Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer [CLOSED]

[I r o n.]

Name: Whitepaw
Description: Whitepaw, as pretty obvious, is a plain white cat, he has medium-lenghted fur, and sapphire blue eyes.
Important Notes: Whitepaw is a silent, secretive and double-crossing cat. He tends to hunt alone, and despises talking and interacting with others, thought he is loyal to his clan. He ia bit of a liar, and if theres something he wants to keep a secret, he'd be good with that. Whitepaw is a skilled hunter, though he doesn't use those skills quite often. No reason why.

Name: Crowfoot
Description: Blackish-blue tomcat with dark blue eyes, and a tiny bit of a lighter muzzle.
Important Notes: Crowfoot is kind and sweet, he loves to make friends, though he is a bit of a show off. He is also very fast on land, and usually races with others to proove himself; mainly because he wants to be deputy.

Hiya hi!

Whitepaw

Name Suggestion: Whitewhisker.
Name Reasoning: White- works fine. -whisker is for a skilled hunter. I'd like to say right now that disloyalty (he exhibits such, so saying he's loyal and also saying he's a 'double-crosser' is contradicting and not so good for him as a character) would imply he's not much of a Clan cat and you may want to reconsider his motives. Keep in mind that blue eyes on a white cat mean deafness in most cases - I suggest an eye color change to prevent such a thing!



Crowfoot

Name Suggestion: Crowfoot if he's a black-furred cat, Pinefoot if he's blue-gray.
Name Reasoning: I can't suggest Crow- if this cat's blue-gray. If he's a dark blue-gray you might be able to work with Dusk-, but Crow- implies a black-furred cat, and as he's otherwise it'd be wise to either change his pelt or his prefix. His suffix fits fines, however. Blue eyes on a black or dark-furred cat, additionally, is impossible genetically; if he had a good deal of white on him (>40%) he may be able to get away with it, but in this case, you may want to give him an alternate eye color, such as yellow or orange.

Alright, thanks, I think i'll go with Pinefoot. (I knew about the blue eyed cats to most likely be deaf, but it was a possibility for them not to be deaf, right?

[Altias]

Image/Description:
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Name:
Deadeye
Gender:
molly
Clan:
forest fanclan
Rank:
elder
Personality/Skills:
Foul-mouthed and perpetually angry, Deadeye is frequently difficult and snappish. She is argumentative and has very little patience, growing extremely agitated very quickly especially with young apprentices and kits. Her restlessness and argumentativeness is derived from her growing anger at her failing body. Despite being retired, Deadeye has been an active member of the clan for a long time, still being a semi-successful hunter and fierce patroller, her reputation as a fierce brawler even in old age very much alive in She has recently however started developing a very stiff right back leg, and is no longer able to move as quickly or go out for as long. She is also hyper aware that she no longer remembers things as well as she could, which occasionally leads to even more arguments. Confined to camp, she has grown more and more frustrated, her pent up energy transforming the usually short-tempered and snappish cat into an ancient, sarcastic monster. Despite her attitude, she is fairly popular with warriors who knew her when she was younger and older apprentices who have learnt and respect her quirks.
Important Notes:
i love grumpy elders. im struggling with coming up with a prefix for her old name, -claw is pretty certain though.

Image/Description:
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Name:
Knotpaw/whisker
Gender:
tom
Clan:
fanclan near the sea
Rank:
apprentice
Personality/Skills:
Knotpaw is a well-liked and sweet individual with a good disposition and a bright outlook. He's sharp and picks up things quickly if they're shown to him, and such finds learning battle moves and hunting techniques quite easy, able to recollect many of them. Sadly, he's unable to put these fighting moves into practise, as he finds even mock-battles with clanmates impossible. The idea of harming another cat is utterly beyond him. Due to this, he much prefers talking things out, and is becoming quite the little diplomat. He has no such qualms about killing prey however, and is a good hunter. Despite being quite bright, he's very susceptible and unable to make up his own mind, relying on others to make decisions. He's incredibly easy to influence, and seems to have no awareness of when he's being used or manipulated. Fortunately, due to his rather likeable nature and the fact he lives in a clan, this occurrence is rare.
Important Notes:
obviously the wader rather than a way of joining two bits of string or measurement

Good morning!

