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Which was your favorite X-Men production?

X-Men: The Animated Series(series)
2
22%
X-Men: Evolution(series)
2
22%
Wolverine and the X-Men(series)
0
No votes
X-Men(film)
1
11%
X2: X-Men United(film)
0
No votes
X-Men: The Last Stand(film)
0
No votes
X-Men Origins: Wolverine(film)
0
No votes
The Wolverine(film)
1
11%
X-Men: First Class(film)
1
11%
X-Men: Days of Future Past(film)
2
22%
 
Total votes : 9

Re: X-Men: Evolution Fan Club

Postby ChristainAnimalLover » Thu Jun 05, 2014 3:49 pm

Haha, I like the character in general better with the long hair. It fits her regal personality more <3

Well, she took his hand at the end but I get what you mean. And I wish they stuck with the original plan and put Gambit in a cameo role at the school...They just got worried that the viewers would think there was something wrong with the basket balls...(He as going to be playing basket ball with some other students, and they ere going to have him charge the ball as he made a shot)
Haha, yeah. I can totally see those two fighting over her. Though Iceman might not fight much, he's too much of "clown" for that. And even if he did, Gambit would probably win anyway xD

I totally understand <3
But I like "fluffy" stories. Mine has quite a bit of that too, but I use it to show the character's growing closer and all that.

Read it?! I don't think I've even heard of it before! xD
A link would be great!! <33

Oh, and I'm still open for these <3
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Re: X-Men: Evolution Fan Club

Postby Cherry » Fri Jun 06, 2014 8:39 am

I haven't heard that. I saw somewhere that they didn't put him in only because he was just in Wolverine's movie, and they couldn't get the rights or thought it would be too much of Gambit on screen? Whatever it was, it was a dumb reason, but I'm pretty sure it had more to do with the rights/the way the movie worked and not anyone being nervous about specific scenes. But I can't remember where I heard it so it may not have been a good source.
Haha, yeah, he probably would win. :lol:

Here: http://www.pinterest.com/pin/37154765649974509/ It's really small print, though. :( And I disagree with Storm being an extrovert, even though they say so.
The test -if you haven't taken it before- isn't free, but they have a really short one (actually, it's not a test, but you can read the information they give and type yourself at the Meyers-Briggs website. And then maybe take this test here, though it's one by somebody who expanded upon their work so it's free: http://www.16personalities.com/free-personality-test)
I'm not sure if this it the right page or not, but it looks like it. http://www.myersbriggs.org/my-mbti-pers ... ti-basics/
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Re: X-Men: Evolution Fan Club

Postby ChristainAnimalLover » Fri Jun 06, 2014 12:02 pm

Thanks, I'll have to check those out! <3
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Re: ✖ X-Men Fan Club ✖

Postby ChristainAnimalLover » Tue Jun 24, 2014 3:03 pm

NEW! I've completely re-done the intro and quote posts, and I'm working on the rest <3

EDIT:
I've decided to share a little bit of my story with you guys <3
I'm pretty proud of it, and kinda want to share but also don't want to...Anyway, this "scene" happens pretty late in the story, just after a pretty rough "episode" - Rogue is a bit more open and not quite as angry with the world, Logan and Gambit get along now and are actually pretty good friends. It takes place in a training session. -Based mostly on Evo, with a few traits from just about all the other versions mixed in xD-

Yes, I plopped you in the middle of mini-book xD
Ok, ok, I'm done...Hope you like it <3

