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by #Spirit » Mon Oct 27, 2014 9:11 pm

Basic Story InformationHiya NightClanners! I'll be making an entire series based off of Spiritstar's... er... interesting past, hopefully you'll enjoy these because surely I'll enjoy making them. I might make a new chapter every week until it ends with her death.
Ask SpiritstarAlso, if anyone was wondering about what I'm going to do with
Ask Spiritstar since Spiritstar has died, just to let you know there is a 50% chance that I will be making a V.2. If I were to make the V.2, then it would take place in StarClan, Spiritstar would be an apprentice which she was happiest as and her scars would be removed, but then there is a 50% chance that I will not continue. I mean, I've made successfully 129 answers already.
New Ask?Of course I'll be continuing the ask pages! Though just not with my NightClanners, heh heh. Actually, I'll be thanking and crediting Erin Hunter for making the amazing ThunderClan medicine cats by showing my appreciation through another ask page specifically designed for them. Cats: Goosefeather, Featherwhisker, Spottedleaf, Yellowfang, Cinderpelt, Leafpool, and Jayfeather. So if you like my drawings and the original Warriors arc., then feel free to keep checking by my gallery until it is up!
Spiritstar's Past Comic As for the
Spiritstar's Past comic, I will not be continuing for nobody has shown interest.
Feel free to stop by NUT {NightClan's Untold Stories acronym, thanks Fish} anytime to see if there are new stories up!
Chapters!Chapter One
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by #Spirit » Mon Oct 27, 2014 9:43 pm
Cats involved or mentioned in this chapter wrote:Spiritkit = #Spirit
Snowkit = ~Bri Frozen~
Rainkit = ℱ ᴀ ʟ ʟ ᴇ ɴ ℒ ᴇ ᴀ ғ
Goldenleaf = open
Thornstar = #Spirit
Blackpelt = #Spirit
Dovepaw{flight} = #Spirit
Tawnykit = #Spirit
Redclaw = <Sandstorm>
Dappleleaf = #Spirit
Spiritkit and Snowkit tussled in the dirt, and while Goldenleaf was watching the two sisters fighting in the dust, Rainkit gave him quite a fright when he leaped onto his father's back nimbly. No one could ever be too sure in this camp, for the forest was quite the dangerous place. Goldenleaf began to calm down until another cat popped up on his other side, "Hiya!" It was his young sister-in-law, Dovepaw. "Ya takin' care of my sister?" She held a suspicious mix of facial expression.
Goldenleaf sighed and glared at her, "Yes, just fine, really." Pest. He'd always thought little of his mate's little sister.
Dovepaw brightened up, "Well, I'm going to become a warrior today!" She announced, "Redclaw said I'd done perfect on my assessment!"
"Great," muttered Goldenleaf, turning back to his kits.
"K, bye!" With that, an egotistic Dovepaw scampered off, Rainkit following and giggling loudly.
Snowkit and Spiritkit continued to tussle in the dirt, Snowkit easily pinning Spiritkit she squeaked, "I won!"
"Oh no ya don't!" Giggled Spiritkit as she tried kicking her off with back paws but couldn't. She frowned in disappointment as Snowkit stuck her tongue out.
Thornstar and Blackpelt were perched atop the highledge, Thornstar lay sprawled across, watching over camp with paws dipping over the edge while Blackpelt sat beside her, eyes narrow and pupils like slits. His tail was draped over his forepaws while he surveyed the area. Tawnykit is taking charge over the outlook rock... Redclaw took out a hunting patrol with several cats... he looked down at his daughter playing with her adoptive sibling sadly, if only he could keep her. He would if he could, though Thornstar forbid it, Spiritkit would have to live the rest of her life unknowingly.
Thornstar interrupted Blackpelt's wishful train of thought, "Well, isn't that just cute?" She held a smirk on her face
Blackpelt looked over at his former mate angrily, "What?"
"Snowkit has the little scrap pinned, shes too weak, Blackpelt. Its embarrassing. We should eliminate her, shes just another mouth to feed." Thornstar yawned and rolled over onto her back, "Besides, shes too loud, Dappleleaf is disrupted constantly."
Blackpelt glared at Thornstar with disbelief, "What?! Shes our kit! We could never do that! Are you even thinking?"
Thornstar hissed, "This'd all have worked out if you loved me, Blackpelt. Meteorspeed could never live up to me, I don't think you unde-"
"I don't think that you understand, Thornstar, I don't love you, and you must respect that." Retorted the deputy with an angry flick of his tail.
"I loved you."
"I didn't." Replied Blackpelt with a yawn as he padded down the highledge, and without looking at her he yelped, "Good day to you!" Anger bursting inside of him, he swept into the small deputy's den and curled up, fur brisling.
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by #Spirit » Tue Oct 28, 2014 9:25 am
WIPHow To Be A Stereotypical NightClanner With Spirit
►Get really pissed off at me when you see this because you are offended and feel like I am targeting you when I'm making a joke, I do these things, too
Making forms
►Under username write anything other than your username
►If you are speaking as your cat, make your cat get really offended under the "gender" slot
►NEVER EVER MAKE A MALE CAT BECAUSE NO ONE MAKES MALE CATS EVER
►Under "kin" write dead because there is no possible way that your cat has any kin left
►Under "history" write a super depressing sob story
►Remember, your cat has a worst backstory than me *WINK*
►Under "personality" write something completely different from how your cat will actually act once you start roleplaying him/her(probably her)
►Leave "other" blank
►Always use the detailed form
►Don't read the rules and never write the codeword that no one has ever written
►Check the rules right now to check for the codeword
►Realize that there is none
►Proceed
►Although it says that personality is a must write to be roleplayed out anyways
►If you make a kit, it must always want to be a medicine cat when it grows up
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