Ravenclan {Accepting}

[electrastar]

(I changed the rules a bit, be sure to read them! Oops I forgot to add 'Have fun' and 'Follow the rules'.)

[<sandfeather>]

Yay i like them :3 and ill work on my grammer)

Hiss paded to Hazelpool "how are you doing?" he asked nuzzleing her

Heatherpaw limped to he medasine cat den and looked at Echosong "Um Echosong can i talk to you a minit?" she asked

[.dance]

nice! I just re read them))
Hazelpool
"Better, much better actually." she purred, returning the nuzzle with an affectionate little nudge.

[electrastar]

(Anyways, my cats are open.)

[canada]

Echosong:

I nod to Heatherpaw. "Sure, hold on." I reply. I turn to NightPaw. "Go lay in that nest." I instructed, then turned back to Heatherpaw. "Yes?"

[<sandfeather>]

Hiss purred "Im glad no one will ever lay a claw on you again!"

Heatherpaw looked at echosong "Would you be ok ifi became your.. um appretice?" she said in a tiny voice

[canada]

Echosong:

I was stunned. "I bought you wanted to be a...warrior apprentice! But, if that is your choice, then yes."

I reply, still fully shocked.

[<sandfeather>]

She saw the shocked exspretion "I know.. i just dont know if i can... everyone says i have to be a med cat im still thinking about it though.." she said glareing at jaggedpaw with a small smile on her face whitch faded after turnig to echosong

[canada]

Echosong:

I looked at Heatherpaw. "No, you should be a warrior. There is no right for you to not be."

[<sandfeather>]

"Im not sure I neaver even caught one peice of freash kill or even learned to swipe Iand I have been training for allmost a moon" she mewed in a sad tone eyes tearing up "plus jaggedpaw deseaves better then me like nightpaw she strong and brave" she said qweitly trying to make it so she was talking to herself but it could be heard