Chapter 3

-----Gambit managed to get the Danger Room to display a peaceful meadow without any opponents. Gambit had programmed the dimensions of his Bo staff into the computer and now handed Rogue his, he took the prop. Rogue removed her glove and put the tip of her finger on the tip of Gambit’s for a second. He began teacher her how to wield the staff; she learned quickly and soon could do several combinations fluidly. Gambit was very pleased, “You are doing excellent.” He said as he stood up from the last move he’d just shown her. Rogue stepped closer, smiling, “That’s because I have an excellent teacher.” She reached up and kissed him gently. He smiled tenderly at her as she began to repeat the move he’d done. With Gambit’s knowledge and his direct teaching, Rogue easily completed each move he showed her with little to no errors.
-----Logan entered to find Gambit and Rogue performing a complicated series of movements in perfect unison. He watched in awe, smiling. When the two had finished, he approached. Logan tossed a glance at Gambit who gave the slightest nod before heading for the control room to switch off the Danger Room. Logan approached Rogue and somehow she knew – he’d changed since she saw him a few hours ago. He came up and hugged her. Rogue was a little surprised, “Whoa!” She said as she closed her eyes and hugged him back. He held her tight, as if he’d been the one traumatized while she lay unconscious in bed for a month. Finally, he loosened his grip and she leaned back to look up at him, “What’s gotten into you?” She asked, smiling broadly. “I’ve just…I’ve missed you.” He said, his eyes gentle and full of affection. “Aw, Ah’ve missed you too Logan.” She said, almost tearing up. Just then Gambit came back in and, seeing the looks on both their faces, as he came to stand beside Rogue, knew that they had finally past the “rough patch” and they were as close as ever. Having just caught the end of the conversation, Gambit chimed-in, “Hasn’t anyone missed me?” He asked playfully, pretending to be hurt. They all laughed and Rogue leaned against him. “How could Ah miss you? You were there for me the whole time.” She said lovingly. He smiled and gently kissed her head, misty-eyed. Seeing how close Gambit was to tears, Logan changed the subject, “Blind Alley?” Gambit caught Logan’s eye and nodded gratefully, Rogue smiled broadly.
-----Blind Alley was a particularly tricky program where you fought blindfolded. Not surprisingly, Logan held the impossible record for this program, but Rogue was getting pretty good at it.
-----Gambit leaned back and laughed, “Aw, man! You guys are ganging up on me.” He’d never been very good at this one. “You can sit this one out if you’re not up to it Cajun.” Logan smiled at the playful taunt. Rogue smiled at the two. “And let you have all the fun? No way!” Gambit replied, grinning challengingly. “Let’s see what you got.” Logan leaned forward slightly. Gambit narrowed his eyes, “You’re on!” Rogue sighed in mock exasperation, “Boys?” She called softly, as if they were lost thought. They both looked over at her. “Can we start?” She asked eagerly. They both nodded and fastened their blindfolds, she did the same. “Begin.” Logan said clearly, starting the program.

Chapter 4

-----Rogue took advantage of her new skills with a Bo staff and, using the computer-generated prop, successfully downed many opponents. She did considerably well; almost always being with Logan, she had taught herself how to really listen and was now knocking opponents down as they approached rather than after they attacked.
-----Gambit fumbled around in his blind-fold, almost knocking Wolverine down multiple times. “Hey! Watch it, Cajun!” Logan growled, ducking as heard Gambit’s staff slicing through the air. “I don’t know how you guys do it.” Gambit said, amazed, as they reviewed the score once the session had ended. Blind Alley was one of the few programs that kept score, and Rogue was now in third place – just below Beast, though neither of them was even close to beating Logan. “You can’t just swing around aimlessly,” Logan smiled. “You have to focus. Think. Listen.” He replaced his blindfold, ready for another round. “Easy for you to say!” Gambit swung his staff at Logan, who ducked effortlessly. “You hear everything!” Rogue laughed, tying her blindfold, “You don’t have to have heightened senses to beat the computer, Remy.” She motioned for him to swing at her too. He hesitated, not wanting to hurt her but he knew she could take it. He sighed quietly, and swung at her too. She threw up her hand and grabbed his staff; catching him off-guard, she easily yanked it from his grasp and swung around, performing a newly-learned move that ended with the staff just a few inches from his throat. Gambit stared at her, wide-eyed with surprise. “Stop gaping and put your blindfold back on!” Logan whispered from behind him, making him jump as Rogue tossed his staff back to him. Gambit smiled, now determined to use all of his senses in an attempt to jump to fourth place. “Begin.” He said as steadily as he could.
-----Seeing Gambit’s new score, Rogue almost knocked him over with an ecstatic hug; Logan gave him an approving nod and wide smile – he was tied with Beast for third place. “Oooph! You did excellent too!” He said, noticing that Rogue had beat Beast by several points. Rogue let go and grinned.

