AsunaYuuki wrote:I personally love your lychee and for my cheesecake I plan on having well developed plotlines to keep people interested as well as not take too long on them. X3
...Actually, I probably should do that. Add foreshadowing, developing and all that stuff. Right now, every arc I have is just like "Hey, Apollo, do this thing." And then "Okay, I'm doing this thing." Finally, "This happened after I did that thing." Always three parts to everything, and then the end. Never any "this will be coming up soon", which would be more realistic for most plotlines.
Also, yeah, meeting the characters of another diary would be pretty interesting. Lucy would be pretty sour towards all populars, despite being one herself. :P Especially if that's the leader of the populars because... Well, if you've read Lychee the explanation should be obvious.