Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer [CLOSED]

[Altias]

Thank you very much again! I appreciate it.

Ah, okay! I think I'll just change their pictures then. I chose the prefix Ant- to describe his small stature but it would probably make more sense if I switched out the picture to a cat with a black pelt. And thank you for the suggestion for Duckpaw! And yes, I totally understand that! I'm really not a fan of the characters who get 'bullied' in clans; I was just looking for something to add to her personality. Thank you so so much; I'll be sure to make note of the things you mentioned!!

It's no problem at all! I'm really glad to help - let me know if you need anything else!

[trees |-/]

Name: BlackFlower
Description: black she cat with green colored eyes
Important Notes:

[Altias]

Name: BlackFlower
Description: black she cat with green colored eyes
Important Notes:

Hello!

Blackflower

Name Suggestion: Blackpelt/Blackfur.
Name Reasoning: Black- is pretty straightforward, so it works fine on your cat. However, -flower is reserved for cats who are skilled with caring for kits and who often have litters. There are no notes that include this, so she gets -pelt or -fur, as they represent a cat's lack of notable skill or trait. (If you want to keep -flower, you should probably add those traits.)

[toadstool]

name:
beetlenose
description:
small black tom with amber eyes and a small flash of white on his chest
clan:
fanclans cx
rank:
warrior
personality/skills:
beetlenose is a chill back and relaxed warrior. he is always calm and just goes with the flow he volunteers in patrols often as he likes the gentle sway of trees and the shuffling of prey. the black tom is an okay hunter as well as tactics, but he is not good at agility and balancing. his special trait is tracking, thus his suffix.

[Altias]

name:
beetlenose
description:
small black tom with amber eyes and a small flash of white on his chest
clan:
fanclans cx
rank:
warrior
personality/skills:
beetlenose is a chill back and relaxed warrior. he is always calm and just goes with the flow he volunteers in patrols often as he likes the gentle sway of trees and the shuffling of prey. the black tom is an okay hunter as well as tactics, but he is not good at agility and balancing. his special trait is tracking, thus his suffix.

Hiya!

Beetlenose

Name Suggestion: None.
Name Reasoning: His name is perfect for him! I could easily see him as a -cloud cat if he weren't such a skilled tracker. (You may also want to change 'flash' to 'locket', as that's the appropriate term for a white patch on the chest!)

Character Rating: 10/10
Character Reasoning: I don't see anything much wrong with him - you did a good job! You might want to give him quirks, such as a normal routine he may take, or habits he has, like wiping excess mud off of his paws before entering a den or sniffing someone before greeting them vocally.

[prince.]

full character review for Creekpaw. Sorry for the confusion

[Altias]

Please suggest a warrior name uwu? He may be exiled before that happens though.



~Creekpaw~

F o r T h e R e c o r d

Username;; You guys all know me :3
Nickname;; Perceive or Sparrow
Literacy;; Literate

T h e B a s i c s

Cat Name;; "hey there, the name's Creekpaw,"
Cat Nickname;; "Just Creek will do,"
Gender;; Male
Fur Colour;; Silver/White American shorthair tabby
Eye Colour;; Green with grey flecks
Rank;; Apprentice


D e l v i n g D e e p e r

Personality;; Creekpaw is an outgoing apprentice who strives to be better than the rest. His ambition is good fuel, although behind his friendly mask, there is a stone cold cat who is not afraid to kill to get what he wants. He takes everything as a sign of weakness - and will act upon that chance.
History (Optional);; To be announced
Likes;;
x Being with others
x Tree hopping
x Sparrows
Dislikes;;
x Heights
x Frogs



L o v e L i f e

Crush;; None
Mate;; None
Kits;; None
Other ;; Biological brother of Cosmicpaw

Alright, let's do it!

Creekpaw

Name Suggestion: Ashfur/pelt.
Name Reasoning: Creeks can be all sorts of colors depending on time of day, season, weather, pollution, and the makeup of the earth. It makes a very poor prefix for this reason. He has no notable skills, so he earns -pelt or -fur. Ash- is for a gray tabby, usually a paler color, last I checked.

Character Rating: 6/10
Character Reasoning: His personality is mixed. In one instance he can be friendly, while in another he's nothing short of an aggressive cat - which is not what a Clan would accept. The fact that he'll be friendly and cutthroat in the same instance is really contradictory and you will want to refine this a lot more - in honesty, it'd probably manifest more as an irritation that grows in him from his apprentice moons, where he feels general annoyance at others who mess up or act "foolishly" (and he would more than likely give himself a hard time for all of his slip-ups, despite being an apprentice who still needs to learn!).