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Re: ✖ X-Men Fan Club ✖

Postby Cherry » Wed Jun 25, 2014 3:01 pm

I think it's pretty interesting so far. I really like your interpretation of the Danger Room!
I know you probably put a lot of work into it, since there's so much to read! :)

Now here's the critique:
(And remember, these are suggestions. You know your story better than me, so you know what can and can't work.)
The way the tone/voice is written, it sounds closed-off, almost impersonal. (That may just be since it's in third person, though. I think first person could fix that easier, but it's your choice if you wanted to change POVs.) And that can -at times- be bad, because usually the reader should be completely inside the story and the character's head as much as possible, instead of being distracted by the writing style/voice.


I hadn't known this until 1-2 years after I started writing, but you should use line breaks every time a character speaks. (So it'd be character 1 on line 1, charrie 2 on line 2, and if the next part is charrie 1, her dialogue would be on line 3.) That way it can be more clear who's who. And if you do that, you don't have to color the text, since it's more work for you. ^^
If there's any most aggravating advice writers give, it would be this: "Show, don't tell." (Even though I hate hearing it -especially since it's rarely explained- it still needs to be a bit more widespread.) Basically, it means, don't make your reader feel one way by saying "it was lovely." Give them all the indication that it was perfect, but let them feel that for them self. Here's a better explanation: http://www.dailywritingtips.com/show-dont-tell/ This "rule" is more of a guideline, because narratation is really important, too!

I like the idea he'd teach her how to use the bo staff. :)
I think you'll need to be careful about their romance, though. One thing I like about Rogue and Gambit is that you know they like each other from the way treat each other. Some TV shows have to throw in the words "boyfriend" and "girlfriend" to make it clear what they are, but Rogue and Gambit don't really need so much explanation. And not to mention she can't really touch him often. :P But doing that can be really tricky, especially if your only knowledge of dating is from movies like me. ;)

And so many times I read my writing and think, "this isn't how I want it to be." But you have to remember that you won't be an "expert" (most people think you'll always keep improving and will never be a pro, which I agree with) without time and without practice. I'm seeing how much I've improved now compared to years ago. That's really fun. :)
There are so many writing rules out there. You'll see so many people saying what's right and wrong. You'll also see people saying that writing fanfiction is lazy or means you're a bad writer. Which isn't true. I've heard that before. :roll: But really, there's no rules to writing. Or at least, not many. Write for you and don't get dragged down by mean people's opinions when they don't matter. One thing to always keep in mind is: think about how real people interact. Characters are no different, even though they're fictional.
You can always PM me if you want to hear feedback or anything!

Edit: All of the unknown quotes are from TAS. :)
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Re: ✖ X-Men Fan Club ✖

Postby ChristainAnimalLover » Wed Jun 25, 2014 4:39 pm

Cherry wrote:I think it's pretty interesting so far. I really like your interpretation of the Danger Room!
I know you probably put a lot of work into it, since there's so much to read! :)

Thanks, I kinda picture it like the Danger Room shown in X-3 and Evolution- it can change to make it look any setting, instead of just weapons in the walls and floor...
Hah! There's barely anything there! you should see my Word Document! I have 9 pages of notes(single space, one note per line) in 12 point and 16 pages of the actual story also in 12 point. <3 And I'm no where near done yet! i have a lot to catch up on...'Cause I expand it just about every night, and then write it down in the morning, but I had being "dreaming" it up for about a year before I decided to write it down xD

Cherry wrote:Now here's the critique:
(And remember, these are suggestions. You know your story better than me, so you know what can and can't work.)
The way the tone/voice is written, it sounds closed-off, almost impersonal. (That may just be since it's in third person, though. I think first person could fix that easier, but it's your choice if you wanted to change POVs.) And that can -at times- be bad, because usually the reader should be completely inside the story and the character's head as much as possible, instead of being distracted by the writing style/voice.

