~*OakClan*~ (Open & Accepting!!)

[Willow-way]

THIS ISNT ENGLISH CLASS YOULL LIVE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! )

[To Infinity&&Beyond]

{Okay this is a mess. xD
Wolf - kind of god-modding but i don't think you realized that so whatever, just try not to like do it again
Cat bread - chill.
Willow - yeah, your grammar could use some help, because sometimes it is kind of hard to understand. It says in the rules "Please try to use proper grammar and mechanics, but I understand we all make mistakes."
Lucy - chill.
Charlize - chil.
Everyone - chill. }

[fowauke]

(*taking a chill pill* much better!)

[Willow-way]

My computer also doesn't do spell check otherwise I would be better )

[katarinabluu]

[ ;L k. And Sootcloud is in the warriors den so. er. yeah. Edit; then go back and read it thats What I do c:]

[To Infinity&&Beyond]

{I understand that, but it's the mechanics I'm more worried about. Like, commas, periods, quotation marks, etc. }

Greenstar walked into his den to find Flamewing there. "Flamewing?" He asked, his voice questioning.

[ardentsongbird]

(( Claming down. And, I will try my hardest to not god-mod. ))

Flintfoot

He walked towards the medicine den, needing treatment for the gash on his muzzle.

[fowauke]

Flamewing sat up. "Ah! Greenstar! I've been meaning to talk to you! And Willowleaf said to wait here." She muttered the last part. "Its about the other cats." She glanced at the medicine den. "I would also like to say sorry. I freaked out when I saw the fighting, and that's not how a Warrior should behave, let alone the deputy." She apologized, bracing herself for Greenstar's scolding, but making sure to keep in mind to talk to him about the other cats.

[Willow-way]

mechani hwat? in my own defense im am also in 6th grade and I like to just type my ideas and not worry about it )

Willowleaf watches and pads into her den and quickly to the herbs storage and her paws quickly reach for herbs.*

[atticus,]

As Flamewing came out of the moonpool, Pineleap hid behind a rock. As he couldn't see her anymore, he started to pad to camp. He saw her again, but in camp. He then walked into the medicine cat den. "What happened here!?" Pineleap asked, very loudly. He flickered his tail and stared at Flintfoot.