Deadeye

Name Suggestion: Duskclaw.
Name Reasoning: I'm not so sure about her rename - it's not all that visible, so I'm kind of on the fence on it, but if you think a leader would suggest it, it should be fine. She seems to be a perfect candidate for Dusk-, as she's got a very dusky brown pelt.

Character Rating: 9/10.
Character Reasoning: Her aggression almost seems dangerous to the Clan - I'd be a little wary about how dangerous she acts around her Clanmates, as I'm sure she at least gives them the time of day. Being frustrated at herself is one thing, but I'm sure that a cat like her would notice when she is and make an attempt not to be overly vicious to any random bystander.


Knotwhisker

Name Suggestion: None.
Name Reasoning: His pelt is pointed, though it's kind of hard to tell - the blue eyes tipped me off a bit on this, though, if I were less sure of that fact just from a glance. You may want to exchange the image for one that's more fitting for a moggie cat - I would suggest this image or this image. Both are free-use, so no worries on copyright. That said, his name fits just fine, so no suggestion needed!

Character Rating: 10/10.
Character Reasoning: He's got a good personality as far as I can see, and the only issue I have is with the image you used for him! If you do change images (to make him a moggie rather than a pointed cat), you may want to change eye color as well, but that's only because cats with lots of white and blue eyes tend to be deaf. You might also want to think up some simple quirks for him; maybe he likes to tap his paws on the ground when he's trying to focus, or maybe he likes to touch everything he sees so that he remembers where it is.

[Altias]

Alright, thanks, I think i'll go with Pinefoot. (I knew about the blue eyed cats to most likely be deaf, but it was a possibility for them not to be deaf, right?

It's true, but when it comes to traditional warriors it's best to air on the side of caution with the assumption that majority-white cats with blue eyes are deaf, genetically! You can totally make a cat with white fur and blue eyes that isn't deaf if you really want, though - I've got no say in what you have to do, ehehe.

Glad to help you with the name!

[Dalek]

Could you review this character, please? c:


L A K E B R I A R




n a m e ;;
Lakebriar
g e n d e r ;;
she-cat
a g e ;;
30 moons
c l a n ;;
StormClan
r a n k ;;
warrior
p h y s i c a l d e s c r i p t i o n ;;
Lakebriar is a she-cat with a slightly small build. Her eyes are a striking deep teal blue, and a bit large on her face. She has sleek fur that, at a glance, looks black, but upon a closer look has small silver and white dapples that seem to reflect light like rippling water. The fur on her tail is longer than the sleek fur covering her pelt, and is very soft. Her paw pads, nose, and inner ears are a dark shade of gray. Her claws are long and almost silver in color.
p e r s o n a l i t y ;;
When she became a warrior, Lakebriar was named not only for her acute senses but also for her sharp demeanor. She usually speaks in a quiet tone and tries to avoid a confrontation, but in an argument she is a force to be reckoned with. Her hunting skills are particularly well, due to her delicate paws and quick senses. She has a love for water and fishing as well, due to her RiverClan ancestry, although she doesn't much care for the taste of fish. Lakebriar enjoys being alone, and dislikes other cats giving her orders, although she can be a bit bossy herself. She is also quite witty and sarcastic, and can make a quick, scathing retort in a conflict. She only opens up to cats she is close with and trusts. She can be very stubborn, and it's never easy to change her mind once she reaches a decision. Lakebriar can be sensitive or emotional at times, but has learned to mask her emotions with bluntness or humor. She refuses to discuss her past with anyone.
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Absolutely! Thanks for submittin'.

Lakebriar

Name Suggestion: Starlingpelt/fur.
Name Reasoning: Lake- implies no particular color, as lakes can come in blue, brown, green, and I'm sure other colors depending on time of day, season, or what-have-you. -briar does nothing to imply personality or skills; at most, it might imply a prickly personality and not much else, so it's not so good for her.

Prefix-wise, I am not quite sure what to give this cat. Black-furred cats don't have lighter gray bits, ever - a cat is either dilute (gray, cream, light ginger) or not (black, brown, ginger) - but not a mix of the two. She'd be all clear for a black-implying prefix if you just removed the gray bits. Additionally, blue eyes on a black cat, as the above poster's, is impossible, and only exists on cats that have at least 40% or more white on them - you should probably add that much if you want to give this cat the blue eyes still! With this in mind, I'm offering Starling-, which implies a dark-furred cat with possible white markings, and -pelt or -fur, as she's got no notable skills.