Closed-off? What do you mean, exactly?
I don't really like writing in first person, it's weird xD

Cherry wrote:I hadn't known this until 1-2 years after I started writing, but you should use line breaks every time a character speaks. (So it'd be character 1 on line 1, charrie 2 on line 2, and if the next part is charrie 1, her dialogue would be on line 3.) That way it can be more clear who's who. And if you do that, you don't have to color the text, since it's more work for you. ^^
If there's any most aggravating advice writers give, it would be this: "Show, don't tell." (Even though I hate hearing it -especially since it's rarely explained- it still needs to be a bit more widespread.) Basically, it means, don't make your reader feel one way by saying "it was lovely." Give them all the indication that it was perfect, but let them feel that for them self. Here's a better explanation: http://www.dailywritingtips.com/show-dont-tell/ This "rule" is more of a guideline, because narratation is really important, too!

I thought about that, and I've seen it that way in books, but I was afraid it would my sentences look too...Choppy. I'll give it a try though <3
Oooh, a link! I'll have to check that out tomorrow, thanks! <33

Cherry wrote:I like the idea he'd teach her how to use the bo staff. :)
I think you'll need to be careful about their romance, though. One thing I like about Rogue and Gambit is that you know they like each other from the way treat each other. Some TV shows have to throw in the words "boyfriend" and "girlfriend" to make it clear what they are, but Rogue and Gambit don't really need so much explanation. And not to mention she can't really touch him often. :P But doing that can be really tricky, especially if your only knowledge of dating is from movies like me. ;)

Yeah, I was kind stuck and thought it would be sweet <3
Haha, yeah. No "boyfriend/girlfriend" references used here. Just actions <3
Oh, i kinda forgot to mention, as this is after the end of Evo, I had her get control of her powers. She just still prefers not to use them, do to their nature, and kept her Gothic look =)
Yep, same here. Just movies, TV shows and books for dating knowledge xp

Cherry wrote:And so many times I read my writing and think, "this isn't how I want it to be." But you have to remember that you won't be an "expert" (most people think you'll always keep improving and will never be a pro, which I agree with) without time and without practice. I'm seeing how much I've improved now compared to years ago. That's really fun. :)
There are so many writing rules out there. You'll see so many people saying what's right and wrong. You'll also see people saying that writing fanfiction is lazy or means you're a bad writer. Which isn't true. I've heard that before. :roll: But really, there's no rules to writing. Or at least, not many. Write for you and don't get dragged down by mean people's opinions when they don't matter. One thing to always keep in mind is: think about how real people interact. Characters are no different, even though they're fictional.
You can always PM me if you want to hear feedback or anything!

This is the first I've written more than a few paragraphs for a story as an English assignment, so there's not much to compare it to, but I look forward to being able to do that in the future!
Nah, fiction is fun! Not lazy. Besides, I can't do realism too well, I have too much of an imagination! And being kinda obsessed with X-Men, i like super-powered adventures <3
Oh, don't worry. I will keep writing for me, I don't like changing my views on TV characters xD
Thanks, I'll certainly do that!And thanks for the comments/critique as well <3

Cherry wrote:Edit: All of the unknown quotes are from TAS. :)

Yeah, I know that part cx
But I have to look up the season and episode... <3
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Re: ✖ X-Men Fan Club ✖

Postby Cherry » Thu Jun 26, 2014 9:32 am

ChristainAnimalLover wrote:
Cherry wrote:I think it's pretty interesting so far. I really like your interpretation of the Danger Room!
I know you probably put a lot of work into it, since there's so much to read! :)

