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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby KumyaKuma » Fri Nov 19, 2010 1:37 pm

Tales from Beyond
Here is a long one

Tasha, a 15 year old 10th grader, never found a reason to smile. She had no friends, except Natalie, her, so called, "Best Friend". Tasha's grades were poor, which made her even more depressed at the scolding of her parents.

Day by day, things got worse. Natalie had borrowed Tasha's favourite book and would not return it because her dog had ripped the book into tiny pieces. Tasha's mother would not take this in and every day, after school, her mother would ask her if Natalie had bought her a new book or not.

A few weeks later, Natalie issued books on Tasha's and Robby's library cards. She returned Robby his books, but not Tasha's. The librarian would not believe Tasha, or she would say that Tasha shouldn't have given someone else a library book.

Natalie had stopped sitting with Tasha anymore, because Tasha was considered L.S. And Tasha was given the reason that Natalie couldn't bare the smell of mud around the seat.

Why didn't Natalie just stop talking to her?

One day, Natalie came and sat next to Tasha and said, "Hey, you know; I'm into something major. I need a tarot reading."

Tasha's question was answered. Natalie still needed Tasha to get tarot readings. Natalie was using Tasha. That day, Tasha got her math papers. She had failed.

At home, her father had stopped speaking to her and her mother had shouted at her for not cleaning her room. She, being so sensitive, couldn't take all this and burst into tears when her mother had left her room. Tasha had slipped on the wet floor that evening, and hurt her ankle. Her mother had taken her lightly and paid no attention to her. This made her feel even lonelier.

"Did Natalie return your book Tasha?" called her mother (who used to make websites, and made one for Tasha too) out of her office, which was supposed to be the guest room.

"No." Tasha replied and moved away as soon as she could.

That night, Tasha could not sleep. Thoughts of Natalie and her famous friends laughing at her behind her back kept coming into her thought cycle. Sao she woke up, picked up her cards, shuffled them and laid them out.

The Ten Of Swords.

The worst point of fortune in one's life, forever.

"So this is what you've planned for me Natalie." And Tasha smiled with tears in her eyes.

The next morning, Tasha's mother came to wake her up for school.

"Wake up lazy, you'll be late for school! I'm not paying 100 bucks on your late penalty! Wa-" she realized that Tasha wasn't breathing any more.

Tasha was rushed to the hospital. The doctor declared her dead. He said that she had a broken nerve due to depression.

A month later, when Tasha's mother was checking Tasha's website mails, she came across a 'Thank you' mail. A tear came out of her eyes.

"She must have replied to a tarot request before she-"

The next few days many more 'Thank you' mails had been received. Then she noticed that pending requests were 0, but she swore that just the earlier day it was 29.

The next day, the phone rang. It was Natalie's mother, and she was crying. Natalie had been chocked to death. Fingerprints were being compared by the police.

They matched no one, but Tasha's.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Snampa » Fri Nov 19, 2010 1:41 pm

Ms. Bennington wrote:The doctor wanted to smile. He wanted to whisper words of encouragement to the delusional man. He wanted to scream, but the nerve filaments wrapped around his head and into his eyes made him do otherwise. His body walked into the cell like a puppet, and told the patient, once more, that he was wrong, and that there was nobody trying to deceive him.


I saw that on Creepypasta. :D I loved that one. It's one of my favorite scary stories now. :3

And woah. DragonFlight. That was awesome. o-o
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Fuko-Chan! » Fri Nov 19, 2010 1:55 pm

that took forever for me to read but it was awesome i don't exacltly get the ending though?
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Harpyβ€’ » Fri Nov 19, 2010 1:59 pm

You mean my story? Okay, I can explain it to you. :) Quote where you don't get it, and I'll make it easier to understand.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Chara Dreemurr » Fri Nov 19, 2010 2:41 pm

Ms. Bennington wrote:The doctor wanted to smile. He wanted to whisper words of encouragement to the delusional man. He wanted to scream, but the nerve filaments wrapped around his head and into his eyes made him do otherwise. His body walked into the cell like a puppet, and told the patient, once more, that he was wrong, and that there was nobody trying to deceive him.


