Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer [CLOSED]

[elfish]

Image/Description: bleep bloop.
Name: Starlingface
Gender: Female
Clan: FanClan
Rank: Warrior
Personality/Skills: Starlingface, named for her pretty appearance, has proven herself to be a warrior of average fighting and hunting skills. Her personality, however, betrays her beauty. She is characterized as being flirtatious, vain, arrogant, and patronizing. Starlingface truly believes that she is the best out there, and her tone nearly always seeps of superiority. She's a very superficial cat who judges things at first glance. She doesn't like to get her paws dirty and often cowers from combat, fearful of scars. However, that is not to say she is all negative. She is self confident, witty, quick to act, and offers blunt (and rude) advice to those who will listen.
Important Notes: None to note. Thank you c:

[Arcaii]

Image/Description: xXx
Name: Raventail
Gender: female
Clan: Shadowclan
Rank: Warrior
Personality/Skills: Raventail is a quiet she-cat who seems to like squirrels better than she likes her fellow warriors. She excels in hunting, specifically hunting in trees. Due to her small frame, Raventail struggles when it comes to fighting. Her stamina and agility is revered but if a cat were to pin her, it would all be over. Her demeanor is somewhat off-putting because of her lack of opinion at times; Raventail is an adaptable cat but also an opportunist. It wouldn't be wise to mistake her quiet demeanor for shyness or kindness for the she-cat is neither. Raventail's sarcasm is heavily masked by the false sincerity she presents when speaking. Her clanmates seem to irritate her; she would much rather spend time in trees than she would in camp.
Important Notes: Thank you so much!

No iss! Apologies for the wait.

Name Rating: 10/10
Name Type: Traditional
Name Reasoning: I have no complaints here! You do mentioned she's a skilled hunter, but given that more time is spent discussing her agility and climbing, I think her name fits her perfectly.
Alternative Name: None!

Character Rating: 10/10
Character Reasoning: Again, not much to say! She's a great cat with well balanced abilities and weaknesses, and her personality fits together perfectly. Pity for her Clanmates, of course - living with such a loner can't be easy. Unless they're all idiots. Then they deserve it.

[Arcaii]

If a white kitten was born but later developed points (say he/she became a flame point), and then climate was warm so there was low contrast, would you suggest a name change?
Also, what prefixes would you suggest for a chocolate smoke?

I'd think they would keep the name they were given! As long as they're the vast majority white, there should be no problems. Of course, if their name also refers to a light golden cat, then the parents would probably feel better (although I'd be squinting suspiciously at the mother if she was birthing some pointed cats...).

I would consider that color to be dark brown, or dusky. As such, they should try Alder-, Ant-, Bat-, Beetle-, Brown-, Cedar-, Dark-, Dusk-, Eel-, Ivy-, Lamprey- (only if they have a lighter underbelly), Mink-, Minnow-, Mud-, Otter-, Rat-, Sedge-, Spider-, Swift-, or Vole-. I'm not sure if that's a naturally occurring color, though, or if it's specially bred.

[Arcaii]

Image/Description: bleep bloop.
Name: Starlingface
Gender: Female
Clan: FanClan
Rank: Warrior
Personality/Skills: Starlingface, named for her pretty appearance, has proven herself to be a warrior of average fighting and hunting skills. Her personality, however, betrays her beauty. She is characterized as being flirtatious, vain, arrogant, and patronizing. Starlingface truly believes that she is the best out there, and her tone nearly always seeps of superiority. She's a very superficial cat who judges things at first glance. She doesn't like to get her paws dirty and often cowers from combat, fearful of scars. However, that is not to say she is all negative. She is self confident, witty, quick to act, and offers blunt (and rude) advice to those who will listen.
Important Notes: None to note. Thank you c:

Oh, goodness, that is a cute picture.

Name Rating: 10/10
Name Type: Traditional
Name Reasoning: Her name fits her perfectly! I don't have too much to say here.
Alternative Name: None!

Character Rating: 10/10
Character Reasoning: A pleasant cat to have in the Clan? Probably not, no. But, honestly, I will give her a bit of a pass on that since she's a -face cat, someone characterized by their beauty, so I can see her wanting to preserve that and being the way she is. Hopefully she's trying to improve.

