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Re: WC: CYOA Discussion Thread

Postby Comettail76 » Tue Sep 09, 2014 8:26 am

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"What do you mean,'Daisies don't have thorns!'? You must be mistaken." - September 8th, 2014, Posted on Chicken Smoothie by Comettail76

Here's the warrior for the final spot in Forestclan for a warrior, and you are lucky to have her. She is the kindest, sweetest, least sarcastic cat around. She cleans the elders' den when she has spare time, and encourages the apprentices to do their best, no matter how bad they are at it. She even will play with the kits in the nursery before she goes to sleep. Every cat wants to be on the same patrol Daisyclaw's on, because she's great company. She would have become the deputy of Forestclan, if the leader had been more wise with their decision. Daisyclaw treats the youngest kits and the oldest elders equally - with kindness and respect. She loves the clan, and the clan loves her. No, not really.

Here's the warrior for the final spot in Forestclan for a warrior, and you are unlucky to have her. She is the most grumpy and sarcastic cat around. She does not clean the elders' den in her spare time, and discourages the apprentices to do their best, no matter how good of apprentices they are. She even terrifies any kit brave enough to ask her to play with them before she goes to sleep. Every cat does not want to be on the same patrol Daisyclaw is on, because she's horrible company. She will never become the deputy of Forestclan, unless the leader is a mouse-brain. Daisyclaw treats the youngest kits and oldest elders equally - with hatred and grumpiness. She hates the clan, and the clan hates her. Yet, she is still loyal to them for unknown reasons. At least she's a good fighter for battles with Brookclan.
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Re: WC: CYOA Discussion Thread

Postby ~*Amber*~ » Tue Sep 09, 2014 8:45 am

I don't get it :I

Top one sound like she has no flaws bottom one is the opposite
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Re: WC: CYOA Discussion Thread

Postby Comettail76 » Tue Sep 09, 2014 8:48 am

The top one was sarcastic, at the end of that paragraph I put,"No, not really." That was the only non-sarcastic part of it.
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Re: WC: CYOA Discussion Thread

Postby Arcaii » Tue Sep 09, 2014 8:57 am

Due to traditional naming rules, I'll have to ask if I can change her suffix to -claw. Otherwise, everything seems fine.
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Re: WC: CYOA Discussion Thread

Postby Comettail76 » Tue Sep 09, 2014 9:01 am

Okay, I'll change it.
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Re: WC: CYOA Discussion Thread

Postby ~*Amber*~ » Tue Sep 09, 2014 9:43 am

Ah XD so sorry i totally missed that >.>
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Re: WC: CYOA Discussion Thread

Postby Warriors13lover » Tue Sep 09, 2014 9:45 am

My Minnowflower needs two more kits ;) lol how drama-y would it be if her kits father was in the. other clan? Lol
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Re: WC: CYOA Discussion Thread

Postby cookie★ » Tue Sep 09, 2014 10:00 am

It would be even more of a drama if her kits' father was Beefur
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Re: WC: CYOA Discussion Thread

Postby Warriors13lover » Tue Sep 09, 2014 10:03 am

Omg! That totally would!!! Pretty please Arcaii? Lol
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