Thanks, I kinda picture it like the Danger Room shown in X-3 and Evolution- it can change to make it look any setting, instead of just weapons in the walls and floor...
Hah! There's barely anything there! you should see my Word Document! I have 9 pages of notes(single space, one note per line) in 12 point and 16 pages of the actual story also in 12 point. <3 And I'm no where near done yet! i have a lot to catch up on...'Cause I expand it just about every night, and then write it down in the morning, but I had being "dreaming" it up for about a year before I decided to write it down xD
That's cool.I figured there'd be more since it's chapters 3 and 4, but that sounds like a lot! :)


Cherry wrote:Now here's the critique:
(And remember, these are suggestions. You know your story better than me, so you know what can and can't work.)
The way the tone/voice is written, it sounds closed-off, almost impersonal. (That may just be since it's in third person, though. I think first person could fix that easier, but it's your choice if you wanted to change POVs.) And that can -at times- be bad, because usually the reader should be completely inside the story and the character's head as much as possible, instead of being distracted by the writing style/voice.

Closed-off? What do you mean, exactly?
I don't really like writing in first person, it's weird xD
Hmm... It sounds kind of serious, like you're kind of watching it happen, not feeling the events. And if the writer doesn't seem to be feeling it, the reader is more likely not to feel it either.
That can be really, really hard to get right and I'm still trying to work on that. It takes time, and it also takes a lot of different stories or projects to finally get it right.

Cherry wrote:I hadn't known this until 1-2 years after I started writing, but you should use line breaks every time a character speaks. (So it'd be character 1 on line 1, charrie 2 on line 2, and if the next part is charrie 1, her dialogue would be on line 3.) That way it can be more clear who's who. And if you do that, you don't have to color the text, since it's more work for you. ^^
If there's any most aggravating advice writers give, it would be this: "Show, don't tell." (Even though I hate hearing it -especially since it's rarely explained- it still needs to be a bit more widespread.) Basically, it means, don't make your reader feel one way by saying "it was lovely." Give them all the indication that it was perfect, but let them feel that for them self. Here's a better explanation: http://www.dailywritingtips.com/show-dont-tell/ This "rule" is more of a guideline, because narratation is really important, too!

I thought about that, and I've seen it that way in books, but I was afraid it would my sentences look too...Choppy. I'll give it a try though <3
Oooh, a link! I'll have to check that out tomorrow, thanks! <33

Cherry wrote:I like the idea he'd teach her how to use the bo staff. :)
I think you'll need to be careful about their romance, though. One thing I like about Rogue and Gambit is that you know they like each other from the way treat each other. Some TV shows have to throw in the words "boyfriend" and "girlfriend" to make it clear what they are, but Rogue and Gambit don't really need so much explanation. And not to mention she can't really touch him often. :P But doing that can be really tricky, especially if your only knowledge of dating is from movies like me. ;)

Yeah, I was kind stuck and thought it would be sweet <3
Haha, yeah. No "boyfriend/girlfriend" references used here. Just actions <3
Oh, i kinda forgot to mention, as this is after the end of Evo, I had her get control of her powers. She just still prefers not to use them, do to their nature, and kept her Gothic look =)
Yep, same here. Just movies, TV shows and books for dating knowledge xp
Oh, okay. I wasn't sure if you made her get in control of them yet, since she was still wearing her gloves, but now that you explained I understand. :)
Cherry wrote:And so many times I read my writing and think, "this isn't how I want it to be." But you have to remember that you won't be an "expert" (most people think you'll always keep improving and will never be a pro, which I agree with) without time and without practice. I'm seeing how much I've improved now compared to years ago. That's really fun. :)
There are so many writing rules out there. You'll see so many people saying what's right and wrong. You'll also see people saying that writing fanfiction is lazy or means you're a bad writer. Which isn't true. I've heard that before. :roll: But really, there's no rules to writing. Or at least, not many. Write for you and don't get dragged down by mean people's opinions when they don't matter. One thing to always keep in mind is: think about how real people interact. Characters are no different, even though they're fictional.
You can always PM me if you want to hear feedback or anything!

