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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Telescope » Sun Nov 21, 2010 5:01 am

@ Geek in Pink~For some reason how Imagined diane in that story looked like me when I was like 8, hahaha
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Chara Dreemurr » Sun Nov 21, 2010 5:04 am

Ǥɛɛκ ιи тнɛ Ƥιиκ wrote:
It was the day before Halloween
Erica, her friends Jasmine and Diane were down by the creek.
"I wanna be a princess for Halloween." Erica says.
"I wanna be a Vampire." Jasmine says.
"I wanna be a Mass Murderer." Diane says.
Erica and Jasmine both shrug, at Diane's chioce.
"But I am going to be a Mass Murderer!" She insists, but the subject is dropped.
So they continue to play until it's get dark.

The next day, Erica's mom agrees to take them all trick-or-treating.
Erica puts on her princess costume and they go to get Jasmine.
Jamine has on her vampire costume.
When they drove to Diane's house, no one came to the door.
Diane had to brothers and a sister, so someone had to be home.
They rang the doorbell over and over again, but no one answers.
Finally Jasmine decides to go around back and see if they're back there.
Erica's mom warns her not too, but she goes anyway.

Erica and her mother continued to wait for a long time, but no one comes out.
Erica's mom calls the police.
When they arrive, they found Jasmine on the patio.
Her costume had been ripped off and she'd been stabbed.
When they went upstairs they found her two brothers in their beds. Stabbed.
Herfather was in the kitchen. Stabbed.
Her mother and her sister were never found.

When the cops went to check the basement, they found Diane.
She was sitting in a rocking chair, slowly rocking back and forth.
"I told you I was going to be a Mass Murderer." She was whispering.


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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Telescope » Sun Nov 21, 2010 5:09 am

Telescope wrote:Scury Story!

A woman was on an elevator with a rather scary looking man. She tried to look away and not pay attention to him since he looked like he could squash her.
She got back to her hotel room and looked for her wallet in her purse. It wasn't there...maybe the man on the elevator took it?! She made her way down to hotel security and asked if she could see the tape from a few minutes ago on the elevator. Her wallet was still there on the floor of the elevator, she must have dropped it.
She was about to walk away when she saw something. There where three people in the elevator, and the one she hadn't seen was transparent. When she got off the elevator he was following her...was he still following her now?

I just made that up off the top of my head because I was bored :P



Ahhhhh, please someone read it!
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Orbitsy » Sun Nov 21, 2010 5:48 am

Telescope wrote:
Telescope wrote:Scury Story!

A woman was on an elevator with a rather scary looking man. She tried to look away and not pay attention to him since he looked like he could squash her.
She got back to her hotel room and looked for her wallet in her purse. It wasn't there...maybe the man on the elevator took it?! She made her way down to hotel security and asked if she could see the tape from a few minutes ago on the elevator. Her wallet was still there on the floor of the elevator, she must have dropped it.
She was about to walk away when she saw something. There where three people in the elevator, and the one she hadn't seen was transparent. When she got off the elevator he was following her...was he still following her now?

I just made that up off the top of my head because I was bored :P



Ahhhhh, please someone read it!


I read it, it's cool ^-^
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby hunter172 » Sun Nov 21, 2010 7:17 am

Telescope wrote:
Telescope wrote:Scury Story!

A woman was on an elevator with a rather scary looking man. She tried to look away and not pay attention to him since he looked like he could squash her.
She got back to her hotel room and looked for her wallet in her purse. It wasn't there...maybe the man on the elevator took it?! She made her way down to hotel security and asked if she could see the tape from a few minutes ago on the elevator. Her wallet was still there on the floor of the elevator, she must have dropped it.
She was about to walk away when she saw something. There where three people in the elevator, and the one she hadn't seen was transparent. When she got off the elevator he was following her...was he still following her now?

I just made that up off the top of my head because I was bored :P



Ahhhhh, please someone read it!

just because no one commented, doesnt mean they didn't read it.
When you type 'someone read it', its probably considered spamming.
It's a good story, but not much of a plot. It also doesnt really make sense,
Her wallet was still there on the floor of the elevator, she must have dropped it.
She was about to walk away when she saw something. There where three people in the elevator, and the one she hadn't seen was transparent.

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but like i said, its good! Practice makes perfect.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby hunter172 » Sun Nov 21, 2010 7:45 am

Taylor Sits in Bathtubs.
Taylor sits in bathtubs. She doesn't tell anyone why, she just does. Most people think it's because she's psycho. Multiple people have tried to pull her out. She just gets an iron grip on the sides of the tub, and shakes her head 'NO'.
Anyways, Taylor was 22 years old. Her parents can't use their bathtub because of Taylor. Taylor hasn't left that tub for over 5 years, and hasn't eaten or drank anything. People have become worried, but have not given up.
Taylor's parents hired a detective and a psychiatrist to help with Taylor. The detective came and searched the home for anything that may have resulted in this. The psychiatrist sat next to Taylor and began asking questions.
Why do you sit in the bathtub?
Taylor stayed blank and slowly turned her head a pointed at the sink. The psychiatrist, lets call him Bob, noticed a board inside the sink. Bob walked over and picked it up. It was ouija board! The planchette was sitting next to it, aswell as a white candle and some silver.
Bob grabbed everything and walked back to Taylor. He took his place back on the floor and set the board down. Bob carefully placed the silver and lit the candle. He set the planchette in the middle of the board and began his questions.
Are there any spirits in this room?
The planchette moved to yes.
Are you a moon spirit or a sun spirit? Bob asked.
The planchette moved to sun.
God is good. Jesus is love. Bob said to ensure this was a real sun spirit.
The planchette moved to yes, and Bob then asked, Are there any spirits that have taken over the body of Taylor Winshell?
The planchette moved to yes.
Can we remove these spirits to regain Taylor's original form?
The planchette moved to different letters.
P-R-A-Y-E-R-S.
Bob prayed, and the lights turned off. The candle flickered on and off over and over. The lights flickered on again, and Bob watched Taylor climb out of the tub. He thought he had won, gotten the demon out of her.
Taylor screamed a glass shattering scream, and attacked Bob.


Taylor is still sitting in her bathtub.
Taylor used a Ouija board 5 years ago, and a demon took over her body. she is to pay with her life.


This is NOT my best work, I can write much better than this.
I am very tired and bored.

Sooooo yeeaahhh.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Telescope » Sun Nov 21, 2010 7:52 am

^^^ It's still good :D Like I said, I'm a horrible writer. This thread gives me more and more reasons to stay away from those Quija boards. Are they the same as WeeJee boards?
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby hunter172 » Sun Nov 21, 2010 7:54 am

Telescope wrote:^^^ It's still good :D Like I said, I'm a horrible writer. This thread gives me more and more reasons to stay away from those Quija boards. Are they the same as WeeJee boards?

Ouija is pronounced Weejee.
i don't understand why its spelled that way though.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Chara Dreemurr » Sun Nov 21, 2010 7:55 am

I'm confused.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby hunter172 » Sun Nov 21, 2010 7:56 am

ravenmoon wrote:I'm confused.

about?
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