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[Thickshake]

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character:(what about if not a character)
name:
a bit about it:
how many verses:
what emotion?:
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for One Last Breath:
Sadly trotting down the beach
A single tear trickled down my face
My breath turned into a cloud in the cold winter air
A jet ski roared in the distance,sounds of happy children filled my ears
My freedom was taken,that very day
The feeling of wind rushing in my mane

My tear dropped to the ground,where a single flower grew
I felt chains being wrapped around me
Blood was staining my shining white coat
My mane turned black and died in a single moment
That was the very moment
My freedom was taken from me.....

For Mirandamay:
my lantern shines bright,in the very dead of night
my golden feathers shine,because i am content
my happyness revealed,to the whole world
because today and tomorrow,i am hear with you

if you look me in the eye,you are sure to see
the happyness that shines,inside of me
my beak glints,in the sunshine
because today and tomorrow i am hear with you
because today,and tomorrow i am hear with you.......

For One Last Breath:
If you hurt one of us,does it really feel that good?
The blood that fills our eyes,blinding us
The shiny knifes and the slaughters
it kills to kill a horse

does it really make you feel that good,if you bring that knife down on my back?
breaking my bones,to use for stew or food
if breaking my bones,destoys my freedom do you really care?
i don't think so if i'm dead...

do you really care if my friends they die,my family they die do you?
no no no i don't think so no no i never thought so
seriously do't you care even if i'm a sweet mare
please please stop this horrible curse that makes me shiver
because horse slaugter is not for fun
its just because you aren't us...

For Gabri:
Still hoping that theres life for me
Still hoping that i'm free
Hearing noises all night long
Tossing, turning for so long
Need a break from my old life
Feel like cutting my fleash with knifes

There may still be hope
But right now its lost
I dropped it in the gutter
Dripping down ever so soft
It might just fall out of the sky
But if theres none left
I might just die

My name may be cunning
But its light-hearted and true
At chirstmas i might give it to you
Because the birds still sing there song
And life must go on and on
But hope still dripps down the gutter....

For Gabri:
My names says it all
I am cunning insane but true
I love misery and sadness
Hate Life yes its just so true
Crime is on the loose they say
whats wrongs with that i think

I May be bad evil and werid to you
But for me i am insane
Have a sense of humour just like you
Why am i so different
Was i raised the wrong way?
I seem to cough up that question
All to soon....

[One Last Breath]

username:one last breath
character:

name:N/A
a bit about it:strong free
how many verses:2
what emotion?:sad alone free
payment:it is an uncommen

[Thickshake]

accepted! i will start now!!

[One Last Breath]

for One Last Breath:
Sadly trotting down the beach
A single tear trickled down my face
My breath turned into a cloud in the cold winter air
A jet ski roared in the distance,sounds of happy children filled my ears
My freedom was taken,that very day
The feeling of wind rushing in my mane

My tear dropped to the ground,where a single flower grew
I felt chains being wrapped around me
Blood was staining my shining white coat
My mane turned black and died in a single moment
That was the very moment
My freedom was taken from me.....


this poem is pefect thank you sooooo much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i love the way you made him into the way his is now!:D

[Thickshake]

thats okay! and i'm glad you like it!!!

[Mirandamay]

USERNAME:Mirandamay
CHARACTER:
Human apperance

X

Bird apperance

X

NAME:Lite
A BIT ABOUT IT: Her long lost love went away over sea's. He had said to her before he left that she must be his lighthouse and becon to follow home just in case he ever needed her guidance. Every night she goes out to the sea and paces the beach shore swaying her latern from side to side sining their song summoning him home. She will continue to do so until he comes home.
[someone very dear to me when away to the marines so this character is based off of him]
HOW MANY VERSE:You choose
WHAT EMOTION?:Um, you choose ill be happy with anything. Im not very picky.
PAYMENT:Im not sure what you charge for one so just let me know and ill send you a trade right away<3

[Thickshake]

umm anything really i i would love 2008 dogs! thanks for showing intrest!

[Mirandamay]

Sent a trade, let me know if thats okay

[Thickshake]

your order is done!

[Mirandamay]

Woah that was fast! Im glad you like the payment and i LOVE the poem you did such a good job! <333 Thanks so much