[quote]This is the first I've written more than a few paragraphs for a story as an English assignment, so there's not much to compare it to, but I look forward to being able to do that in the future!
Nah, fiction is fun! Not lazy. Besides, I can't do realism too well, I have too much of an imagination! And being kinda obsessed with X-Men, i like super-powered adventures <3
Oh, don't worry. I will keep writing for me, I don't like changing my views on TV characters xD
Thanks, I'll certainly do that!And thanks for the comments/critique as well <3

No problem! I hope that helped. I like super powered stories too. It's a recurring theme... XD[/quote
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Re: ✖ X-Men Fan Club ✖

Postby ChristainAnimalLover » Thu Jun 26, 2014 10:27 am

Cherry wrote:That's cool.I figured there'd be more since it's chapters 3 and 4, but that sounds like a lot! :)

Yeah, but it's fun <3
Cherry wrote:Hmm... It sounds kind of serious, like you're kind of watching it happen, not feeling the events. And if the writer doesn't seem to be feeling it, the reader is more likely not to feel it either.
That can be really, really hard to get right and I'm still trying to work on that. It takes time, and it also takes a lot of different stories or projects to finally get it right.

Ohhh...Hmmm, I'll try to fix that...Thanks!
Cherry wrote:Oh, okay. I wasn't sure if you made her get in control of them yet, since she was still wearing her gloves, but now that you explained I understand. :)
Yeah, perhaps I should have book number too <3
Cherry wrote:No problem! I hope that helped. I like super powered stories too. It's a recurring theme... XD

And you're so free!! xD
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Re: ✖ X-Men Fan Club ✖

Postby ChristainAnimalLover » Wed Aug 27, 2014 1:12 pm

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I just saw Days of Future Past aannnd...It. Was. AMAZING!!!! <33

I can't wait to add it to my Marvel DVD collection <3
I don't want to give too many spoilers, but if you haven't seen it yet...I strongly recommend you do! Especially if you weren't too happy with how they ended the trilogy ^^ It changes everything! Ok, I'm gonna stop now or this will end up being a random jumble of babble(I do that when I get really excited)


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Re: ✖ X-Men Fan Club ✖

Postby Spiritstar3 » Wed Aug 27, 2014 1:15 pm

ChristainAnimalLover wrote:NEW! I've completely re-done the intro and quote posts, and I'm working on the rest <3

EDIT:
I've decided to share a little bit of my story with you guys <3
I'm pretty proud of it, and kinda want to share but also don't want to...Anyway, this "scene" happens pretty late in the story, just after a pretty rough "episode" - Rogue is a bit more open and not quite as angry with the world, Logan and Gambit get along now and are actually pretty good friends. It takes place in a training session. -Based mostly on Evo, with a few traits from just about all the other versions mixed in xD-

Yes, I plopped you in the middle of mini-book xD
Ok, ok, I'm done...Hope you like it <3