What I don't understand is this part.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby PandoraStables » Fri Nov 19, 2010 2:59 pm

*THIS IS NOT ME I FOUND THIS ON A PARANORMAL TALK FOURM*
Freaky tho...


About 19 years ago when I was 17 a friend and I worked in a carpet mill where we made sample boards with carpet swatches on them. My mother worked with me as well. One day we had a new worker join our assembly line. She was tall, a bit chubby, and something just seemed strange about her, but my friend and I (being teens) thought she was interesting. As days went by we started talking to her and she told us people thought of her as a "priestess". She spoke of her use of Quija boards and seances her friends and she would hold on weekends. Little did we know she was only enticing us to dabble with the Quija to get close to us. As weeks went by, my friend Regina and I would talk about maybe getting a Quija and playing around with it for some fun and excitement, while still talking to the strange lady, finding her more fascinating each conversation we had with her. The strange lady invited us to play with her and her friends but Regina and I declined the offer, we found the lady interesting, but at the same time she had a scary presence about her.

Regina and I went to our local toy story after a few weeks of speaking with the strange lady. We brought the board to Regina's house as my mom would never allow one in our home, and Regina being a newly married 19 year old, her husband didn't care, he was at his family's business 12 hours a day, hardly ever awake when he was home anyways. We opened the box, and read the instructions, turned out all the lights in the living room, and had a lava lamp next to us for some light, as we placed the board on our knees. We were all giggly and excited as we got ready to have some fun. Regina says in a goofy voice, "I call upon a spirit with great strength to guide us tonight". The board began to move, we both were asking each other are you moving it? The board spelled out "No, neither of you are in control of this board." "You are both under my protection tonight." Right away we were hooked. The entity from the board said she was a mother of 3 named Latilda, killed in a fire that was accidently caused by one of her children. We spoke with this entity for weeks asking silly questions and also being told all kinds of fascinating stories. One night while we were playing and a new entity began to contact us. This entity was mischieveous and we were warned by Latilda(entity) several times to push him from the board and never speak with him. We didn't heed the warning.

Meanwhile at work we spoke with the strange lady a lot and she seemed to be getting frustrated with us because we wouldn't come to her seances. One night Regina and I were out buying cokes and snacks for our Quija session and we saw a poster of a missing teen. We thought hey let's see if we can track her through the Quija, using the stronger male entity we had been talking to, and maybe help this poor missing girl's family find her. Having no gps or anything like that back then, we played the board in the front seat of the car that night, stopping here and there to get directions to where this missing teen may be. (We were out in the middle of no where and hadn't a clue where we'd ended up, as we got close to the area we were "suppose" to find clues to the missing teen, our spirit Latilda pushed the male entity off the board and told us "Leave now, it's a setup! Go home now!" We didn't listen, only asking for the male entity to keep instructing us where to go. We get to a really dark, really long driveway with a dimly lit house waaay up top. Regina and I left the car and started sneaking up on the right side of the driveway in the yard area, looking around like we were sherlock holmes or something, I guess. We get up to the top of the hill and hide behind a tree and we can see into the house garage where 8 people were inside sitting at a table with candles. We sit there looking for a few minutes listening to the people hum and whisper, and one person stands up and looks out the door down the driveway as if they're looking for someone to drive up it. To mine and Regina's shock, it's the strange, weird lady from our workplace. Regina and I look at each other scared to death now. Regina motions and mouths, without speaking aloud, "Lets get out of here! Fast but quiet". We make our way to the car and Regina starts to drive away, looking back we now see that the strange weird lady we work with is at the bottom of the hill waving for us to come to her. Of course we didn't, we just kept driving until we found the gas station we passed a few miles before we got to our scary destination so we could ask for directions.

We get to Regina's home and ask the male from the Quija why it tricked us and what were the weird lady's plans with us. It said it liked playing games and it used us to bring us to the weird strange lady because she asked him to. Regina gets furious and says outloud, I'm the owner of this board and i control you!" It spells out, You have no idea.

