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WC: CYOA Archives (No Posting)

Postby Arcaii » Mon Aug 11, 2014 2:42 pm

The first thread is here!
The second thread is here!

The discussion thread is here!


Welcome to the archives. This thread is entirely for keeping a tab on everything that's happened so far. This will likely be a little untidy at first, so I hope you'll excuse me for that.

Please do not post in this thread! This is entirely for recording the adventure.
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Re: WC: CYOA Archives (No Posting)

Postby Arcaii » Mon Aug 11, 2014 2:49 pm

Things to list:

-Character introductions
-Where skills are added to
-The arcs of the story
-Fancharacter appearances
-Character trivia
-Fanart

Possible things to list:

-The 1in7s (where a roll decided a choice that was the only one of its category chosen, despite the fact that all other choices were the same - for example, "stay hidden" was commanded 6 times and "run home" was commanded once, and "run home" was chosen by the roll)
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Re: WC: CYOA Archives (No Posting)

Postby Arcaii » Wed Aug 13, 2014 6:55 am

Trivia for Story One
This is where information that generally isn't relevant to the story can be found.



CLAN TRIVIA

  • Certain parts of the culture are changed from canon Clan traditions. For example...
  • Toms are not allowed near the nursery if there are kits less than a moon old. This rule originated from the days when the Clan was relatively new - toms were still aggressive, even murderous towards kits that didn't have their blood. In order to keep the community in harmony and the kits alive, any tom who was not the medicine cat (and thus selectively chaste, therefore not seen as a threat) was disallowed from the nursery altogether. As the Clans became more 'civilized', the rule was slowly reduced to simply one moon.
  • Like the aggressiveness in toms, the cannibalism in queens was eventually bred out. However, some still believe that in times of great stress, the queens will devour their kittens, and some will still just straight up abandon their kittens if their nerves are pushed too far. As a precaution, most cats leave the nursery alone, unless they're bringing food or checking up on a patient.
  • The cats are technically diurnal, meaning that they are active during the day and the night. This is where the culture differences in the two Clans are most apparent - BrookClan tends to be more active during the day, while ForestClan prefers to be active during the night. For this reason, ForestClan has better night vision.
  • Another difference is the diction and tone the Clans use - ForestClan cats tend to speak quietly (so as to not scare off prey), and use more literal phrasing. BrookClan cats are usually louder (as their prey lives underwater) and use more slang.
  • The mythology of the big cats is still present. However, there are some differences - Leopard, Tiger and Lion are three individuals, rather than a species, and were noted for their actions and colors. It is said that they serve as the guardians of the Clans, with Tiger favoring ForestClan, Leopard favoring BrookClan, and Lion serving as the balance of power.
  • It's not entirely uncommon for kits to die before they turn a moon old, especially for first-time mothers or large litters. However, Clan life provides much more safety and health than loner life, so it's more likely that the kits will survive than not.
  • Leaders do not gain nine literal lives when they become leader - instead, they supposedly receive the memories of nine cats, so they can lead their Clan better than the previous leader. This is supported by leaders having knowledge of things that they have never interacted with before, as well as almost all leaders becoming vastly mature than they were as a deputy.


CHARACTER TRIVIA

  • The father of Sparrowpelt's kits is not in the Clan - it's rumored that she had a one-nighter with a loner.
  • Rookpaw's father is unknown, and she was the only surviving kit out of her litter.
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Re: WC: CYOA Archives (No Posting)