Chapter 3

-----Gambit managed to get the Danger Room to display a peaceful meadow without any opponents. Gambit had programmed the dimensions of his Bo staff into the computer and now handed Rogue his, he took the prop. Rogue removed her glove and put the tip of her finger on the tip of Gambit’s for a second. He began teacher her how to wield the staff; she learned quickly and soon could do several combinations fluidly. Gambit was very pleased, “You are doing excellent.” He said as he stood up from the last move he’d just shown her. Rogue stepped closer, smiling, “That’s because I have an excellent teacher.” She reached up and kissed him gently. He smiled tenderly at her as she began to repeat the move he’d done. With Gambit’s knowledge and his direct teaching, Rogue easily completed each move he showed her with little to no errors.
-----Logan entered to find Gambit and Rogue performing a complicated series of movements in perfect unison. He watched in awe, smiling. When the two had finished, he approached. Logan tossed a glance at Gambit who gave the slightest nod before heading for the control room to switch off the Danger Room. Logan approached Rogue and somehow she knew – he’d changed since she saw him a few hours ago. He came up and hugged her. Rogue was a little surprised, “Whoa!” She said as she closed her eyes and hugged him back. He held her tight, as if he’d been the one traumatized while she lay unconscious in bed for a month. Finally, he loosened his grip and she leaned back to look up at him, “What’s gotten into you?” She asked, smiling broadly. “I’ve just…I’ve missed you.” He said, his eyes gentle and full of affection. “Aw, Ah’ve missed you too Logan.” She said, almost tearing up. Just then Gambit came back in and, seeing the looks on both their faces, as he came to stand beside Rogue, knew that they had finally past the “rough patch” and they were as close as ever. Having just caught the end of the conversation, Gambit chimed-in, “Hasn’t anyone missed me?” He asked playfully, pretending to be hurt. They all laughed and Rogue leaned against him. “How could Ah miss you? You were there for me the whole time.” She said lovingly. He smiled and gently kissed her head, misty-eyed. Seeing how close Gambit was to tears, Logan changed the subject, “Blind Alley?” Gambit caught Logan’s eye and nodded gratefully, Rogue smiled broadly.
-----Blind Alley was a particularly tricky program where you fought blindfolded. Not surprisingly, Logan held the impossible record for this program, but Rogue was getting pretty good at it.
-----Gambit leaned back and laughed, “Aw, man! You guys are ganging up on me.” He’d never been very good at this one. “You can sit this one out if you’re not up to it Cajun.” Logan smiled at the playful taunt. Rogue smiled at the two. “And let you have all the fun? No way!” Gambit replied, grinning challengingly. “Let’s see what you got.” Logan leaned forward slightly. Gambit narrowed his eyes, “You’re on!” Rogue sighed in mock exasperation, “Boys?” She called softly, as if they were lost thought. They both looked over at her. “Can we start?” She asked eagerly. They both nodded and fastened their blindfolds, she did the same. “Begin.” Logan said clearly, starting the program.

Chapter 4

-----Rogue took advantage of her new skills with a Bo staff and, using the computer-generated prop, successfully downed many opponents. She did considerably well; almost always being with Logan, she had taught herself how to really listen and was now knocking opponents down as they approached rather than after they attacked.
-----Gambit fumbled around in his blind-fold, almost knocking Wolverine down multiple times. “Hey! Watch it, Cajun!” Logan growled, ducking as heard Gambit’s staff slicing through the air. “I don’t know how you guys do it.” Gambit said, amazed, as they reviewed the score once the session had ended. Blind Alley was one of the few programs that kept score, and Rogue was now in third place – just below Beast, though neither of them was even close to beating Logan. “You can’t just swing around aimlessly,” Logan smiled. “You have to focus. Think. Listen.” He replaced his blindfold, ready for another round. “Easy for you to say!” Gambit swung his staff at Logan, who ducked effortlessly. “You hear everything!” Rogue laughed, tying her blindfold, “You don’t have to have heightened senses to beat the computer, Remy.” She motioned for him to swing at her too. He hesitated, not wanting to hurt her but he knew she could take it. He sighed quietly, and swung at her too. She threw up her hand and grabbed his staff; catching him off-guard, she easily yanked it from his grasp and swung around, performing a newly-learned move that ended with the staff just a few inches from his throat. Gambit stared at her, wide-eyed with surprise. “Stop gaping and put your blindfold back on!” Logan whispered from behind him, making him jump as Rogue tossed his staff back to him. Gambit smiled, now determined to use all of his senses in an attempt to jump to fourth place. “Begin.” He said as steadily as he could.
-----Seeing Gambit’s new score, Rogue almost knocked him over with an ecstatic hug; Logan gave him an approving nod and wide smile – he was tied with Beast for third place. “Oooph! You did excellent too!” He said, noticing that Rogue had beat Beast by several points. Rogue let go and grinned.

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