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Who's your favorite character?

Um Scarlet hello
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Vin of course!
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Finnegan heh heh
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Wittle Thorton <3
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Alistair fo sho
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Sammeh
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Warren!
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Edwin :D
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Re: ☸ Swindle ⚓ comment & critique

Postby .:A r i c a R e e:. » Thu Oct 02, 2014 10:19 am

ʎ ן ɟ u o ƃ ɐ ɹ p wrote:
    I'm glad you like it!! Was there anything that really surprised you?? I've been trying to get in that WOAH WHAT element x]


Yeah, your doing a good job at that. I love stories that your suprised with! x3 The last part you just added was kinda surprising o-O Are they plotting something? Scarlet's past also surprised me, and the fact she was raised by the captain, and who the first mate is, i could go on for a long time... XD Are you going to do more of Vin's past? heh heh.
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Re: ☸ Swindle ⚓ comment & critique

Postby ʞ ɔ ǝ ɹ ʍ d ı ʞ s » Thu Oct 02, 2014 11:11 am

    Thanks!! And that little ring was the one he snatched from Alistair :3 and I'll definitely be doing Vin's history, just later on when it's more relevant. Not so much his childhood, just how he got there n all. [he wasn't nearly as interesting as Scarlet when he was younger lol]
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Postby .:A r i c a R e e:. » Thu Oct 02, 2014 11:20 am

ʎ ן ɟ u o ƃ ɐ ɹ p wrote:
    Thanks!! And that little ring was the one he snatched from Alistair :3 and I'll definitely be doing Vin's history, just later on when it's more relevant. Not so much his childhood, just how he got there n all. [he wasn't nearly as interesting as Scarlet when he was younger lol]


Yay! Haha, but it would still be cool to know some of what he did as a kid ;p
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Postby ʞ ɔ ǝ ɹ ʍ d ı ʞ s » Thu Oct 02, 2014 11:30 am

    It hints at a bit, but not much. What I can tell you without spoiling anything is he lived alone with his mother, who remarried when he was around six or so. They moved onto her husband's vineyard in Abruzzo, Italy. So it was mostly just him running around and eating a lot of grapes x] probably falling off horses a lot because he wasnt supposed to be on them in the first place.

    [I already have about 90% of his first interlude finished if you'd like to read it, since it doesn't exactly tie into the main storyline :3 because itll probably be a while before I add it]
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Re: ☸ Swindle ⚓ comment & critique

Postby .:A r i c a R e e:. » Thu Oct 02, 2014 12:35 pm

Hahaha XD Seems fitting.

Hmmmm, i think i'll wait for the story to progress. Dont want to spoil anything >;3
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Postby ʞ ɔ ǝ ɹ ʍ d ı ʞ s » Thu Oct 02, 2014 12:39 pm

    Ok then :] I'll be adding reference sheets for Vin and Scarlet soon on the first page and a height chart with everyone on it except Sam. Poor Sammeh. [Ill probably add him later lol] I'm working on a family tree too soo yay references!
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Postby .:A r i c a R e e:. » Thu Oct 02, 2014 1:12 pm

ʎ ן ɟ u o ƃ ɐ ɹ p wrote:
    Ok then :] I'll be adding reference sheets for Vin and Scarlet soon on the first page and a height chart with everyone on it except Sam. Poor Sammeh. [Ill probably add him later lol] I'm working on a family tree too soo yay references!


Oh cool! XD Sad little sam, all left out.
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Re: ☸ Swindle ⚓ comment & critique

Postby ʞ ɔ ǝ ɹ ʍ d ı ʞ s » Thu Oct 02, 2014 1:15 pm

    Added them on the first post! :3 the height lineup is so sloppy its scary but its ok its only reference lol. And Sam was the accident ok my mind kinda just went, dude I have the best idea. And he turned out to be infuriating. But I love him
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Postby .:A r i c a R e e:. » Thu Oct 02, 2014 1:56 pm

Scarlet looks really cool @o@ And the height thing will help x3
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