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by SkySmoke » Sat Nov 06, 2010 9:14 pm
Not really a...romantic couple, but a pair:

Lune (Shudder before)


Shudder ♀***********************Silence♂
Lune was jerked awake by the raspy, and somewhat annoying, male voice.
“Get up! We can’t stay here!”
She slowly opened her eyes. The last thing she could remember was falling. She looked around for the person the voice belonged to, but couldn’t see anyone.
“W-who are you? Where are you?” She stuttered.
“It doesn’t matter, just get up and get moving!”
Lune mustered all the strength she could and heaved her body to a standing position. She felt oddly detached, like her body would barely hold itself up. She swayed heavily, almost falling.
“Don’t fall! Whatever you do, don’t fall!”
The voice again. It was definitely male, and it sounded young. Now that she was standing she looked around to see if she could find the voice.
“You won’t find me, not here. Just…come on, lets go.”
She shook her head and followed the voice. It was leading her though tunnels and caves. She had no idea where she was and was desperately trying to remember how she had gotten there.
“Where am I?”
“The worst place you can imagine, and if you don’t hurry up, we will both be stuck here…forever.”
“Forever?”
“Yes, death is permanent you know. The only way out, at least of this place, is before they know you are here.”
Lune picked up her pace, following the voice she could not yet see. After a few minutes of twisting and turning they came to a huge chasm. Lune cautiously walked to the edge; the bottom was not visible.
“The only way out is to jump across.” The voice informed her.
“What?! I can’t…there is no way.”
“You have to try. Trust me, you don’t want to be stuck here.”
Lune backed away from the edge, got a running start and leaped as far as she could. To her surprise she landed on the other side, one back foot scrambling on the edge, but other wise okay. Her whole body hurt though and she just wanted to rest.
“Are you here?” She whispered; feeling stupid talking to something she had never been able to see.
“Of course I am. I can’t leave you.”
Lune spun around and gasped. She could see where the voice was coming from. It was a small, white pup. White wasn’t quite the right color though, it was more…translucent…ghost like in appearance. Where its eyes should have been were black holes and it was wrapped in chains; one around his neck that was fastened with a lock, one around his tail and one around his left front paw. His mouth didn’t move when he spoke; Lune heard him in her mind.
“Who…what…are you?” She asked.
“My name is Silence, and I am your soul. Which is why I can’t leave you.”
“My…soul? But you’re…male?”
“Yes, I am. Your soul doesn’t always match your gender.”
“Oh…and…you’re…young?”
“Yea, think of me as your….inner child also. You were very vain and childish in life, and cared mostly about yourself. That greatly effects my appearance. Which is why I have all these chains. You were always so wrapped up in yourself you didn’t notice much else.”
Lune though about how much pride she took in her appearance. She always kept her pure black coat clean and well groomed. The only thing colorful about her were her startling blue eyes. She was a head turner and often drew attention wherever she went. Thinking back, she realize that maybe she had been a little too into her looks.
“A little doesn’t cover it,” Her soul spoke into her mind, “You were selfish and conceited, sometimes to the point of making fun of others because of their looks. It is because of that you have been doomed to walk the earth looking the way you do now. Most people can not see you, but to those who can you will look like their worst nightmare, like walking death. Instead of making people smile, you will make them shudder, and that is your new name.”
“The way I look now? What do you mean?”
“Come.”
Lune - Shudder- followed the pup over to the edge of a lake.
“Go ahead, look for yourself.”
She crept cautiously to the edge and peeked over. What she saw made her sit back in shock. She was nothing but a skeleton with blood red eyes. Instead of being beautiful she was horrifying to look at. She turned to Silence.
“I’m going to look like this…forever?”
“Yes.”
“Why? And why is your name Silence anyway?”
“My name is Silence because for your whole life you let how you look be the focus of your attention. You would ignore that little voice that told you to be nicer. So now, you will walk earth like this forever, so you know what it feels like for people to judge and dislike you based on your looks, and with me to constantly remind you why.”
Vincit Omnia Veritas 


There's some people who are so much a part of us that they'll be there with us no matter what. They are our solid ground, our north star, and the small clear voices in our hearts that will be with us...always ~ Alexis Castle | | We are bound by our choices, but we are more than our mistakes ~ Kate Beckett | |




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by SAPPHOLYTE » Sun Nov 07, 2010 12:50 am
Vellamore wrote:SkySmoke wrote:Not really a...romantic couple, but a pair:

Lune (Shudder before)


Shudder ♀***********************Silence♂
That was prrrobably one of my favourite stories I've ever read ... Wow, I really like how you used all the different parts of the dogs as little symbols for the characters, that's waay clever of youu .
You should write some more storiess(:
What Vella said, that was simply amazing. And a good lesson, even though I don't believe in souls it's kind of terrifying to think of what you can do to it by your actions, then you have to live
[or die] with it forever. *shudders*

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by Faint » Sun Nov 07, 2010 1:27 am
Sir Seven wrote:Vellamore wrote:SkySmoke wrote:Not really a...romantic couple, but a pair:

Lune (Shudder before)


Shudder ♀***********************Silence♂
That was prrrobably one of my favourite stories I've ever read ... Wow, I really like how you used all the different parts of the dogs as little symbols for the characters, that's waay clever of youu .
You should write some more storiess(:
What Vella said, that was simply amazing. And a good lesson, even though I don't believe in souls it's kind of terrifying to think of what you can do to it by your actions, then you have to live
[or die] with it forever. *shudders*

Written in such a moral way. Clearly showing a moral.
One thing and one thing only...
Beautiful Win XD
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by Crippling Rogue » Sun Nov 07, 2010 4:08 am
Rainpelt wrote:SkySmoke wrote:Not really a...romantic couple, but a pair:

Lune (Shudder before)


Shudder ♀***********************Silence♂
I agree with them, that was amazing, you did a wonderful job :3
I love the moral story of their companionship! Very great!

You're an excellent writer!
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