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Advoker of life

Postby Offended Cockatiel » Fri Nov 26, 2010 4:16 pm

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* Adovoker as a pup was very shy and caring, though that was only as a pup, but as she grew up her life was filled with heart ache and pain, she started macking less contact with others and feeling sorry for herself though life was horrid for her easy to see endearing colors made her valnerable to preditors. The way she felt now related to her past, as a pup she was teased constantely for her colors then a thunder struck killed her mom and she though it was because she had run away in fear of being teased all her life. Her father had left at her birth and her sibling all ran away as thiere mom died leaving her all alone fully though she though they all had came together aftewards leaving her out of the group. Now she travels through around forests and human homes trying to make herself comforteble, she has gone through alout of trouble and yurning to get to a not even safe enogh safe zone to be her Haven. Even though she does not know she will have an encridble 'mate to be' soon wich she falls in love with though he's reluctent he takes her in and help he in her waekest state making him fall for her aswell. Her life was horrid as she believed all the horrid facts and doubted all the Lucky one's one Christmas Eve shje met Holly another Scene Wolf wich helped her but got lost in the porgress though she will find the all soon as a *Miricle* mite just happen to bigin, she will find Kin that were lost,A Lover and Mate to have pups with, pups to Love and get Love from and also a Best Friend wich will stick to her forever as even though she mite look different she is still great in her own Speciel and Unique ways.

* Her eyes glistened in the moonlight as she padded through the brush nstenctecly her tail drooping as it usaully did, her paws were wet from the dew and she shivered in ther cold night air then she sw something some berrys to be pracise they were big and juicy beside some samll and shriveled ones, near a cave whier she herd paw steps and other noises. She ran towards the berrys and glugged down only one practically chocking on it as she swallowed then sigh
ed but then a pang of pain went through her as she fell to the ground and rolled only slightly then stopped as a Male Wolf stepped infront of her with a fierce look "what idd you do" he asked her with a growl. She was on her back so she only put her paws to her muzzle as her stomach grumbled in pain though he just ghlared at her "look now...yo've just eaten the posioness ones...what am I sapposed to do know...help you...no you can take care of yoreself he said" his tone firey ith anger. She obbayed instantely and stummbled up as he walked into his cave like den and stared out in secret at her worried, she wobbled after a few steos then fell beforegetting up and the falling again thumping hard into the ground, he could'nt look so he waked in but turned around as he herd a wimper the padded out as he herd a whine. He saw her laying on her stomach her head covered by her paws as she stared to cry an the tears soaked the Earth. "COme on now" he said sympathetically trying to help though it barely did anything good though help hr brocken heart only a teeny tiny bit, as it had to much pain to uphold in one sitting.

* She winced and grouned lightly as she layed theire and as he watched, he could see her weakend state was getting worse so he dragged her into the cave and walked out he ran swiflty into a thistle bush wich seamed stupid he knew but thiere were some helpfull herbs in thiere smoe whiere. When he saw the herbs he grabbed them and ran out happy to get away from the scartching plant. he put the herbs down and said "eat" angerly as he saw her trying to get up, but she ignored him shacking her head slightly as she doubted that would heal her, what made him think she could trust this other Wolf. She grunted and tried to walk out but he stoped her head butting her only enough to make her swirve back into the Den and land on her back she started crying and whined and so he felt terrible. He put his snout up but could'nt stop feeling sad so he sat down beside her and licked her tears away feeling a pang of embaresment crawl up his emotional system and make him blush, though he thought the last thing she'd care about was this. Tough even she blushed and then shreiked at his tounues light touch "oh relax" He said annoyed at her wich made her growl and open hers eyes and as her stomach rumbled macking her cringe. he looked at her sadely "please" he said but as he saw it was'nt working he added "or-or i'll kill you" that definetly got her suprised. Her eyes widened as she finally spoke "then why don't you" her voice was dead at thetime but seamed to dare him aswell wich made him seam disturbed, his face was exprecionless as he relized she must have been through alout to have wanted to die. Her voice was sweet and came out like a melody wich was odd towards him though it aslo made him turn red and pink at the thought of him liking anything to do with her.