Character Rating: 6/10.
Character Reasoning: Sorry to say, but she conflicts a lot. You call her quiet and passive in one moment and then go on to make her active and somewhat confrontational in another - which is she, at that point? You should probably refine her character a bit by focusing on whether or not she's angry often, or whether she's easily annoyed, or if she keeps herself isolated (in a sense) because she can't focus with other cats around. She might be the kind of cat who prefers working on her own (perhaps avoiding other Clanmates for some reason, though she shouldn't be to an extent that she won't sleep in the same den as her Clanmates). She may have a tendency to snap at cats who don't get what she says the first time around, and she may not actually be so courteous to cats unless her leader or a higher-up tells her to chill out. (And she'd maybe only do so begrudgingly!)

Thank you for helping! c:

[prince.]

Please suggest a warrior name uwu? He may be exiled before that happens though.



~Creekpaw~

F o r T h e R e c o r d

Username;; You guys all know me :3
Nickname;; Perceive or Sparrow
Literacy;; Literate

T h e B a s i c s

Cat Name;; "hey there, the name's Creekpaw,"
Cat Nickname;; "Just Creek will do,"
Gender;; Male
Fur Colour;; Silver/White American shorthair tabby
Eye Colour;; Green with grey flecks
Rank;; Apprentice


D e l v i n g D e e p e r

Personality;; Creekpaw is an outgoing apprentice who strives to be better than the rest. His ambition is good fuel, although behind his friendly mask, there is a stone cold cat who is not afraid to kill to get what he wants. He takes everything as a sign of weakness - and will act upon that chance.
History (Optional);; To be announced
Likes;;
x Being with others
x Tree hopping
x Sparrows
Dislikes;;
x Heights
x Frogs



L o v e L i f e

Crush;; None
Mate;; None
Kits;; None
Other ;; Biological brother of Cosmicpaw

[chick magnet]

Image/Description: xXx
Name: Antclaw
Gender: male
Clan: a fanclan
Rank: warrior
Personality/Skills: Antclaw is a rather small tom, in fact, some who are not familiar with the twenty-four moon old warrior have mistaken him for an apprentice at times. Named for his skill in battle, Antclaw proves to be a fierce adversary. His stamina and fast reflexes have been honed over time to make up for his small stature. While renowned for his skill, his personality lacks somewhat to be desired; Antclaw is a hardworking cat and self disciplined to boot but he lacks social grace. Despite his young age, Antclaw is hardly exuberant or easy going. The first impression one receives when first meeting Antclaw is not a likable one. The warrior is rather serious and unfriendly towards his fellow clanmates-wether these unfortunate traits are simply part of his personality or perhaps derived from the moons of constant teasing that he endured, no one can say for sure. When Antclaw isn't going out on patrol, hunting, or training his apprentice, he's training himself out in the forest. He's always trying to improve his strength and speed; Antclaw's mind is often puzzling over ways he can possibly use his small size to his advantage, wether it be in hunting or fighting.
Important Notes: It doesn't show it in the picture but his eyes are a dark green. Thank you so much!! I really appreciate it.

Image/Description: xXx
Name: Duckpaw
Gender: female
Clan: a fanclan
Rank: apprentice
Personality/Skills: Meet Duckpaw, the overeager and exuberant eight moon old apprentice. This she-cat seems to always be talking or saying something; the words that spill out of her mouth are honest and unfiltered. Duckpaw is rather immature and naive-she just doesn't know how to hold her tongue. Awkward when speaking and clumsy when moving, this apprentice is quite the comical sight. Most reckon that Duckpaw will get herself into a lot of trouble one day, because after all, curiosity killed the cat. Duckpaw is always poking around where she doesn't belong, stopping frequently on patrols to look at odd stones or bugs. The curiosity borderlines on being downright nosy. While talkative and cheerful when around her mentor and other warriors, Duckpaw grows quiet when around her fellow apprentices. The rivalry and competitive energy surrounding them makes her a tad bit self conscious of her own shortcomings. Unfortunately, her blunt honestly often comes off the wrong way; Duckpaw has lost a fair amount of friends in the time she's been an apprentice. Perhaps she'd have better luck if she learned to have a bit of tact when speaking to others.
Important Notes: Thank you again!

