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Embyr by Gwenfoxe

Artist Gwenfoxe [gallery]
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Embyr

Postby Gwenfoxe » Wed Aug 13, 2014 6:27 am

My new OC.
Yes, he's crying.
Deal with it.

This took about 45 minutes.
Just your average gay, two spirit, native american person. I'm Foxe on FR.
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Re: Embyr

Postby Gwenfoxe » Wed Aug 13, 2014 4:00 pm

I absolutely hate this drawing.
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Re: Embyr

Postby Tea_Leaf » Sun Aug 17, 2014 10:11 am

I really like this! <3

The lines are really clean, and his design is quite creative. c:
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I'll wither,
So peel away the bark.

'Cause nothing
Grows when it is dark.


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Whoa-oh-oh oh
Cover your crystal eyes
And feel the tones
that tremble down your spine.


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Re: Embyr

Postby swampfiend » Sun Aug 17, 2014 10:29 am

It's good!
Though, if I could give some constructive criticism: The snout is a bit large, try shortening it. Also, you forgot to color the tongue, unless he has a blue one ^.^
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Re: Embyr

Postby Balmino » Sun Aug 17, 2014 11:16 am

It's sooooo cool :)
However, as Princess pointed out, the snout does need shortening slightly and needs to be a little bit thinner. Also, you could maybe edit the ears and make them a little bit bigger.
Anyway, I love the design! The colours go perfectly!
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Re: Embyr

Postby Gwenfoxe » Fri Aug 22, 2014 8:58 am

Thank you guys so much!
And yes, I agree. The snout needs shortening, and the tongue needs colouring.
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Thank you though, perhaps I could re-do him but with these things added.
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