was meant to do, however temporary the feeling is?

Thank you so much, I'll definitely take this into consideration! I love the Morning- suffix, although both Goldstream and Morningstream kinda give me the same picture, haha.
You get a gold star for your help aha

[Arcaii]

Goldstream (or its cousin Yellowstream) isn't particularly recommended, mostly because there's only one type of water that's gold in color. Just like how Brown-nose and Blackface aren't recommended either.

[toadstool]

image;; bleep
name;; _cloud
age;; twenty-eight moons
gender;; tom
clan;; fanclan
personality/skills;;
_cloud is a laid-back and chill tom. most cats in he clan now him as to be calm, and rarely raises his voice or looses his temper. he is a very patient tom, and is most likely an overall good mentor. _cloud has a firm voice for cats that are obnoxious and don't listen! and makes cats think about what they have done. you can call him slightly mysterious. he prefers to be at the edge of camp after he has finished with his up duties, sunning himself or just taking a nap. the black and white tom has issues in expressing his feelings. he is rather stubborn in doing many overly exciting activities. _cloud has average skills of a warrior, not really talented in hunting or fighting.

[AnimalJamVIN]

Image/Description: X.
Name: smokefoot.
Gender: male.
Clan: shadowclan.
Rank: warrior.
Personality/Skills:

Personality:
Generous
Vigilant
Polite
Clingy
Finicky
Skittish
Cowardly
Credulous
Dependent

Personality Summary: if there is one thing that defines smokefoot, it would definitely involve being skittish. This cat has a reputation for overreacting at the sight of a frog suddenly appearing, stiffened like a board when confronted by a much bigger cat and has more then once hid behind anything that's close to him when hearing a chirp overhead. While being his overly vigilant self, smokefoot is also very prone to having irritable habits (like having a tendency to twitch, constantly shed fur when nervous (which is all the time), bite his forelegs and tail to force down his scared squeals or screeches (which is all the time)), the kind that can get out of hand if you don't have the tom within your sight. Despite smokefoot being the type to be scared of even his own shadow, this doesn't make up for his entire personality. When given the time to calm down or not be so scared of everything, the tom will act quite polite and generous. He is and always will be a gentleman, not seeing why letting the mollies walk out of camp during a gathering is so bad and constantly being the respectful male when confronted by the leaders of deputies. smokefoot can be quite the giver, always offering his fresh kill to the hungry and weak, waiting for everyone to fill up the cozy thick warm, while he receives the stringy thin bedding, and while it's easy to take advantage of this trait of the smokey colored cat, smokefoot won't mind. He can also get very clingy, but that doesn't mean he doesn't know a thing or two about privacy. He can be quite finicky when choosing his food, his usual choice being a frog or rat, for some particular reason, he enjoys those with a disgusting or strange flavor, finding the taste unique. smokefoot is also very gullible. While he's not innocent, that doesn't make it hard for him to believe anything.

Skills:
Running
Slinking
Climbing

Skills Summary: Smokefoot is an excellent climber, being able to nimbly go up a tree with deadly silence before using his long tail to help him balance while walking across a thin branch. Smokefoot also uses his ability to walk and slink around silently to confront his enemies in the shadows without them knowing (using his dark pelt color as another advantage), before quickly and swiftly dashing forward to bring them down, only to have the rest of his clanmates perform their own way of bringing down their enemies with their claws and fangs. But he doesn't have -foot in his name for nothing. Smokefoot, while being known for his constantly scared behavior, is also known for his extreme speed and ability to run without tiring too quickly. This is a way for him to catch prey swiftly and to dash forward to take down his opponent, no matter what size they are (unless they are dog sized x3), due to his speed giving him somewhat strength, despite his lanky thin structure.

Important Notes: nope.

[Arcaii]

image;; bleep
name;; _cloud
age;; twenty-eight moons
gender;; tom
clan;; fanclan
personality/skills;;
_cloud is a laid-back and chill tom. most cats in he clan now him as to be calm, and rarely raises his voice or looses his temper. he is a very patient tom, and is most likely an overall good mentor. _cloud has a firm voice for cats that are obnoxious and don't listen! and makes cats think about what they have done. you can call him slightly mysterious. he prefers to be at the edge of camp after he has finished with his up duties, sunning himself or just taking a nap. the black and white tom has issues in expressing his feelings. he is rather stubborn in doing many overly exciting activities. _cloud has average skills of a warrior, not really talented in hunting or fighting.

Sorry for the wait.

