Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer [CLOSED]

[Arcaii]

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[Arcaii]

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[mistywater]

Image/Description: Pure white molly with a blue left eye, and a yellow right eye.
Name: Pearnose.
Gender: Molly.
Clan: ThunderClan.
Rank: Warrior/Queen.
Personality/Skills: Mellow, optimistic and cheerful, she never minded herself being half-deaf. She has some excellent tracking skills that are known around the Clans. Overall, she's a lively and bright cat, and achieved everything she wanted in life: Respect, a family and peace (for some time).
Important Notes: Nope!

Image/Description: Tortoiseshell and white molly with amber eyes.
Name: Robinstorm.
Gender: Molly.
Clan: ThunderClan.
Rank: Warrior.
Personality/Skills: She was a rather eager and curious apprentice, but got fustrated when she couldn't do a move right. So usually she was rather confident and social and keen, but had sulky or irritated cooldowns. She grew out of mood swings after a few moons of being a full warrior, cause duty and patrols kept her mind off things that annoyed her. She can still sometimes be snappy, though! She has no notable skill.
Important Notes: I'm typin' on an IPad here, might make spelling errors.

Image/Description: Gray tabby tom with pale amber eyes.
Name: Smokeheart/Smokestar.
Gender: Tom.
Clan: ThunderClan.
Rank: Warrior/Deputy/Leader.
Personality/Skills: His father often over-praised his skills. He took a small advantage of it, but soon grew out of boasting cause he felt it's not right. Since then, he always followed his heart and picked a path he believed was the better one, and worked hard for the Clan he grew to love. After establishing a family, he took his duties as a warrior really seriously and became a leader two seasons later.
Important Notes: Pearnose became his mate. Just saying. She made life fun for him.


Image/Description: Mainly golden tortoiseshell molly with amber eyes.
Name: Emberfoot.
Gender: Molly.
Clan: ThunderClan.
Rank: Warrior.
Personality/Skills: Besides being the fastest apprentice of her Clan, she was known for a very friendly nature and curious. She tended to chat for a long time, and had many close friends in the Clan: the best one being Dappledtail the medicine cat. They both shared a touch of daredevil-ness too, and often played as young cats.
Important Notes: Not really.

[Arcaii]

Image/Description: Pure white molly with a blue left eye, and a yellow right eye.
Name: Pearnose.
Gender: Molly.
Clan: ThunderClan.
Rank: Warrior/Queen.
Personality/Skills: Mellow, optimistic and cheerful, she never minded herself being half-deaf. She has some excellent tracking skills that are known around the Clans. Overall, she's a lively and bright cat, and achieved everything she wanted in life: Respect, a family and peace (for some time).
Important Notes: Nope!

Image/Description: Tortoiseshell and white molly with amber eyes.
Name: Robinstorm.
Gender: Molly.
Clan: ThunderClan.
Rank: Warrior.
Personality/Skills: She was a rather eager and curious apprentice, but got fustrated when she couldn't do a move right. So usually she was rather confident and social and keen, but had sulky or irritated cooldowns. She grew out of mood swings after a few moons of being a full warrior, cause duty and patrols kept her mind off things that annoyed her. She can still sometimes be snappy, though! She has no notable skill.
Important Notes: I'm typin' on an IPad here, might make spelling errors.

Image/Description: Gray tabby tom with pale amber eyes.
Name: Smokeheart/Smokestar.
Gender: Tom.
Clan: ThunderClan.
Rank: Warrior/Deputy/Leader.
Personality/Skills: His father often over-praised his skills. He took a small advantage of it, but soon grew out of boasting cause he felt it's not right. Since then, he always followed his heart and picked a path he believed was the better one, and worked hard for the Clan he grew to love. After establishing a family, he took his duties as a warrior really seriously and became a leader two seasons later.
Important Notes: Pearnose became his mate. Just saying. She made life fun for him.


Image/Description: Mainly golden tortoiseshell molly with amber eyes.
Name: Emberfoot.
Gender: Molly.
Clan: ThunderClan.
Rank: Warrior.
Personality/Skills: Besides being the fastest apprentice of her Clan, she was known for a very friendly nature and curious. She tended to chat for a long time, and had many close friends in the Clan: the best one being Dappledtail the medicine cat. They both shared a touch of daredevil-ness too, and often played as young cats.
Important Notes: Not really.

Pearnose
Name Rating: 10/10
Name Type: Traditional
Name Reasoning: Good to see a cat with a partial disability that still excels as a tracker. Her name fits her perfectly!
Alternative Name: None!

Character Rating: 10/10
Character Reasoning: I also appreciate the addition of the hearing problems. I'm not sure if having one blue eye automatically heralds hearing issues, but this is a very nice nod towards the BEWW rule. I'll poke around and see what I find (and I may put it up on the problems list).
Anyways, she sounds awesome. Easygoing white cats, for some reason, are very charming to me, so you may have scored some bonus points on bias alone. Well done to you.


Robinstorm
Name Rating: 10/10
Name Type: Traditional
Name Reasoning: I'm never very clear on what tortoiseshell and white could mean, but I'll assume it refers to a white underbelly or chest or something like that, and not great big patches of white. If the former is the case, then her name is excellent for her - if not, we'll have to find something else.
Alternative Name: None!

Character Rating: 10/10
Character Reasoning: I'm seeing more -storm cats that are cooling off as they get older and it's giving me hope that my ramblings have reached the ear of the masses. Now to just convert everyone on this site to traditionalism...
Robinstorm sounds just fine. I can imagine her when she's close to becoming a senior warrior and getting an apprentice who may be a little slow to learn and just as frustrated about it as she was when she was that age. She seems like someone who would be assigned to an apprentice who she can relate to, rather than being given one who has a certain personality or quirk that needs evening out (as is common).


