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Should Angelic Break up with Toaro?

YES! That jerk, making out with Star Burst!
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Probably, I haven't read the whole thing yet.
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No, not yet! I like Toaro! He's good for Angelic! :D
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Dear Journal... [By Angelic]

Postby Liru Kaulitz » Wed Nov 24, 2010 7:14 am

Um...welcome to this..page...oh, what ever, just read. x-x
Inspired by the Amazing, Noobcake! ;) I loved reading this Pet Diary and I hope I inspire many more :D

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Zen wrote:Username: Zen
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Lol level (1-10): 10
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Fave character: Angelic
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Lol level (1-10): 10.
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Comments (Good or Bad, but Good is better XD): I love Angelic's personality, and the way you write the story. If it was just a writing about Angelic, I would've probably never understood her, but since she's writing about herself, if gives me a whole other view of things. Keep up the good work! ^^
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I'm starting an interview thing. Yes, I may have stolen this idea XD...but don't be mad at me!! I loved it too much *Hugs the idea and won't let go*. Where, you might ask, did I get this idea? From Noobcake! The best CS pet Diary I've ever seen! Thanks, Xialburg!

PM me and ask a character of your choice a few questions. Here are the charries currently open for interviews?:

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Entry 1

Dear Diary Journal,

... Wow. How embarrassing. I have a journal. I always thought this was what 'girly girls' have.
Well. I'm not really sure how this works. But I'll start by telling about...me.
Well, I'm really sporty, and I love basketball (Gah, I'm talking to a book x.x),
I'm not the BRIGHTEST dog at my High School, but hey. I'm sure you aren't perfect either. I KINDA get in trouble a bit to much....
My dad and mom died when I was four, and I live with my my older sister, Sourpop and my other sister, Bri. I practically hate both of them. Sourpop is a bossy snob, even though she's only like, a few years older then us. And Bri is a straight 'A' student, which makes me sick. So, yah, life is pretty hopeless.
And that's pretty much all that I can tell you, other then I'm 15, and so is Bri.
Uh, oh. The teacher is looking at me. Mr. Bolt, is like, the worst teacher ever. He gave me detention last week and this week, and all I did throw my football up in the air during social studies. It only cracked the light. But, hey, I'm not ashamed, if he want ME to behave, he should plan a more interesting lesson. I mean, really, who wants to listen to hear a speech about World War 1 on a day like this.

OMG, Mr. Bolt just asked my a question.
'What is it, that I just said, Miss Angelic?'
Oh, man, did he have to ask me THAT hard of a question?
(Btw, don't ask about my name, I know, its kinda dumb, 'cause I'm no angel.)

Well, I have to go now, Diary Journal, my teacher is screaming at me, and I'm about to throw my chair at him.
So long,
Angelic ;)
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Re: Angelic's AMAZING Diary of.....AWESOMENESS

Postby Liru Kaulitz » Wed Nov 24, 2010 7:55 am

Dear Diary Journal,
I'm in the janitor's closet writing this. Yah, I kinda ditched class. Mr. Bolt was boring me with his words again. So, I asked to go to the bathroom, and...here I am in the closet. It's been about 5 minutes, and I hope that Mr. Bolt doesn't realize I'm gone. But somehow he probably will. He always picks on me.

I think I'm just gonna stay here for the rest of the period. Yuck, it really stinks in here.
I'm actually starting to like writing in you, even though I'm being a total retard and acting like you understand me. Well, whatever, I CAN say some super awesome mean stuff about my enemies in here. MU HAH HAH HAH! :twisted:

Yes! The bell just rang! Bye Journal, I'm outta this dump! I'll write at recess or lunch or something.

Signed,
Angelic
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Re: Angelic's AMAZING Diary of.....AWESOMENESS

Postby Liru Kaulitz » Wed Nov 24, 2010 8:15 am

Dear Journal,
I'm back. Me and my best friend, Star Burst, pulled a good one in lunch today! That girl is my partner in crime. We were walking to our table when we saw a kinder-pup. I nudged Star to give her the signal.
Then she was like, 'Oops.' and bumped my open punch can onto the floor. The little puppy stepped right in it! Hah! You should have seen him! He started running in circles screaming, 'My toes are drowning'. What a nut.

