by agathokakologic » Thu Jul 03, 2014 11:17 am
I prefer writing longer paragraphs.
I don't mean to be offensive or anything, but I'm really annoyed when I'm in a RP and this situation comes up:
Me : Artemis's gray fur shimmered silver in the moonlight as she ran, paws skittering across the smooth surface of the shore. Cold night air billowed her fur, causing a slight shiver to slowly creep up her spine. Glowing stars illuminated a clear path ahead of her, giving her more motivation to run. Flames of determination glowed in the she-wolf's sapphire blue eyes as she ran, chest heaving heavily with effort. She was almost there, so close that she could almost feel the soft grass underpaw and hear the blackbirds sing. Her mouth watered at the aspect of finally sinking her fangs into some real food- fresh squirrels and plump mice, and, if she was lucky, maybe even a juicy elk. She slowly closed her eyes into blue slits as thoughts and dreams filled her head. The dim sunlight marking her path... the crowned trees twisting this way and that... the crystal clear water... Oh, how she missed the forest! A slight smile curled up her muzzle at the thought of it, quickly vanishing as a flare of pain ignited in her paw. A large, shrill yelp cut through the air as she collapsed onto the ground, crimson splattered all around her. Fear clouded her thoughts as she stared at the sky above, the silver stars tinted red. "Help!" She cried hoarsely with a cough, shuddering slightly. "Help!"
Other person: shadow herd some1 ask 4 help. he ran over to help artemis. R u kk he said.