Smokeheart
Name Rating: 10/10
Name Type: Traditional
Name Reasoning: The name fits him well, though he should probably show -heart signs as an apprentice early on. I may have misread the spiel, and not seen it, but that's an important thing to note.
Alternative Name: None.

Character Rating: 10/10
Character Reasoning: Part of what makes a -heart cat stand out is a strong will and out-spoken personality. They aren't afraid of being overheard or having eyes on them consistently, and tend to not be self conscious. He stands fine as he is, but I recommend adding in a certain boldness to him if it isn't already there.


Emberfoot
Name Rating: 10/10
Name Type: Traditional
Name Reasoning: Stellar names we got today! On a side note, it's shameful how many times I mistake Ember- for Amber- and prepare to go on a rant about it. Embarrassing, really.
Alternative Name: None!

Character Rating: 10/10
Character Reasoning: I have a deep fondness for -foot characters. Most of them, anyway. They have a certain something to them that I find pleasant. Not sure what it is.
Emberfoot is a good character. I'm very glad that there's a character out there who's fast friends with the medicine cat - there's this weird aura of isolation that people give to medicine cats, consciously or not. To see relationships with them that aren't forbidden or negative is rad.

[.kestral]

If it helps according to google Tortie and white basically means Calico.

[Keriae]

Tortie and white/calico are interchangeable; it depends on where you come from.
However, the general rule is that tortoiseshells are mottled, while calicos are characterized by large patches of colour with white. Therefore, a tortie with mitts is just a tortoiseshell with white toes/paws, while a tortie bicolour is a calico due to the effects of whitespotting.
They can also inherit the tabby gene, which results in torbies
and dilutions too
i can give a full list with links if wanted

[Arcaii]

I might have to put up a thing asking people to be a little more specific with tortoiseshell descriptions. It's not a giant deal? But I'd rather be certain on the coloring.

Then again, with my luck, they'll start going into excruciating detail about every little spot and stripe.

[.kestral]

Image/Description:
Dark grey she cat, has one white paw and a tiny smudge of white on her nose. Her eyes are the colour of copper (not that she knows what copper is!). Her tail is unusually short and her ears are often said to be unusually large.
Name:
Stormpaw (Needs a warrior name)
Gender:
She Cat
Clan:
None currently
Rank:
Apprentice
Personality/Skills:
Stormpaw is a very excitable, eager young she cat. She loves training, loves playing and loves, well almost everything. She can often be seen as immature and the elders often discuss how she doesn't seem to take warrior life seriously. She overheard that once and decided to focus a lot more on her training, she calmed down a little but still likes to have fun when she can. Her and another apprentice have a small rivalry, both trying to outdo one another, to be better at each aspect of there lives. In truth Stormpaw has a crush on him and uses there 'challenges' to get to know him better. They are so going to be mates!
I can see Stormpaw maturing well, as a warrior I can imagine her using her enthusiasm for the clans benefit.
She is an average hunter and fighter. She has never excelled either but pushes herself to do well even if it means staying out an extra hour to get that extra bit of prey that makes her catch reasonable.
Important Notes:
She has four older brothers, and all the other apprentices are male. This makes her very competitive as she wants to do as well as them!

[JustMallory]

Name: Archpelt
Description: He's a marbled brown tom (A Bengal really)
Important Notes: Nawwww, but this is a really cool thread :3

Name: Marlow
Description: Reddish brown tabby
Important Notes: He's a loner, I don't know if you review loners, but I thought I'd add it in there

Name: Badgerfang
Description: A massive black and white tom
Important Notes: Nope

Name: Otterfang
Description: Dark brown she-cat
Important Notes: Nada

Name: Sagepaw
Description: Light gray tabby
Important Notes: I've been looking for a good warrior name for him. Any thoughts?

[Arcaii]

Image/Description:
Dark grey she cat, has one white paw and a tiny smudge of white on her nose. Her eyes are the colour of copper (not that she knows what copper is!). Her tail is unusually short and her ears are often said to be unusually large.
Name:
Stormpaw (Needs a warrior name)
Gender:
She Cat
Clan:
None currently
Rank:
Apprentice
Personality/Skills:
Stormpaw is a very excitable, eager young she cat. She loves training, loves playing and loves, well almost everything. She can often be seen as immature and the elders often discuss how she doesn't seem to take warrior life seriously. She overheard that once and decided to focus a lot more on her training, she calmed down a little but still likes to have fun when she can. Her and another apprentice have a small rivalry, both trying to outdo one another, to be better at each aspect of there lives. In truth Stormpaw has a crush on him and uses there 'challenges' to get to know him better. They are so going to be mates!
I can see Stormpaw maturing well, as a warrior I can imagine her using her enthusiasm for the clans benefit.
She is an average hunter and fighter. She has never excelled either but pushes herself to do well even if it means staying out an extra hour to get that extra bit of prey that makes her catch reasonable.
Important Notes:
She has four older brothers, and all the other apprentices are male. This makes her very competitive as she wants to do as well as them!

Sorry for the wait. The Wolf Among Us was calling me.

Name Suggestion: Stormpelt/Stormfur
Name Reasoning: As she has no nameable skill, nor does she have a named personality, she gets the default names. Her suffix fits her just fine, and stays as it is.

Character Rating: 10/10
Character Reasoning: The only thing I want to alert you to is that there's no reason for her to be competitive against male apprentices unless she was runty and weak when she was little. The only real difference between toms and mollies, in the Warriors world, is that one of them can have babies and receive the -flower suffix. Wanting to surpass her older brothers is fine, since there's a definite age/size/strength thing there, but she wouldn't be treated any different as a female.
Unless her Clan is oddly devoid of females. Then we might have an issue.