When we sat down, I saw Toaro, this really hot guy who's captain on the basketball team. He's got these awesome eyes, their all red and cool. And he gets in trouble almost as much as me. He came over to our table and sat down next to me. Then he asked me if I wanted to come over his place this weekend to shoot some hoops. You better believe I said yes! I wasn't going to miss this chance. Yeah, life isn't laughing at me after all!

Now, I've never had many boy friends, only 1 other one named Darts. But one night I came over with Star Burst to hang, and he really ticked me off when he started chatting it up with Star, and it didn't take a detective to see that he was crazy for her. So, I dumped him that night after we left, and I believe he's going out with a girl named Maria now.

Bye, Journal. My hot Toaro waits me ;)
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Re: Angelic's AMAZING Diary of.....AWESOMENESS

Postby Liru Kaulitz » Wed Nov 24, 2010 8:42 am

Dear Journal,
It's Friday night! I'm over at Toaro's place. He's rich, btw. First we went up to his room (which is like, 6 times bigger then mine), and he turned on a basketball game. We watched it for a few hours and kinda just hung out. After that, his mom, Red Moon, told Toaro that Taylor (his older brother), and Alli (his younger sister), where ready to play ball. So we went outside and onto their basketball court. It was me and Toaro against Taylor and Alli. We beat them by one point; my final 3 pointer handed us our victory. WOOT!

We played 3 more games after that, and won 2 of them. Then Red Moon called us in for dinner. Man, their dining table is HUGE! It's like 4 of my own! We had pork chops with mashed potatoes and fresh salad. For dessert, we had ice-cream and fudge brownies. I'm telling you, I lived it! After we finished eating, me and Toaro went into the living room with Taylor to watch a movie. We all agreed on a horror movie that looked really creepy. Alli watched maybe 3 minutes and then ran up the stairs screaming, 'It's gonna get me! It's gonna nom my tail off! Help, Mommy, help!" Pups...

Now me and him are back in his room. He has this awesome water bed that I'm sitting one now. It's all jiggly! This place is the BOMB! I love it!

OMG Toaro said he wanted to ask me something! Gotta go, Journal!

~ Angelic
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Re: Angelic's AMAZING Diary of.....AWESOMENESS

Postby Liru Kaulitz » Wed Nov 24, 2010 11:03 am

Dear Journal,
OMG OMG OMG!!!! Toaro asked me out! He called me over and told me that I was the most cool girl he'd ever met, not to girly, not too crazy, sporty and sweet. Then he asked me if I wanted to go to the most fancy restaurant in town, 'Chicken La Smoothie'! Of course, I said yes right away! Man, I'm so pumped, I know exactly what I want to wear! I'll where my purple and yellow star hoodie with a pair of jeans and my favorite pair of dangling earrings. Yah, I know, not that fancy, but hey, whatever. I'm not a fancy girl.

At home, Bri was doing her homework, and Sourpop was sitting with her boyfriend, Daru. He's 24 like Sourpop. (Okay, she's not a little older then us X.X) They were whispering about something, and Sourpop kept smiling and patting her belly. She said, 'Two will be a handful. But we'll manage, I'm sure.'

OMG.....at dinner Sour told us that she was pregnant with twins. A boy and a girl, and they were identical. Gosh, my life is suddenly very weird o.o
Bye, Journal.
From, Angelic <3
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Re: Angelic's AMAZING Diary of.....AWESOMENESS

Postby Liru Kaulitz » Wed Nov 24, 2010 1:01 pm

Dear Journal,
I have my date with Toaro in a week. Sour has to go to the hospital soon to have the pups. Uhhh, crazy puppies running everywhere. Anyway, Bri was sick today, and so was Toaro, and 4 other dogs in my homeroom class, Erin, Lila, Opal, and a boy named Nathan who I believe Star Burst is currently dating. All with severe stomach flu. They're probably gonna be out for a week or so. Uh, with my luck, I'll probably be the only one who doesn't get sick. Lucky....