* Adovkers eyes seamed still as the untained Male Wolf's widened even more his gaze seaming to hold hers she stammered "what..." oddely making him swiftly look away a dash of anger bluring his reality his eye puchignated into a cold but burning with a fire the fire of anger that is as the slits informed a glare and he turned his head back at an odd angle to meat only her left eye as she was trying not to look at him but even though she tried dearly it was no uce, so she ended up swivling her head to lock eyes ounce more with a stirning to the sight of each other. She closed her eyes and so gave the young Male a chance to stand and pad over to her, and as he sat down his fur brushing against hers another tear stroked down her cheek wich made her sniffle opening her eyes as she tried to remain calm. he tried again "please..." this time she nipped at it slowly not daring to touvh her toungue to it any more then what was to come, the red and green herb was disatstefull and had a punginte aroma to it the strange odder coresed her nose buds making her shift uncomfortebly in her place. "I know it's bad but..." she did'nt listen shetook a few more secounds to look at the disgrace of a herb and pulled it into her mouth and muncing on it slitely before gulping it down weairly.

*Thiere you go" murrmered the male instinclavly,she felt childish near him now and snarled. "Well...um....thanks" she stammered,she hated that word no one said it to her and vise-versa. She stood up and wobbled closer to the door,but fell to the ground he seamed to chuckle as her eyes slowly closed 'what did he do!?'she though finnaly falling into a trance like dream. The amle the pulled her up by the scruff whispering "if I had told you the herb did this you would have never ate it": he mummbled furiosly. He pushed her to a rock a little bit,high and looked at her dead like limp body,no movments no fur corresing the rock. Why was he looking at her?he turned away padding out,he took a sgrivled berry and gulped it down slowly but surly. "Ahhhh now that satisfies" he mummbled with a sigh,though his eyes shifted to her,he couldn't get her off his mind. What had the so called herb done to her?Death maybe?Is this the last we'll here of Adoker!?

No of course not!Advoker woke up slowly and drouzly,she saw him laying out side some meat in his jaws,dear meat her mouth watered but theire lay another bit of the dear. He was proabably saving that for later. She tip-toed softly and the pounced bitting at his neck,he kicked with his hind legs and threw her off,not knowing his own strength he even sent her hurdling to the rock wall of the caves outer side. "Oh-oh sorry!" he said fearcly "but you were attacking me" he growled "why,why did you droune me,make me sleep?Why?" she snarled standing up and racking her claws over his cheast. He backed away just for the claws to miss it and he chuckled as she toppled over,was it because of the roots?She could defintetly fight more but wasn't. Why wasn't she?She blincked sleeply and thought 'stupid males,stupid,stupid,every one!Even me?' she shook her head and coughed "just leave me alone" she grunted laying down,he did what she told him to but pushed the bit of dear left towards her. She bit into it only twice before going back into the cave and sleeping. The next time she woke up she slowly padded out the dear cascass still theire,he was asleep now and she gave a warm smile then shook her head. No this was not good! She yawaned and herd paw steps then theire they came like a huracane of memory. She gasped and they almost didn't recognize her. She didn't even rember she only rembered she knew them somehow.

Two hyena's stepped through the brush and cocked thiere heads,towards her "I was right!thieres meat!" growled one,as Advoker nudged the mystery wolf away....to be countinued...
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Re: Advoker of life

Postby Offended Cockatiel » Sat Nov 27, 2010 7:50 am

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Re: Advoker of life

Postby Offended Cockatiel » Sat Nov 27, 2010 8:21 am

(Does any one like it...I'll explain hername later in the story...but does any one think it's good...or have Any Comments.)
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Re: Advoker of life

Postby sad magic » Sat Nov 27, 2010 11:57 am

(Please continue! :thumbup: )
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Re: Advoker of life

Postby Offended Cockatiel » Sat Nov 27, 2010 12:02 pm

Yayz...okay.)
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Re: Advoker of life

Postby Offended Cockatiel » Sat Nov 27, 2010 12:28 pm

I added more.
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Re: Advoker of life

Postby Offended Cockatiel » Sun Nov 28, 2010 4:55 am

Hewo.
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Re: Advoker of life

Postby Offended Cockatiel » Sun Nov 28, 2010 11:24 am

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Re: Advoker of life

Postby Offended Cockatiel » Sat Dec 04, 2010 6:26 am

Kind of aq *Spoiler* ... viewtopic.php?f=32&t=356018&p=8244065#p8244065 ...of the Family.
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Re: Advoker of life

Postby silvanelves » Sat Dec 04, 2010 10:42 am

awesomely awesome!
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