[the bad wolf]

So I've been developing a couple of characters for the idea I mentioned a couple pages back, and there's one I'm a bit iffy about using since I feel his personality isn't too great. Mind rating him real quick? (Note: I am terrible at describing personality, so hopefully it's not too messy)

Name:
Bitternmint/Wrenmint/Hawkmint

Gender:
Tom

Clan:
Moonclan

Rank:
Shaman (Like a medicine cat, but constantly in touch with all spirits, not just the clan's ancestors)

Personality/Skills:

*Observant: When a cat feels a sudden chill run up their spine, like something is watching them? It's probably the Shaman. The clan finds it odd, and a bit unnerving. But he does have a point for it. Which leads to...

*Intelligent: And I don't mean just about his work. He can read a cat's basic body language like he reads signs from Skyclan. There is no lying to this cat, or at least lying he doesn't know about. And if he wanted to, he could tell you the habits of every cat in his clan.

*Blunt: This cat is very to the point, no sugar coating anything.

*Cold: He's not exactly the friendly type. He does his job as learned, and that's all he has to do with a cat. He's basically a walking icebox of herbs and that's all most cats can see him as. Which often leads to cats disrespecting him.

*Stubborn: He has a moral code, a looser one then other clan cats, but he still does. Even if it conflicts with the Warrior's Code, he will still stand for what he believes in.

*Bitter: He never thought the clan life was for him. He debated leaving the clan after he became a shaman fledgling, but he was told by the spirits that he would be the decider of life and death for cats to come. So he stayed. When he felt like he did what every other shaman did, he felt like he was lied to. But with his guide dead and no cat to take his place, he knew that leaving the clan at the paws of their new leader would be murder, he remained.

Important Notes:
Named after a bird as is tradition for shaman. The suffix -mint given after he treated his clan and the other clans around him of greencough, an outbreak severe enough to kill two full-named shamans and a leader.

Thanks for the time! (And sorry again for the messyness, I typed this up quickly)

[Spottedbird]

(I'm so tired I can't do a proper form)

Name: Flamekit
Gender: Tom
Age: Five moons old
Rank: Kit
Personality: Flamekit is a brave kit. He is courageous whenever something goes wrong, and and he has a habit of bullying others when he doesn't mean it.
Looks: Orange tabby with green mossey eyes and white paw tips.
Desired rank: Leader!
Family: Mother: Lizardstripe(Died as a warrior) Father: Hailstorm(Died as a warrior) Sister(s): Lilystem(Died as a medicine cat) Brother(s): Brokenshadow(Loyal warrior of Fierceclan)
Crush: Fleetfoot(Warrior of Mintclan)
Mate: None
Kts: None
Skills: Climbing, Fightning and hunting.
Date of birth(something I like to do): July 4th, 2014 on a summer Thrusday, 2:18PM Central.

(Ok, maybe I'll do my original form)




The basics

Name: Smokekit
Gender: She-kit
Age: Four moons old
Personality: Shy, smart, nice, kind, sweet.
History: Not that much.
Rank: Kit
Desired rank: Kit

Looks

Main color: Smokey grey
Eye color: Misty shades of blue.
Markings: Black stripes-original tabby.
Other: Scar on head from Flamekit.

Relationships

Family: Mother: Swiftfoot(Died as a warrior) Father: Hawkshadow(Deputy of Mintclan) Siblings: Lionkit(Died as a kit)
Friends: Shadowkit(Not my charrie), Cheetahspots, Echopaw(not my charrie), and Willowpaw(also not my charrie)
Crush: Flamekit
Mate: None
Kits: Ain't nobody got time for dat :3

[winter wolf.]

Name:
Creekpaw/ soon to be Creeklight

Gender:
Shecat

Clan:
CrystalClan

Rank:
Apprentice

Personality/Skills:

*Shy: Alright, this cat is EXTREMELY shy. SHe won't come up to anybody, and shies away from everything.

*Curious: As shy as she is, Creekpaw is curious. She wants to know about her ancestors.

*Protective: In battle, Creekpaw is usually in the back, but she will do ANYTHING to protect her family.

*Respectful: Creekpaw respects every cat she meets, even if it means talking to them.

*Friendly: Once you get to her, which can take WEEKS, she is very happy and outgoing. She loves trying to make friends, and someday a mate.

Important Notes:
None

[mistywater]

[...] though I will ask (as is protocol) whether she has a spotted coat pattern or has a ticked pattern. This is more for curiosity's sake, since I'm not sure if a ticked cat would count as mottled or not.

She's got a plain spotted coat, not ticked or anything, so I'd say Mottle-'s ideal in this case!

The medicine cat must dread working on her.

