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[avaria]

I'm not very familiar with heartbreak scenes in stories, but I would have the it to be a cheating-related situation. The guy/girl tells the truth to the other they are in a relationship with that they are cheating on them, and then the one who was told the truth begins to cry and just starts to avoid the world or public and becomes anti-social due to it.

Totally, I'm definitely adding the anti-social part in, I just really want it to hit her hard and I don't know how to write it, she's 16 and this was her first relationship, ever. She thinks it's true love and all that.

[Jelly.]

Hey guys...
I need some help with a charater.
Her name is Samantha Kalian (Ka-Li-An)
She's got Brown hair at her shoulder, with dull green eyes.
She's about 5'4. She's got anger issues.
Problem is, in my story, she's friend with the main charater, but hates the main's other bff. So she hates Anna. She kinda has anger issues. But now I'm starting to question here. I can't really connect here to the secret fairy Rosalina, the main charater. What should I do? I don't wanna change her or make up someone knew, I'm just so confused.

[Rockito]

Question time from yours truly, Rockito



What is your favorite thing to write when in a situation where action is involved like fighting,etc.?



My favorite thing to write when that happens is when the character gets ready to fight one another, or when they have to use their agility to avoid another person from traps and such like in the action and adventure movies .o.

[Starfalling]

What is your favorite thing to write when in a situation where action is involved like fighting,etc.?

Mine is right before they start fighting.

P.S. Can someone please give me some critiquge on this?: viewtopic.php?f=57&t=2428878 I only have the first chapter posted.

[TheSongOfTheStars]

[quote="rosalynd"][center][size=85]I have a question for y'all. c:
How would you write heartbreak? A really good heartbreak scene, one that really upsets you.
I have one sort of planned for later on in my book, but I kind of want to write it now, haha.[/size][/center][/quote]
I stink at doing heart break but most of mybooks involve som yt?things like that. I usualy just try to keep things going without seeming insensitice.

[Rijo]

What is your favorite thing to write when in a situation where action is involved like fighting,etc.?

Call me crazy but I like describing the gore/ pain the characters feel as they fight makes the scene more lively.

[girl with wifi]

i'm a new member!
Dipper's Girl / Dip ➹
Will you critique other stories?
maybe
Anything you want us to know?
all my current stories have to do with Gravity Falls

[avaria]

i'm a new member!
Dipper's Girl / Dip ➹
Will you critique other stories?
maybe
Anything you want us to know?
all my current stories have to do with Gravity Falls

welcome \o/

[Rockito]

Welcome Dipper uvu Yay already posted 8 pages for fanfiction story in one day wow that's fast .o.

[Meroei]

Hiya Dip!

@rockito
nice