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[VesVes]

@Silverhart: Yeah, I think I agree. I think I'll start with the kingdom and then have her go on the journey, then figure out the nuances. But thanks for the help! It was really appreciated. C:

@everyone else: It took me a while to figure out what POV meant as well. But once I did, I started using the term everywhere. XD

As for the wolf story, it looks interesting! I'll give it a read.

[avaria]

@Vesta
welcome! c:

[Meroei]

Saddest death you've ever read, guys?

Sorry if I'm a little late to answer this.....
Has anybody read My Sister's Keeper? I'm not gonna say the death, since it's a GIGANTIC spoiler, but if you've read the book than you know what I mean.

When I first figured out what POV meant, I felt so stupid

[TheSongOfTheStars]

Grr... I babysat for 7hrs yesterday then I went to chrch for 5 hrs to do some kind of game stuff. What really ticks me off is that my mom lets me go babysit but I can't stay at home alone.
Saddest deaths? Always the sweet animal freind. If its a movie its sad if they make dramatic enough and all the other chacators are sad

[avaria]

Grr... I babysat for 7hrs yesterday then I went to chrch for 5 hrs to do some kind of game stuff. What really ticks me off is that my mom lets me go babysit but I can't stay at home alone.
Saddest deaths? Always the sweet animal freind. If its a movie its sad if they make dramatic enough and all the other chacators are sad

It's vice versa for me, I can stay home whenever I like, babysitting? Nope. ;u;

And I agree, animal deaths are the worst, I remember I read a book where an animal died and it felt like my heart was ripped out, run over, and then run over again, lol.

[TheSongOfTheStars]

Ok..Its the same with makeup, she insits I wear it. Why can't I leave mascara alone until I'm 18?
ok writer question how can you tell if you story is bad and if so can you fix it?

[Visceryl]

i'm a new member!
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[avaria]

i'm a new member!
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welcome!

[watermelon.]

Welcome! Ugh ;.; I had a really bad headache this morning so I lost all my good ideas. I had like the best story idea..

[䏠xote]

i'm a new member!
➹ arrow, / arie, arrow / i haven't posted any stories here yet /

welcome! ouo

Welcome! Ugh ;.; I had a really bad headache this morning so I lost all my good ideas. I had like the best story idea..

that's too bad. i usually base my ideas on my dreams, but if i don't write them down immediately after a wake up then POOF-- it's gone. so i understand the feeling. also, i'm sorry you had a headache. :c