Not at all! Whenever there's a check-up due for Mottledpelt, she and the medicine cat like to talk about how hot-headed and disrespectful the apprentices are these days and so on.

Last but not least, I'm getting an idea of the first kit, the rascal of the litter.

Mottle- is perfect for her, then! And at least one cat likes her. I can see them complaining now.

"And don't even get me started on Applepaw."
"Augh! Don't bring that name up. He won't stop interrupting his mentor, rude little..."
"Well, at least he does his work, unlike Mosquitopaw."
"Oh boy- you know what, she's fittingly named. Always with the high-pitched whining. Runny-nosed mouse-sized-"
"If you plan to curse them out, Mottledpelt, I think you should talk a little more quietly. The nursery is right next door."
"Oh, those kits ain't even got their ears open yet, it's fine."

(there are two injokes here if the one i share them with can find them)

I can't for my life find the jokes. I'm more into sarcasm and random humor, for example, my latest 'joke' was something like that:
My friend: 'Sorry I'm late!'
Me: 'So you finally caught that moose?'
My friend: 'Wha-, oh! Ha ha!

Ah well, I've got the lil' bundles pretty much ready!

Description: Average-sized but short kitten with stubby legs and a short tail, shortish white fur with minor patches of gray and yellow eyes.
Name: Garlickit/Later Garlicnose
Gender: Tom
Clan: TC
Rank: Kit
Personality/Skills: He's the bold boisterous mischief-maker and sneaky rascal of the litter. He's show-offish, likes attention and adores getting up to no good. The kit is mistrustful, often saying how he'll rip the other Clan cats apart if they put as much as a whisker over his border. He underestimates most victims, aka cat's he's about to prank. Garlickit is very defensive and protective of his 'terrain' and can be a fierce little warrior if you don't mind your step. If you're one of his 'allies' get ready for loads of chatting, plotting and entertainment.
Catchphrase: 'You're trying to pick a fight, huh? No? Then what are you doing in my nursery?'
Important Notes: Nope!

Description: Smallish speckled brown molly with hazel eyes.
Name: Brindlekit/Brindlecloud.
Gender: Molly. Nearly wrote 'mooly' there.
Clan: TC.
Rank: Kit.
Personality/Skills: Brindlekit's got her head in the clouds. She's daydreaming all the time, which often causes her to trip or stumble. She is unobservant and clumsy, to top that up, but very enthusiastic and keen, trying to help all the time. Unfortunately, she forgets what she's supposed to do mid-task. Cats have a soft spot for the kitten, maybe because of her cute, large eyes are are often gazing at far-off things no one else can see. It's difficult to speak to her because of her daydreams. She's very easygoing and even tough hard to communicate with, she has many friends.
Important Notes: Nope!

Still working on their brother - the last littermate.

[satuurnity]

Please bear in mind that I am very indecisive, and most of these things are just an outline of a very in-depth character that will be worked out shortly. I'm just trying to see if the base-line would work out.

Image/Description: A tortoisehell she-cat with bright green eyes (I'm working on her image).
Name: Well, it was going to be Swiftspirit, but after reading everything you have to say I realise this doesn't really describe her. It does in the sense that she is a fast cat, who is very quick thinking and extremely astute, but I'd like at least the prefix to focus on her appearance. I was thinking the suffix could be foot or tail, seen as I' like her to be quick on her feet but also a good balancer. As she is tortoisehell, would these prefixes work: Leaf-, Bracken-, Heather-, Oak-, maybe? Maple would be good but I'm pretty sure that's for reddish cats? I'm really bad at this, but that's why I'm asking your opinion.
Gender: She-cat.
Clan: I'm pretty sure of Windclan, but then again a good climber belongs in Thunderclan right? Ahh, I think I'll stick with Windlcan.
Rank: Deputy
Personality/Skills: -- is very quick witted, and good at outsmarting her opponents. She is long legged and fairly lithe, so not able to over power a heavier cat with brute-strength alone, but her intelligence helps She has thought up a lot of new battle moves especially for smaller cats. She can be stubborn at times, never wanting to believe that she is wrong- eventually, however, if another cat brings proof as to what they are arguing, she will half-heartedly admit she was wrong. She is very blunt and to the point with warriors and the like, but she has a soft-spot for kits and elders.
Important Notes: She is extremely fast and agile, both able to sprint and run long distance.

[Arcaii]

Oh, boy. Today was a bad day to be busy. Sorry to keep all of you waiting!