[Altias]

Thank you for helping! c:

No problem! Glad to help.

[Altias]

xPerceiveTheTruthx, I'm not sure whether you want a name review/suggestion or a full character review. If you could clarify that, I'd be very grateful!

(I'll get to chick magnet's cat in a moment.)

[Altias]

Image/Description: xXx
Name: Antclaw
Gender: male
Clan: a fanclan
Rank: warrior
Personality/Skills: Antclaw is a rather small tom, in fact, some who are not familiar with the twenty-four moon old warrior have mistaken him for an apprentice at times. Named for his skill in battle, Antclaw proves to be a fierce adversary. His stamina and fast reflexes have been honed over time to make up for his small stature. While renowned for his skill, his personality lacks somewhat to be desired; Antclaw is a hardworking cat and self disciplined to boot but he lacks social grace. Despite his young age, Antclaw is hardly exuberant or easy going. The first impression one receives when first meeting Antclaw is not a likable one. The warrior is rather serious and unfriendly towards his fellow clanmates-wether these unfortunate traits are simply part of his personality or perhaps derived from the moons of constant teasing that he endured, no one can say for sure. When Antclaw isn't going out on patrol, hunting, or training his apprentice, he's training himself out in the forest. He's always trying to improve his strength and speed; Antclaw's mind is often puzzling over ways he can possibly use his small size to his advantage, wether it be in hunting or fighting.
Important Notes: It doesn't show it in the picture but his eyes are a dark green. Thank you so much!! I really appreciate it.

Image/Description: xXx
Name: Duckpaw
Gender: female
Clan: a fanclan
Rank: apprentice
Personality/Skills: Meet Duckpaw, the overeager and exuberant eight moon old apprentice. This she-cat seems to always be talking or saying something; the words that spill out of her mouth are honest and unfiltered. Duckpaw is rather immature and naive-she just doesn't know how to hold her tongue. Awkward when speaking and clumsy when moving, this apprentice is quite the comical sight. Most reckon that Duckpaw will get herself into a lot of trouble one day, because after all, curiosity killed the cat. Duckpaw is always poking around where she doesn't belong, stopping frequently on patrols to look at odd stones or bugs. The curiosity borderlines on being downright nosy. While talkative and cheerful when around her mentor and other warriors, Duckpaw grows quiet when around her fellow apprentices. The rivalry and competitive energy surrounding them makes her a tad bit self conscious of her own shortcomings. Unfortunately, her blunt honestly often comes off the wrong way; Duckpaw has lost a fair amount of friends in the time she's been an apprentice. Perhaps she'd have better luck if she learned to have a bit of tact when speaking to others.
Important Notes: Thank you again!

Greetings to you!

Antclaw

Name Suggestion: Cedarclaw.
Name Reasoning: Ant- is only for black-furred or dark brown cats, so it wouldn't fit this guy very well! -claw works fine for him, however, as he's got the skill for it. Cedar- is for a dark brown tabby like he is.

Character Rating: 10/10
Character Reasoning: He's got no problems that I can see, aside from the prefix! If you really wanted to keep the prefix (and it is definitely a good one, considering his stature!) you may want to just change the image/appearance to a dark brown or black-furred cat so he'd fit requirements for Ant-.



Duckpaw

Name Suggestion: Robinpelt/fur.
Name Reasoning: Duck- is for a brown-and-white patched cat (or a brown cat with white markings) - and as this cat is a fawn tortie (from what I can tell, as the image is purely a headshot!) she would be better off with a tortie-implying prefix. Robin- is perfect for a fawn tortie. -pelt/-fur are both general suffixes for cats that don't have a notable trait or skill, which is always fine.

Character Rating: 10/10
Character Reasoning: As above, if you want to keep prefix, you'll wanna change to a different pelt color or image. Her personality is pretty well rounded, and all I want to suggest is that she's not punished just for being overly silly or anything of the sort; she may get talked to often, but I see cats that get targeted in a way that allows for 'bully' characters that don't fit well in a traditional Clan. She's great, though, so long as you don't decide to twist it that way!