I went over to see how Toaro was doing this afternoon, and when I came to the door, Alli opened it. She said that I shouldn't come in because Toaro was vomiting on the couch in the other room.
'It's not pretty,' she said, grinning slightly. Apparently, Taylor's sick too, so I've got no one to shoot hoops with. Well, too bad for me. When I got home, Bri was sitting on the sofa, groaning and barfing like crazy. I was upstairs in a flash, because believe me, I didn't want to be her next target.

Oh, also Daru is watching us while Sour's in the hospital. It really sucks, cause he's all distracted right now. He messes everything up. This morning I asked him to make me some toast 'cause I was to lazy at the moment. And he gave it to me...and it had TOMATO SAUCE ON IT. I also saw him pouring jam on his pasta. Cookoo....

Well, bye journal, I've got to work on some *gags* worksheets.
;) Angelic
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Re: Angelic's AMAZING Diary of.....AWESOMENESS

Postby Liru Kaulitz » Wed Nov 24, 2010 1:10 pm

Dear Journal,
Yippee! (OMG that was so corny)
I've got the stomach flu! No school for a *cough* week! I've been chatting with Toaro while I lay here. It's kinda boring just sitting in bed. But its a lot better then sitting in detention writing lines like 'I will not through chairs at my teacher'. Geez, I didn't even through it HARD. He was boring me, that's all. Anyway, Toaro says Alli threw up last night and came down with a fever. It looks like his whole family is going down with this flu bug. Bri is still sick too. She always hogs the TV for the WHOLE DAY. Sisters are soooooooooo annoying. Hold on a moment.

Okay, I'm back. Whew, I'm getting worn out from all this. But luckily, I've got a phone, and I call Daru to give some service up here. I ordered asked for some lemonade a few minutes ago and it had cheese in it. So I sent him back to do it right. Also, Star is coming over today with some of my missed work. Uh, my wonderful savior.

Well, bye journal, I have to *cough* sleep now.

From,
Ange....zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Re: Angelic's AWESOME Journal :)

Postby Liru Kaulitz » Wed Nov 24, 2010 1:41 pm

Dear Journal,
Bri and I are still sick. Daru has still been acting cookoo. My life is very odd at the moment....Last night Daru left the house at night. I expect that Sourpop had her puppies. Now I have no room service, and I'm dying over here. Toaro's mom keeps saying he's to sick to talk, and Bri's still hogging the TV with her 'Little Den on the Prairie'. Weirdo....

Star called my today, but we could barely ttalk 'cause she was puking so much. Uh, this is really starting to stink. Anyway, I've got a stack of homework from Mr. Bolt, so I'm just gonna stick a note on it that says, 'Didn't understand anything'. I sure hope he falls for it, but there were somethings in there like square roots and that sort....which I covered in 5th grade.

Bri's boyfriend, Spotz, came over this morning to see her. I couldn't really get out of bed at all, which really sucks. Hold on, I think Bri just went to the bathroom. Yes!

Bye Journal, I have to go steal the TV ;)

~Angelic
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Re: Angelic's AWESOME Journal :)

Postby Cynthia » Wed Nov 24, 2010 4:05 pm

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Re: Angelic's AWESOME Journal :)

Postby Liru Kaulitz » Thu Nov 25, 2010 12:59 am

Thank you, cynthiababy!

Dear Journal,
Daru and Sourpop came home from the hospital today. They brought the pups! I have to admit, they are kinda cute....but Sour won't let me near them 'cause she's afraid I'll get them sick. Their names are Pumpkin and Ginger. I'm actually starting to feel better, and I believe Toaro went back to school yesterday. Well, I had some eggs this morning, and the actually tasted GOOD. Daru been a lot less crazy lately. Now me and Bri get alot less attention, and its starting to tick me off. I mean, come on, isn't one of the best parts of being sick is having some one fuss over you?

Sour is sending Bri back to school tomorrow, because she's pretty much better. Also, yes! Today was the last today of detention! I hope Mr. Bolt doesn't make me ANOTHER week of detention, just because I didn't do my make-up work.
Oooo! Basketball's on! Gotta *cough* go journal!

~ Angelic
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