If you wanted to go with an exile ending for this kid, you might be better off making any sort of murder an accident, one where he lashes out without thinking, out of a pure "leave me alone and stop talking to me about my weaknesses!" sort of deal. I imagine him as a cat who has a bad time giving forethought to things other than to try and map out a perfect road to success, often disregarding (or not being aware at all) of what kind of emotions he may stomp on. He may realize it at some point and feel badly for it, but in the end he may force his self-imposed ideals onto these emotions to keep him from detaching from his goal.

Just try not to give him a weird, two-faced "friendly but can be aggressive" temperament and allow him to be an easily-frustrated, self-loathing cat who tries his best to impose his ideals on absolutely everyone, despite the fact that no cat is perfect. Find a way for these ideals to plant themselves in his mind (for example, his mother may note, quite often, how a warrior must not be x, or y, or z, and must absolutely be a, b, or c - he may assume this means there is no alternate definition of a 'good warrior' than to do good and bring home prey).

Hope this helps!

[Free Fall]

Image/Description:
Physicaly, Mosswhisker has always been a tad bit undersized however she is still sort of finely built; with long legs, ears, whiskers as well as short but decently sharp claws and teeth as well as a tail of medium length. As an apprentice she was attacked on what was supposed to be a quick check on the borders with her past mentor and as a result; both of her ears are more shredded then most of the cats in the clan. In addition she also has a few very fine scars upon her muzzle as well as few others hidden under her pelt. In terms of coloration I imagine her to be is a dark-brown she-cat that almost appears a smoky shade with multiple thin tabby stripes running along her back and on her tail the stripes on her haunches however are broken giving her a mottled appearance it that region. Her legs are a slightly darker shade with the paws being the darkest and the rest gradually lightening up with fine stripes on her legs. Her nose is a darker-mulberry shade with the insides of her ears being slightly lighter. I also imagine her eyes being an amber or pale green color.

Name: I am currently calling her Mosswhisker or Litchenwhisker (I have always liked these two prefixes although you did bring up a valid point of moss being dead . . .)
Name Reasoning: Moss; for her silky pelt texture which has since her days as a kit lost some of it’s softness and –whisker for exceptional hunting and tracking abilities.

Gender: She-cat /female
Clan: I am thinking about using her in a fan-clan for a role-play.

Rank: Warrior (Very New, 15 moons)

Personality/Skills:
Mosswhisker has always felt some sort of prejudice against her from her clan-mates. She thinks this might come from her parents as they were, “traitors” this leads her to avoid those that "outrank" her thus she is rather shy and awkward around them.This she-cat is also paranoid to some extent about being snuck up on and thus is a tad bit too cautious around the borders. She also has a habit of sneaking around, under the bushes or rolling in something else to camouflage her sent when she’s patrolling and hunting and thus some may say she sometimes stinks. Mosswhisker’s loyalty hasn't truly been tested yet however she seems to some point be very trustworthy, even with her habit of eavesdropping. She was in the past and still seems to be a push-over with how her grandmother, Thistletail, was able to largely influence her life and is very hesitant to speak up. Mosswhisker was often referred to as the elders as a sweet little kit and apprentice although she would have rather be outside hunting versus stuck inside the elders den once she becomes an apprentice. She is noted to be good around kits and (despite her past stillborn kits) would one day love to have some of her own.She is horrible at at both fighting and defending and if ever forced to fight she often uses tactics similar to catching prey on the enemy. As mentioned above I gave the suffix -whisker for her exceptional hunting and tracking abilities; I also imagine her knowing a bit about herbs due to he past visits in the medicine can den and former interest.

Important Notes: Her parents attempted to flee with her in tow and were ultimately captured and her mother was quickly executed thus, she was raised up mainly by her grandmother and has more respect for the elders then most as her grandmother was practically an elder. I imagined her briefly as a kit wanting to be a medicine cat but can't seem to deal with the blood, plus her grandmother would push her towards the path of the warrior and she would spend the first portion of her life trying to please her which would end up with her unsatisfied and although she feels freed by her grandmothers passing she can't help but feel slightly disgusted by herself for thinking so.

I would love to know exactly what I can do to improve upon her character (I'm still working on her) and so, if all you see are things that need to be fixed, just let me know (feel free to be critical). Thanks so much for the opportunity and if this is to much text please let me know.

[Altias]

Image/Description:
Physicaly, Mosswhisker has always been a tad bit undersized however she is still sort of finely built; with long legs, ears, whiskers as well as short but decently sharp claws and teeth as well as a tail of medium length. As an apprentice she was attacked on what was supposed to be a quick check on the borders with her past mentor and as a result; both of her ears are more shredded then most of the cats in the clan. In addition she also has a few very fine scars upon her muzzle as well as few others hidden under her pelt. In terms of coloration I imagine her to be is a dark-brown she-cat that almost appears a smoky shade with multiple thin tabby stripes running along her back and on her tail the stripes on her haunches however are broken giving her a mottled appearance it that region. Her legs are a slightly darker shade with the paws being the darkest and the rest gradually lightening up with fine stripes on her legs. Her nose is a darker-mulberry shade with the insides of her ears being slightly lighter. I also imagine her eyes being an amber or pale green color.