[chick magnet]

Image/Description: xXx
Name: Antclaw
Gender: male
Clan: a fanclan
Rank: warrior
Personality/Skills: Antclaw is a rather small tom, in fact, some who are not familiar with the twenty-four moon old warrior have mistaken him for an apprentice at times. Named for his skill in battle, Antclaw proves to be a fierce adversary. His stamina and fast reflexes have been honed over time to make up for his small stature. While renowned for his skill, his personality lacks somewhat to be desired; Antclaw is a hardworking cat and self disciplined to boot but he lacks social grace. Despite his young age, Antclaw is hardly exuberant or easy going. The first impression one receives when first meeting Antclaw is not a likable one. The warrior is rather serious and unfriendly towards his fellow clanmates-wether these unfortunate traits are simply part of his personality or perhaps derived from the moons of constant teasing that he endured, no one can say for sure. When Antclaw isn't going out on patrol, hunting, or training his apprentice, he's training himself out in the forest. He's always trying to improve his strength and speed; Antclaw's mind is often puzzling over ways he can possibly use his small size to his advantage, wether it be in hunting or fighting.
Important Notes: It doesn't show it in the picture but his eyes are a dark green. Thank you so much!! I really appreciate it.

Image/Description: xXx
Name: Duckpaw
Gender: female
Clan: a fanclan
Rank: apprentice
Personality/Skills: Meet Duckpaw, the overeager and exuberant eight moon old apprentice. This she-cat seems to always be talking or saying something; the words that spill out of her mouth are honest and unfiltered. Duckpaw is rather immature and naive-she just doesn't know how to hold her tongue. Awkward when speaking and clumsy when moving, this apprentice is quite the comical sight. Most reckon that Duckpaw will get herself into a lot of trouble one day, because after all, curiosity killed the cat. Duckpaw is always poking around where she doesn't belong, stopping frequently on patrols to look at odd stones or bugs. The curiosity borderlines on being downright nosy. While talkative and cheerful when around her mentor and other warriors, Duckpaw grows quiet when around her fellow apprentices. The rivalry and competitive energy surrounding them makes her a tad bit self conscious of her own shortcomings. Unfortunately, her blunt honestly often comes off the wrong way; Duckpaw has lost a fair amount of friends in the time she's been an apprentice. Perhaps she'd have better luck if she learned to have a bit of tact when speaking to others.
Important Notes: Thank you again!

Greetings to you!

Antclaw

Name Suggestion: Cedarclaw.
Name Reasoning: Ant- is only for black-furred or dark brown cats, so it wouldn't fit this guy very well! -claw works fine for him, however, as he's got the skill for it. Cedar- is for a dark brown tabby like he is.

Character Rating: 10/10
Character Reasoning: He's got no problems that I can see, aside from the prefix! If you really wanted to keep the prefix (and it is definitely a good one, considering his stature!) you may want to just change the image/appearance to a dark brown or black-furred cat so he'd fit requirements for Ant-.



Duckpaw

Name Suggestion: Robinpelt/fur.
Name Reasoning: Duck- is for a brown-and-white patched cat (or a brown cat with white markings) - and as this cat is a fawn tortie (from what I can tell, as the image is purely a headshot!) she would be better off with a tortie-implying prefix. Robin- is perfect for a fawn tortie. -pelt/-fur are both general suffixes for cats that don't have a notable trait or skill, which is always fine.

Character Rating: 10/10
Character Reasoning: As above, if you want to keep prefix, you'll wanna change to a different pelt color or image. Her personality is pretty well rounded, and all I want to suggest is that she's not punished just for being overly silly or anything of the sort; she may get talked to often, but I see cats that get targeted in a way that allows for 'bully' characters that don't fit well in a traditional Clan. She's great, though, so long as you don't decide to twist it that way!

Thank you very much again! I appreciate it.

Ah, okay! I think I'll just change their pictures then. I chose the prefix Ant- to describe his small stature but it would probably make more sense if I switched out the picture to a cat with a black pelt. And thank you for the suggestion for Duckpaw! And yes, I totally understand that! I'm really not a fan of the characters who get 'bullied' in clans; I was just looking for something to add to her personality. Thank you so so much; I'll be sure to make note of the things you mentioned!!