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by Baylin » Mon Aug 11, 2014 4:31 pm
Coolpaw5 wrote:I like reading about deaths, if they aren't like, super descriptive. o3q
I know what you mean
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Billy was walking in the park one day. He pulled out his phone but tripped and landed in the bottom of a well, he landed on his head which knocked him out cold and gave him a nasty cut. It wasn't long until he drowned.
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by GizmoTheDragon » Mon Aug 11, 2014 4:32 pm
So many diaries :o
IMO, a good death scene is nice in context and as a plot tool. But if it's just death for the sake of death and gore for the sake of gore, then why bother? It's monotonous. (if the body count starts to rival that of your average genocide, then I start losing interest.)
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by VesVes » Mon Aug 11, 2014 4:34 pm
Holy sheep I forgot how many diaries I made. O.o I think I Saltface is the one I was talking about, although Papers could technically count, since I was planning for normal stuff to happen on that one, but I guess I just lost the muse to do so.
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by Coolpaw5 » Mon Aug 11, 2014 4:39 pm
I'm watching Sesame Street, and they're singing about napping. >.>
Hey, personal question, if you do something embarrassing regularly, (like wetting your bed or something) and your friends ask you about it, would you tell them?
ᑕᖇᗩᔓᎩ?xxxxxxxxⓃⓞⓡⓜⓐⓛ? Eᴠᴇɴ ɪғ ʏᴏᴜ ᴡᴇʀᴇ ʙᴏᴛʜ, I ᴡᴏᴜʟᴅ sᴛɪʟʟ...
Wʀɪᴛᴇ ᴀ ᴅɪᴀʀʏ ᴀʙᴏᴜᴛ ʏᴏᴜ ᴀɴᴅ ᴘᴏsᴛ ɪᴛ ᴏɴ ᴛʜᴇ ɪɴᴛᴇʀɴᴇᴛ.
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