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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Shadow Wolf Lover » Fri Nov 19, 2010 11:34 am

Telescope wrote:I think that one was actually pretty awesome

my story about black cats?
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Harpy• » Fri Nov 19, 2010 11:35 am

No, it's not that it wasn't good, especially for coming up with it by yourself...I guess my thoughts on scary stories are very nit-picky. >.< I'm sorry.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Shadow Wolf Lover » Fri Nov 19, 2010 11:36 am

Ms. Bennington wrote:
No, it's not that it wasn't good, especially for coming up with it by yourself...I guess my thoughts on scary stories are very nit-picky. >.< I'm sorry.

thats ok :P i'll make mine better
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Telescope » Fri Nov 19, 2010 11:37 am

WolfE26 wrote:
Telescope wrote:I think that one was actually pretty awesome

my story about black cats?

yeah, and @ Ms. Bennington, it doesn't matter if you're picky. You are a good critic :D
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Shadow Wolf Lover » Fri Nov 19, 2010 11:38 am

Should i make more stories...or do i suck at them?
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Shadow Wolf Lover » Fri Nov 19, 2010 11:39 am

Telescope wrote:
WolfE26 wrote:
Telescope wrote:I think that one was actually pretty awesome

my story about black cats?

yeah, and @ Ms. Bennington, it doesn't matter if you're picky. You are a good critic :D

i agree, you are! :)
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Shadow Wolf Lover » Fri Nov 19, 2010 12:03 pm

The legend is that if you sit in three of the graveyard chairs from midnight until one minute after midnight, you will have the ability to see ghosts, but you will pay with your life. This, however did not apply to three high-school football players on Halloween Night in 1976. They pulled into the graveyard, in the middle of a large, open area. They had heard the legend and decided to try it, but one of them refused. He sat down and watched the other boys run from one chair to the other. Then he sensed that something was wrong. They were leaning over to the side with their eyes rolled back, rasping. The boy began frantically screaming for help as his friends kneeled over and grabbed his leg. It is said that the boy also saw spirits for an instant. The boys died and the survivor never spoke a word again. Of course, there were people mourning their loved ones nearby. They witnessed the event and filed a police report detailing what happened. No one really knows what those chairs are, except that they have been there since the town was founded.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Fuko-Chan! » Fri Nov 19, 2010 12:19 pm

i've heard many people write that story online and in the scary stories books but its still pretty cool ^_^
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Shadow Wolf Lover » Fri Nov 19, 2010 12:26 pm

Flame~*~ wrote:i've heard many people write that story online and in the scary stories books but its still pretty cool ^_^

yup its cool :)
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Fuko-Chan! » Fri Nov 19, 2010 12:42 pm

Keahi turned onto Highway 20 heading towards Silent Hill. He had heard from several people at is workplace that strange things have been happening there like buildings disentigrating, screaming coming from nowhere and people mysteriously dissapearing everyday. He needed to check it out and stop it all from going on. Keahi pressed down on the gas pedal as sped up, only 20 more miles until Silent Hill. Keahi arrived in Silent Hill to the sound of a foghorn, "Oh s**t, that means all of that weird s**t is going to happen now!" He said agrily. He pulled into the parking lot of an old diner and got out of his car, immediatly a green monster thing jumped out of the shadows and tried to attack him. Keahi reached in his pocket and pulled out a knife, he began stabbing at the creature. After several long minutes the thing fell to the ground in a bloody heap. He stepped over te body and entered the diner, it was empty and blood was spattered on the walls. Keahi heard a hissing noise from behind the counter, it was a giant maggot feasting on a human body. He backed away slowly checking his surroundings for anything helpful, he found an old revolver with several bullets. As keahi loaded the gun he walked over to the maggot and shot... Once. Twice. Three times and it finally stopped its feeding, "Poor person." thought Keahi. He exited the diner and ran across the street hoping to find the mental hospital, he turned onto Hial St. and continued on. Luckily enough he was right the hospital was only two blocks up the street, and he found several more bullets along the sidewalk. Slowly he walked up the front stairs and tried the door, it was locked. He cursed under his breath and raced around to the back of the hospital. There was an old moldy door he turned the knob, it was locked he walked a couple of step forward, then lashed backwards with a roundhouse kick. Splinters flew everywhere, Keahi fist pumped himself in triumph.
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