We returned to work on Monday morning scared to death still thinking we'd have to see the strange weird lady at work. We never saw her again though. Regina called me one evening after work and said, "come over now please, it's important." I get there and her husband is sitting in their living room floor playing the Quija. Regina and I walk into the kitchen. She says her husband had been playing for a few weeks now after he got off work late at night while she was asleep and had been talking to the mischievious male entity...she had no idea.

She goes on to say now they have something in their house and she wants me to see so I don't think she's crazy. At this point I'm scared already because she sounded scared and so serious. We go into the living room, Regina turns out the lights and we all sit with the Quija on our laps with a lamp on next to the couch. My hands are a little shaky, and I'm looking at Regina and her husband, while they both have this scared look on their face. I look at Regina's husband and notice he has three long scratches that go from his cheek down his arm halfway then return on his side all the way down to the top of his blue jeans. I say "what the hell happened with the scratches?" He says, that thing dragged me off the couch a couple days ago. So now I'm really scared and wanna go home, but I keep my fingers on the little Quija controller. It starts to move now and while it does Regina says "please don't tell it to show itself again" "Just do something so (Me) can see we're not crazy". The controller is moving all around but I'm not watching what it's saying, I'm just looking around scared to death now.

The hall light comes on and we hear footsteps. I'm looking down the hall behind Regina and I see nothing. Their bedroom door opens and makes the usual noise it does when they open it, like someone pushing it hard to get it to open. In the winter I guess the door is harder to open.
Then we can hear the sound of their blankets being torn off the bed and a lamp falls over. The footsteps come back toward the hallway and down toward where we were in the living room. We are all three breathing hard and shaking now and the board isn't moving. The living room has carpeting so I'm thinking, now this is scary, we can't hear where it is if it comes in here now. Then we hear really heavy breathing like a dog panting when it's thirsty, behind Regina's husband. His head is pushed to the side toward Regina so I look at him and now see 3 weird marks like a 3 fingered person had slapped him on the cheek. Something kicks me in the side and then Regina is kicked in the back. Regina is crying now and she pulls out a bible from under her and starts reading. It's knocked out of her hand after about a minute and a page from the bible flies down the hallway as well as running footsteps that kind of sounded like someone running in highheels but someone very heavy.

I left Regina's home that night, scared all the way home, afraid I'd see something in the backseat looking at me or that thing would hit me or something. Thankfully, it didn't. In the weeks after that night I never touched the Quija nor did Regina, but her husband still did. Regina and I agreed we wouldn't play the Quija ever again, and I told her I couldn't go back to her home. Months went by she'd tell me things happening with she and her husband and the entity in their house. She and her husband divorced about 6 months after that scary night at her house when I was there, and she moved away to another state for a new start in life.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Harpyβ€’ » Fri Nov 19, 2010 3:27 pm

ravenmoon wrote:
Ms. Bennington wrote:The doctor wanted to smile. He wanted to whisper words of encouragement to the delusional man. He wanted to scream, but the nerve filaments wrapped around his head and into his eyes made him do otherwise. His body walked into the cell like a puppet, and told the patient, once more, that he was wrong, and that there was nobody trying to deceive him.


What I don't understand is this part.

Okay. What this part means is that the Doctor is being controlled by 'the entity', or whatever it is. 'but the nerve filaments wrapped around his head and into his eyes made him do otherwise'; this suggests the creature(s) control over the humans in general, including Amy, the psychiatrist, his webcam friend, and all the others. 'His body walked into the cell like a puppet' means that the doctor is being forced to walk into the supposedly delusional man's cell and tell him that he's wrong, no one is controlling everyone he knows, there is no entity, and that no one is trying to deceive him. But, given the fact that the doctor thinks, 'he wanted to whisper words of encouragement...he wanted to scream' eludes to the fact that the human part of him is still there, just subdued and controlled overwhelmingly.
But what it all comes down to is the fact that John was never insane after all; he was right the entire time, about everything.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Meep. » Fri Nov 19, 2010 3:54 pm