Postby Arcaii » Mon Aug 18, 2014 11:14 am

Story One Archives


1) A faint breeze seems to awaken your senses to the sights and smells of the world.
2) You know, they say mollies are less temperamental than toms.
3) I'm sure that being that dark will help you when you start hunting at night.
4) So, to review...
5) It's a pleasure to meet you, Rookpaw.
6) "I'm not even sure why they gave her an apprentice, frankly."
7) Fogpaw had warned you about this.
8) No escaping it then
9) "It is because of our ancestors that we may live in peace."
10) "Look, kid, I'll be honest..."
11) Along the west border...
12) Rivers are just big brooks, aren't they?
13) The two of you continue on to the lake.
14) "Take it easy, little one."
15) Applefoot's gaze is remarkably chilling.
16) Her voice is rather brutish for a molly.
17) You greet Batstream with a tail-wave.
18) "Good! Shall we get onto swimming, then?"
19) "What couldn't I learn from catching a trout?"
20) "What happens if I lose?"
21) Wow. Minnows are stupid.
22) Judging by Applefoot's expression, you look like an idiot.
23) You glance over at Applefoot, who looks about as bemused as you are.
24) "Who's that? Who're you?"
25) "I didn't know fish were so polite."
26) "Well, we can't always help that."
27) "What's going on?"
28) "Wonder if it's ForestClan?"
29) Hailfang is pretty much composed of grace and skill.
30) "Sorry about that."
31) He's more angry than he should be, really.
32) "I'm a Clan cat, Knotpaw."
33) "Crowcloud is a master at these situations."
34) Unfortunately, you get too confident.
35) As it turns out, Eveningtail is a fantastic teacher.
36) "You're quite a skilled hunter already, Rookpaw."
37) The deputy purrs in amusement.
38) "Why do you put up with that?"
39) "Silly me, I should have smelled you sooner."
40) You're quiet until you get home.
41) "The cursing of apprentices just started."
42) "Guess that makes me a hypocrite."
43) Oh, crap.
44) You dream of water and lavender.
45) Either way, it doesn't matter.
46) Try to be more polite this time, yes?
47) "This is ForestClan territory."
48) "Didn't you notice the fur?"
49) Well, alright then.
50) "What're you doing here?"
51) "Eveningtail wants to talk to you."
52) "What is the matter with you two?"
53) You do your best to not stiffen.
54) "What would be so bad about me being found?"
55) "Enough."
56) "She just seems...misunderstood."
57) One day, the tension finally breaks.
58) "This is a very serious, possible volatile meeting."
59) The smells of the forest are fascinating.
60) "You want to know what happened, don't you?"
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Re: WC: CYOA Archives (No Posting)

Postby Arcaii » Sat Aug 23, 2014 5:52 am

61) "I'll find you."
62) "Listen to the river, if you can't see."
63) "Are you alright?"
64) Both of you are serious and worried.
65) "Well, you sound unenthusiastic."
66) You need to be careful about it.
67) A voice jolts you out of your rumination.
68) "It just matters, alright?"
69) Neither of you move for what feels like an eternity.
70) "There's no real good way to explain myself here, is there?"
71) He stares back pleadingly.
72) The patrol plans have been working splendidly.
73) "What're you doing?"
74) "That's all it takes."
75) "I was just taking a break, anyway."
76) "Not if she wants you to."
77) She doesn't look thrilled, but she gives you a faint smile.
78) It surprises you that there's a hint of warmth in her voice.
79) "What are you thinking about?"
80) "This is all my fault."
81) "I don't know who I can trust."
82) "I'll find out what happened, and solve this whole thing. I promise."
83) Something strikes you about that.
84) "Then who might have told him?"
85) There's not much else here.
86) "Now, where have you been?"
87) You consider making a snide comment.
88) "What's your part in all of this?"
89) "The time has come for a new deputy."
90) Applefoot gives you a semi-approving nod.
91) Well, no two ways about it.
92) "Excuse me?"
93) You're startled into obedience.
94) "If she wants to see me as an enemy, she can."
95) "What are you talking about?"
96) "It'll be a quick visit."
97) "Hang on. There's someone ahead."
98) Her eyes are as steely as with Cinderpaw.
99) "It didn't work for Thriftwhisker. It won't work for you."
100) Your stomach drops into something cold.
101) Everything's a little foggy.
102) You don't say anything.
103) "How can you expect me to understand?"
104) "Can I trust you to talk this time?"
105) "Well, you know everything now."
106) The familiar fire is in your heart again.
107) "I don't want you to end up in the lavender, is all."
108) "You have to answer for what you've done, Thriftwhisker."
109) "I'm going to tell the Clan everything tonight, whether you like it or not."
110) "You were the one that found him, right? What happened, exactly?"
111) There's a very bad feeling in your stomach.
112) "What are you doing away from BrookClan territory?"
113) "Trust me when I say that it's a very long story.
114) "Where's Knotpaw?"
115) "We need to talk outside."
116) "Now, let's get started."
117) "What do we do first?"
118) "We've gotten everything we can."
119) "Good luck."
120) "Keep everyone in camp. We're having a trial."
121) "Rookpaw, perhaps now you'd like to explain everything."
122) "I'll bet Rookpaw can remember what you said."
123) This surprises Beefur, seeing as his eyes widen, but he says nothing.
124) "You're smarter than I anticipated, Rookpaw. Well done."
125) Five moons pass.
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Re: WC: CYOA Archives (No Posting)