Name Suggestion: Garlicpelt/Frostfur, or Loonpelt/Swiftfur (suffixes interchangeable).
Name Reasoning: With the picture, it's a little hard to tell if he's vast-majority white, or if he just has black patches along his back and tail, and it's more like 75-25. If it's the former, go for Garlic- or Frost-, and if it's the latter, use Loon- or Swift-.
Also, it might just be a miscommunication, but he seems more energetic than a -cloud cat would be, since he doesn't tolerate annoying cats, and the wording on the second to last sentence suggests that he actually does participate in exciting events (though I'm 90% certain you didn't mean it to sound like that). If you want to keep -cloud, I suggest making him more tolerant, yet brutally honest ("Mosquitopaw, that's very uninteresting. I'd like to nap now," he says in the most relaxed voice ever).

Character Assessment: I've got nothing! Lately, a lot o you have been sending in very solid characters. I think it's interesting that he's a pretty laid-back and calm tom, but has trouble showing off how he feels. I imagine that's due to him knowing that the Clan sees him as the relaxed cat, and so if he ever is really stressed or emotional, he doesn't want to jeopardize that ranking. Maybe he feels some conflict or resentment about the position his name puts him in?
Character Suggestions: None!

[Arcaii]

Image/Description: X.
Name: smokefoot.
Gender: male.
Clan: shadowclan.
Rank: warrior.
Personality/Skills:

Personality:
Generous
Vigilant
Polite
Clingy
Finicky
Skittish
Cowardly
Credulous
Dependent

Personality Summary: if there is one thing that defines smokefoot, it would definitely involve being skittish. This cat has a reputation for overreacting at the sight of a frog suddenly appearing, stiffened like a board when confronted by a much bigger cat and has more then once hid behind anything that's close to him when hearing a chirp overhead. While being his overly vigilant self, smokefoot is also very prone to having irritable habits (like having a tendency to twitch, constantly shed fur when nervous (which is all the time), bite his forelegs and tail to force down his scared squeals or screeches (which is all the time)), the kind that can get out of hand if you don't have the tom within your sight. Despite smokefoot being the type to be scared of even his own shadow, this doesn't make up for his entire personality. When given the time to calm down or not be so scared of everything, the tom will act quite polite and generous. He is and always will be a gentleman, not seeing why letting the mollies walk out of camp during a gathering is so bad and constantly being the respectful male when confronted by the leaders of deputies. smokefoot can be quite the giver, always offering his fresh kill to the hungry and weak, waiting for everyone to fill up the cozy thick warm, while he receives the stringy thin bedding, and while it's easy to take advantage of this trait of the smokey colored cat, smokefoot won't mind. He can also get very clingy, but that doesn't mean he doesn't know a thing or two about privacy. He can be quite finicky when choosing his food, his usual choice being a frog or rat, for some particular reason, he enjoys those with a disgusting or strange flavor, finding the taste unique. smokefoot is also very gullible. While he's not innocent, that doesn't make it hard for him to believe anything.

Skills:
Running
Slinking
Climbing

Skills Summary: Smokefoot is an excellent climber, being able to nimbly go up a tree with deadly silence before using his long tail to help him balance while walking across a thin branch. Smokefoot also uses his ability to walk and slink around silently to confront his enemies in the shadows without them knowing (using his dark pelt color as another advantage), before quickly and swiftly dashing forward to bring them down, only to have the rest of his clanmates perform their own way of bringing down their enemies with their claws and fangs. But he doesn't have -foot in his name for nothing. Smokefoot, while being known for his constantly scared behavior, is also known for his extreme speed and ability to run without tiring too quickly. This is a way for him to catch prey swiftly and to dash forward to take down his opponent, no matter what size they are (unless they are dog sized x3), due to his speed giving him somewhat strength, despite his lanky thin structure.

Important Notes: nope.

What an interesting color!

Name Type: Traditional
Name Reasoning: I'm starting to see what others mean when they say we might need a suffix detailing both skills in climbing and speed.
Anyway, his name fits him perfectly. I don't have too much to say here, so let's keep going!
Alternate Name: None!

Character Assessment: Ahaha! I love this guy.
I appreciate that you haven't made his whole personality "scaredy cat", and that he has some depth to him. I don't think there's too much to say, other than well done!
Character Suggestions: I do definitely think there should be some weight and reason behind his being so jumpy - is he just sensitive to sounds, or does he have really terrible nightmares that makes him scared of the dark? Something along those lines.

[I r o n.]

Cute, right? so. I noticed that eye, and, one is blue, and I beleive the other is this dark brown, but I can't tell if I was right? Would this picture be descriptive enough for a review, because I already plotted out everything. (the eye makes me confused)