:~:Sweet.Insanity:~: wrote:♋Username: :~:Sweet.Insanity:~:
♪Gender/sex: Female
✡Name: Sakura meaning Cherry Blossom in Japanese
♡Backstory: Sakura was born to a rather sickly family, her mother died when she was giving birth to Sakura and her father lost his life to a dog when she was 3. She has always had a strange affiliation with nature and spends hours on end observing Cherry Blossom trees, She makes art using their blossoms and thus earning her the name.
Really love the fitting name, but it is a little generic. Also, wouldn't a child get its name when it is young, not when it gains a hobby? Or is that just what they call themselves?
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Username: Dave EgbertName: SalemGender/sex: Female
The art is really cute and you have a very fitting name for one based off of a cat!
CeselSpeaker wrote:Username: CeselSpeaker
Gender/sex: female
Name: Ivu
Poem:
If this day bring more trouble,
what do i do?
what do i do?
everyone keeps claiming it was my fault
what did i do?
what did i do?
they say i am the trouble,
but i didn't do it all
they say i need to fix it,
but what can i do?
they keep blaming me,
saying it's all my doing,
but i'm really innocent...
Ivu is such a short and sweet name! >w< Though the poem confuses me, and it doesn't show much as an entry. Maybe if it included their name or aspects that told me that this poem was actually for this contest specifically! If I allowed more extras, I think you could have given me more to work with, but maybe just not this time! owo
Meroei wrote:Username: MeroeiGender/sex: maleName: FogOne Extra of your choice (PERSONALITY): Fog is a very calm finchling. He believes in the concept of yin and yang very stongly, and can sometimes be seen meditating in the air, on the ground, etc. Fog doens't like to be rushed. Sometimes, his friends try to rile him up, but they rarely succeed. If annoyed, Fog will probably fight with the other finchling until he calms down a little and flies away to meditate and calm himself down fully.Fog is awesome

I really loved the way you had started off the personality and making him a bit different from other entries! However you did do this well, you broke canon and that takes away a lot. owo"
The name is very sweet, and I think your art is very well done! However, as you said about it being done in five minutes, I feel as if not as much effort was put into it as a few others. owo
~Don't~Be~Mistaken~ wrote:Username: ~Don't~Be~Mistaken~
Gender: Female
Name: Kiro
One Extra of your choice: (Backstory) Kiro was always calm and plain until she watched her sister die horribly ever since then she never trusted anyone and would run away from anyone that came to close, after she got over it she became a shy depressed odd girl.
Though it is done and you completed it, I do have a bias against having a dead family member to drive their personality. Maybe a bit more originality next time, or challenge yourself by working without dead characters.
And the winner is...
Dave Egbert! With a cute name mixed with art just as cute, that is why they are the winner!