Me and my frined were in my back, and we have 3 gnomes my mom has *shivers* we sat in front of one, by the gardon, she said 'Ouch, something poked my back' we looked, and there was a small puncture, we looked around, and nothing couldve done that to her...so we sat there for awhile, and the same thing happened to me... so then, we heard the door bell go off, we answered it, and there was a peice of paper at the front, crumpled up...it was red and sticky (like blood..) but it wwasnt...we read it, and it was so wobbly we couldnt understand it well...it read this "Leave this back, or soon be perished" by then we though my boyfriend was playing with us, but we called, and his mom said he was with her at the 'mall' AKA her small store xD
But then we went back outside, and tyhe gnomes were moved...each in front, a crumpled piece of paper, like the first, all 3 peices were the same as the frist at the door, we sat there thinking someone was messing with us, then we went inside and played xbox, our dog started barking wildly, and then silenced after a shriek yelp..we ran out the back, and its ear was cut, almost off, then we locked ourselfs in the basement (only 4 people could fit btw xD) so we turned on the lantern, we were alone, so we sat, then we heard something scurry underneath our feet, I looked, she looked and we screamed and ran upstairs, under us, was the same note, and a demonic face...we ran outside, and screamed for help, almost everyone was away that day, so then we started to see the same denomic firgure apper around us, we though death was at hand..so we simply launched ourselfs ovcer the fence to our older friend, he was a preacher in training xD but we told him, and we orginized a blessing, which then took place at night, the day after, we were outside, the we stared at the gnomes, they moved twords us, no strings nothing was attached, they just slid across the soil right at us, the blessing failed, and we screamed, we ran twords our house, we locked ourself outside, with a huge rock, we failed at throwing them xD but we grabbed them, and killed them by slamming them to the fence, after all were broken, we sat down at a corner, our dog wimpered, and ran to us... then another day passed, I saw shadows and was doing homework, it was being annoying so I screamed "LEAVE ME ALONE!" next second a knife flung at my hand and missed like...a centimeter....we had a REAL preacher come and banish the demons from our home, it worked, you could feel the air was lighter, after that nothing like that hapened again...
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Chara Dreemurr » Fri Nov 19, 2010 11:50 pm

Ms. Bennington wrote:
ravenmoon wrote:
Ms. Bennington wrote:The doctor wanted to smile. He wanted to whisper words of encouragement to the delusional man. He wanted to scream, but the nerve filaments wrapped around his head and into his eyes made him do otherwise. His body walked into the cell like a puppet, and told the patient, once more, that he was wrong, and that there was nobody trying to deceive him.


What I don't understand is this part.

Okay. What this part means is that the Doctor is being controlled by 'the entity', or whatever it is. 'but the nerve filaments wrapped around his head and into his eyes made him do otherwise'; this suggests the creature(s) control over the humans in general, including Amy, the psychiatrist, his webcam friend, and all the others. 'His body walked into the cell like a puppet' means that the doctor is being forced to walk into the supposedly delusional man's cell and tell him that he's wrong, no one is controlling everyone he knows, there is no entity, and that no one is trying to deceive him. But, given the fact that the doctor thinks, 'he wanted to whisper words of encouragement...he wanted to scream' eludes to the fact that the human part of him is still there, just subdued and controlled overwhelmingly.
But what it all comes down to is the fact that John was never insane after all; he was right the entire time, about everything.


Thanks! That explains it!
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Fuko-Chan! » Sat Nov 20, 2010 1:51 am

[/quote]
Okay. What this part means is that the Doctor is being controlled by 'the entity', or whatever it is. 'but the nerve filaments wrapped around his head and into his eyes made him do otherwise'; this suggests the creature(s) control over the humans in general, including Amy, the psychiatrist, his webcam friend, and all the others. 'His body walked into the cell like a puppet' means that the doctor is being forced to walk into the supposedly delusional man's cell and tell him that he's wrong, no one is controlling everyone he knows, there is no entity, and that no one is trying to deceive him. But, given the fact that the doctor thinks, 'he wanted to whisper words of encouragement...he wanted to scream' eludes to the fact that the human part of him is still there, just subdued and controlled overwhelmingly.
But what it all comes down to is the fact that John was never insane after all; he was right the entire time, about everything.
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Thanks! That explains it![/quote]
Yes thats exactly what i didn't get thank you now it makes a lot more sense!
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