Interfector's army [dinosaurs unite!] Join on DA!

[Saphira344]

Accepted ^^

I edited some grammar and sentence building in the story a bit if you don't mind, the story is still the same though

I don't mind,I have to use spell check anyhow but some words it will not have the right spelling for. Still I try my best worst case using google to help.

[adelphi prime.]

Name:✈AgentOfCHROME✈

Characters name: Caprina
Species: Velociraptor
Rank/position: Spy if that's okay? I don't much know the ranks as far as I can tell.
Picture/reference: Here
Personality: With wry humor and quick wit, she's not the kindest dinosaur in the army, pushing you away if ever you venture too close. Her eyes, glowing a gold flecked with blue, glint darkly in the harsh sun. She has something of a quick demeanor, agile and swift. She is smaller -even for her species- and this makes her excellent at hiding and sneaking. However, this doesn't mean that she isn't a good fighter. Though lacking the size and brute strength of a Tyrannosaurus or Carcharodontosaurus, she can manipulate and take all the advantages to use them against her enemy. Caprina, despite her great amount of energy, struggles going long distances at great speeds, more of a sprinter.

WIP

Brief history: optinal

[InterfectorFactory]

You forgot something

[adelphi prime.]

You forgot something

Hmm... is it her colors? I looked through the rules again and didn't see anything... unless the rank is off.

[LOCW_Bluestarwarrior]

I believe you forgot your username.

[adelphi prime.]

I believe you forgot your username.

Ah, yes, *sarcastic* sometimes I'm a genius. XD

[LOCW_Bluestarwarrior]

It's fine. XD

[InterfectorFactory]

Accepted
Colors are fine, realistic enough (bird like even)

[adelphi prime.]

Accepted
Colors are fine, realistic enough (bird like even)

Okay, awesome! Thanks.

[Melonbread]

Whoops, I just realized that I've been drawing dinos like they have broken wrists all this time! Ah, that's embarrassing... I probably want to brush up on anatomy anyhow. I figured this would be the place to go. Anyone got some good references?