Postby Arcaii » Tue Sep 16, 2014 10:30 am

Story Two, Arc 1



1) Beginning.
2) Of course.
3) Yes, you can remember now.
4) "The name's Charlie."
5) "Where are you from?"
6) "I just want to get back to them as soon as possible."
7) "Alright, kid, you ready?"
8) Now you feel stupid.
9) "For a first timer, you're pretty good."
10) "It ain't nothing new."
11) You hate everything about this.
12) Charlie could not look more at ease.
13) She's being honest with you.
14) You can work with that.
15) "That's what I said."
16) You puff out your chest proudly.
17) You try to stay calm, but your fur bristles.
18) You frown, saying nothing.
19) You're already asleep by the time she walks away.
20) The tom fixes you with a hard stare.
21) You have no idea what branding is, either.
22) "That's the warrior way."
23) Two cats have turned into the alleyway.
24) "You help me teach him some manners."
25) "I'll let you be the judge on what to say to her."
26) Mist stares at you, then bursts into laughter.
27) Thirty seconds pass of complete silence.
28) "You new here?"
29) And so on, and so forth.
30) "I can't be with you all the time."
31) "Think you can handle that?"
32) "Lead the way."
33) "What's going on?"
34) "How're you holding up, kiddo?"
35) "You were there, weren't you?"
36) "I'm not expecting you to side with me, Asterpaw."
37) You shudder and walk faster.
38) "What time is it now?"
39) "How could you think that they're remotely similar?"
40) You're reminded of your lost leg.
41) "I didn't know this was someone's territory."
42) "Close enough."
43) Boy, they are pathetic. =
44) "You mean you don't know?"
45) "I suppose so, yeah."
46) "Is he a criminal?"
47) You're surprised by how little you mind.
48) "You know the rules?"
49) "Have I graduated?"
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Re: WC: CYOA Archives (No Posting)

Postby Arcaii » Tue Sep 15, 2015 5:39 pm

Story Two, Arc 2



1) You're not sure what happened, exactly.
2) "All strangers, too."
3) Your eyes widen.
4) "Sure."
5) "You ought to announce yourself."
6) "Are you serious?"
7) Where is everyone?
8) You'll find her eventually.
9) "She isn't anywhere."
10) "Do you know where he is?"
11) "You gotta hide me!"
12) "I had no idea I was going to cause that much trouble."
13) "So, I guess I'm in your debt now?"
14) You just wish you'd gotten more sleep.
15) You leave without another word.
16) Oh, stupid you.
17) "Cut me some slack."
18) "Alright. When are you free?"
19) "Never know who's gunna take it."
20) "Boy, what're you upset about?"
21) Something is moving inside.
22) "Bring them around."
23) "None of us are travelers, little one."
24) Pretty Boy gives you a smile of complete and utter contentment.
25) "Take me with you."
26) Oh, no. Crap crap crap.
27) "Didn't know what to do with it, anyway."
28) "Didn't expect that, now, didja?"
29) "How did you lose that foot?"
30) "They must have assumed I'm dead by now."
31) "You'll know it the moment you see it. Even smelling it, you'll know."
32) "When do you plan to leave?"
33) Then again, she might prove herself.
34) "What're you so squeamish for?"
35) "As soon as my debt is paid to Jay, I'm heading off."
36) "Pretty Boy didn't tell you, huh?"
37) "So what's the issue?"
38) "What kind of favor?"
39) Ten minutes pass.
40) "Here comes the fun part."
41) It tastes bland and dry, but it's food.
42) At home, things would be so easily handled.
43) "It's gunna get real ugly here."
44) You wonder how Scat handled these days.
45) Oh, no, a history lesson.
46) "How long ago was this?"
47) If it's possible, she looks even more sheepish.
48) At first, it's silent.
49) "This isn't just a hop over to the next block."
50) There's a few minutes of silence, during which you get lost in memories.
51) This next part, in retrospect, is embarrassing.
52) "We're getting you home no matter what."
53) "You're already coming with us."
54) The neighborhood is empty and silent.
56) The toms are still arguing, and it's getting heated.
57) "I'm hearing through the backroads that you're leaving soon?"
58) "Thanks. You can go now."
59) You sigh.
60) "No one puts any value on a life that isn't their own."
61) "I've heard that the rain is the best liar in the world."
62) The rain doesn't let up any further.
63) What on earth was that?
64) She tilts her head a bit, examining your stump.
66) Today is odd.
67) She can find you herself.
68) "This rain is something awful, isn't it?"
69) "If I'm outside the city, finding food should be a breeze."
70) "So what's the plan for now?"
71) "You don't mind eating other stuff."
72) Scat makes a very strange hissing noise that you think is a laugh.
73) "Actually, it's a good time for you three to visit."
74) "She's gunna have no idea what happened."
76) You would never have caught anything in grass like that.
77) "What're you doing here?"
78) "I'll send word if I can."
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