Name: I am currently calling her Mosswhisker or Litchenwhisker (I have always liked these two prefixes although you did bring up a valid point of moss being dead . . .)
Name Reasoning: Moss; for her silky pelt texture which has since her days as a kit lost some of it’s softness and –whisker for exceptional hunting and tracking abilities.

Gender: She-cat /female
Clan: I am thinking about using her in a fan-clan for a role-play.

Rank: Warrior (Very New, 15 moons)

Personality/Skills:
Mosswhisker has always felt some sort of prejudice against her from her clan-mates. She thinks this might come from her parents as they were, “traitors” this leads her to avoid those that "outrank" her thus she is rather shy and awkward around them.This she-cat is also paranoid to some extent about being snuck up on and thus is a tad bit too cautious around the borders. She also has a habit of sneaking around, under the bushes or rolling in something else to camouflage her sent when she’s patrolling and hunting and thus some may say she sometimes stinks. Mosswhisker’s loyalty hasn't truly been tested yet however she seems to some point be very trustworthy, even with her habit of eavesdropping. She was in the past and still seems to be a push-over with how her grandmother, Thistletail, was able to largely influence her life and is very hesitant to speak up. Mosswhisker was often referred to as the elders as a sweet little kit and apprentice although she would have rather be outside hunting versus stuck inside the elders den once she becomes an apprentice. She is noted to be good around kits and (despite her past stillborn kits) would one day love to have some of her own.She is horrible at at both fighting and defending and if ever forced to fight she often uses tactics similar to catching prey on the enemy. As mentioned above I gave the suffix -whisker for her exceptional hunting and tracking abilities; I also imagine her knowing a bit about herbs due to he past visits in the medicine can den and former interest.

Important Notes: Her parents attempted to flee with her in tow and were ultimately captured and her mother was quickly executed thus, she was raised up mainly by her grandmother and has more respect for the elders then most as her grandmother was practically an elder. I imagined her briefly as a kit wanting to be a medicine cat but can't seem to deal with the blood, plus her grandmother would push her towards the path of the warrior and she would spend the first portion of her life trying to please her which would end up with her unsatisfied and although she feels freed by her grandmothers passing she can't help but feel slightly disgusted by herself for thinking so.

I would love to know exactly what I can do to improve upon her character (I'm still working on her) and so, if all you see are things that need to be fixed, just let me know (feel free to be critical). Thanks so much for the opportunity and if this is to much text please let me know.

Sorry for lateness! College distracted me.

Mosswhisker

Name Suggestion: Cedarnose.
Name Reasoning: Moss- isn't an accurate or traditional prefix; moss is green, for the most part, and unless it's the special Irish variety it's rarely brown unless it's dying - and naming cats after dying plants isn't the best thing. Lichen- represents dilute torties, last I've checked, so it doesn't very well fit a darker-pelted cat like herself!-whisker is good for a skilled hunter, but you also say she's a skilled tracker, so I imagine that would take priority over her skill in hunting (let alone the fact that skilled trackers are usually pretty good at hunting by association). Pelt-wise, a dark brown tabby smoke is just fine, but a purple nose ('mulberry') isn't too realistic - she would probably have a brown nose to match her pelt. Cedar- represents a dark brown tabby and -nose is for her skill in tracking.

Character Rating: 8/10
Character Reasoning: Her personality isn't too conflicting, so good on you! However, you may need some minor adjustments; as a cat that's passive and hesitant, she may only try to disguise her scent if there's good reasoning. I don't see her as the kind of cat others wouldn' trust, actually; her nature is timid and jumpy, and from this cats can assume she wouldn't try to sneak around, as she almost acts like an open book with how she's feeling. Minus the sneakiness (to a degree that she only does this when she's suspicious of someone, maybe?) and wary trust (as she's better off as a character others would think is predictable enough), she's fine.

[winter wolf.]

i m a g e ;;
n a m e ;; Hollycloud
g e n d e r ;; she-cat
c l a n ;; WindClan
r a n k ;; medicine cat
p e r s o n a l i t y ;; Meet Hollycloud, a happy she-cat. Hollycloud became a medicine cat after her love of herbs. She has both her parents, and a sister named Mintleaf. Hollycloud is quite smiley and happy all the time, and loves her job. She loves hearing a little kit mew for the first time, or cry when an elder says it's last words. Either way, Hollycloud moves on fast. She doesn't hold on to things, she lets them go. If her mother died, she would grieve for a day, and then go back to her work. She has a small apprentice named Littlepaw, soon to be Littleflower. Hollycloud hopes to work in her place for many moons to come.
Important Notes: nope