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Tea_Leaf wrote:
I'm probably really late in noticing this pup, but it was definitely not what I was expecting!
It's really creative and gives me a different feel in terms of color (since this dog has white as it's main color, rather than the greyish blue), but there is one thing that would make me enjoy the pup more.
Personally, I feel that the snout/ beak just looks a little cramped. Of course, it is modeled after an owl, but the shape of the beak is just... Weirding me out a little (well, since all other profile views of drawn birds I've ever seen usually had beaks that stuck out more and were sharper). This is, of course, my own personal opinion, and overall, I think the outcome is great!
Captain Kaycee wrote:Well, since I've finally started to feel better after all of my chaos for the past two weeks, I'll finish Tulvir's story. <3
Two years later...
The setting sun over the ocean waves brought a wave of peacefulness throughout Tulvir. The dragon did not know where his life was going to end. He had travelled far and wide, dodging terrible spiders, humans, and even other predators as well. He felt like there was nothing left in his life to do except wander aimlessly.
As he lifted his head to look at the ocean in front of him, something caught his eye. Three little figures were flying over the water towards him, their wings beating along either side of their bodies. As he squinted his fiery-induced eyes, he realised what they were in front of him.
Dragons! he gasped to himself. They were three little dragons that all were a part of his kind. As they landed in front of Tulvir, their little heads perked up.
"We've been waiting for you, Tulvir!" the green-coloured dragon squeaked.
"Yes yes! The spiders finally led you here!" the darker one chirped.
"Spiders? They wanted to hurt me!"
Tulvir couldn't believe it. These dragons were telling him that the spiders wanted to help all along?! He was running away from them in fear that they would hurt him, but they only wanted to bring him back to his family. As he glanced back at one of the trees, he noticed a single spider hanging from a web. But what surprised him more was the little bird that had perched itself on his crest.
His entire face lit up with joy when he saw the bird. He couldn't be more happier that it was alive and well, and had probably been the one to help guide him with the spiders as well. Now that he was at the ocean, he knew where he belonged. He had found his family.
Tulvir looked at the ocean in front of him once more, and began to descend into the water. His family was there for him, just as he was now there for the sea.
He was the dragon of the seas.
Captain Kaycee wrote:Well, since I've finally started to feel better after all of my chaos for the past two weeks, I'll finish Tulvir's story. <3
Two years later...
The setting sun over the ocean waves brought a wave of peacefulness throughout Tulvir. The dragon did not know where his life was going to end. He had travelled far and wide, dodging terrible spiders, humans, and even other predators as well. He felt like there was nothing left in his life to do except wander aimlessly.
As he lifted his head to look at the ocean in front of him, something caught his eye. Three little figures were flying over the water towards him, their wings beating along either side of their bodies. As he squinted his fiery-induced eyes, he realised what they were in front of him.
Dragons! he gasped to himself. They were three little dragons that all were a part of his kind. As they landed in front of Tulvir, their little heads perked up.
"We've been waiting for you, Tulvir!" the green-coloured dragon squeaked.
"Yes yes! The spiders finally led you here!" the darker one chirped.
"Spiders? They wanted to hurt me!"
Tulvir couldn't believe it. These dragons were telling him that the spiders wanted to help all along?! He was running away from them in fear that they would hurt him, but they only wanted to bring him back to his family. As he glanced back at one of the trees, he noticed a single spider hanging from a web. But what surprised him more was the little bird that had perched itself on his crest.
His entire face lit up with joy when he saw the bird. He couldn't be more happier that it was alive and well, and had probably been the one to help guide him with the spiders as well. Now that he was at the ocean, he knew where he belonged. He had found his family.
Tulvir looked at the ocean in front of him once more, and began to descend into the water. His family was there for him, just as he was now there for the sea.
He was the dragon of the seas.
Geada wrote:I find it a little weird that Fiery Gatoh didn't say anything about the 'Let It Go' dog being hers but yet it says so in the Archive now. I know it's the only dog that wasn't claimed and it's obviously hers,but still it sounds a little weird that she didn't claim the dog...? Am I missing anything here?
R e d p a n d a wrote:Geada wrote:I find it a little weird that Fiery Gatoh didn't say anything about the 'Let It Go' dog being hers but yet it says so in the Archive now. I know it's the only dog that wasn't claimed and it's obviously hers,but still it sounds a little weird that she didn't claim the dog...? Am I missing anything here?
She may have gotten busy with some real life events and just forgot about the thread![]()
Or maybe she wanted us surprised.
Her dog is cute anyway though
Geada wrote:Yes I know she might have gotten busy,I was asking because it was already in the Archives when in fact it would be added normally after the artist claimed the dog,just that. But yeah maybe it was a surprise? I don't know...
Raire wrote:Geada wrote:Yes I know she might have gotten busy,I was asking because it was already in the Archives when in fact it would be added normally after the artist claimed the dog,just that. But yeah maybe it was a surprise? I don't know...
Well, 27 dogs were claimed, so it was obvious and didn't need her claiming the dog. ^^;
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