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Whiptail Dragons 3.0 sketch by RenaiRoa

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Whiptail Dragons 3.0 sketch

Postby RenaiRoa » Mon Jun 23, 2014 6:08 am

Title says it all

advice appreciated c:


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Re: Whiptail Dragons 3.0 sketch

Postby gecko » Mon Jun 23, 2014 6:15 am

Perhaps make the tail less detailed in the fluff? Like... Don't have the spinal piece
going so far in? Like how the old lines used to be <:

And the chest maybe a bit fluffier like the belly/chestby the armpit? It looks shaved.

Perhaps the horns can be a bit wider too? Unless the species is changing to have smaller
ones, these look a bit too thin.
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Re: Whiptail Dragons 3.0 sketch

Postby RenaiRoa » Mon Jun 23, 2014 6:38 am

Like this ? c:

//those horns like giving me a hard time cx


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Re: Whiptail Dragons 3.0 sketch

Postby gecko » Mon Jun 23, 2014 7:11 am

Ugh I know those horns are difficult to work with aren't they? I have a hard
time with them too. x.x

I did a thing. I see them as having longer legs, so when they use their ''whiplike
tail'', they have more balance and such to be able to whip it. c; The head should
be a bit similar to a dogs, I think. The top of the head and the snout should be
going the same way, parallel (? i cant remember if is perpendicular or parallel...)
plus the sort of forehead indent thinger as a sort of shape spacer thing.

Its really bad cause i did it in a pixel program, that has like no speed edits for
the drawing and just... its just bad. o-o

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Re: Whiptail Dragons 3.0 sketch

Postby gecko » Mon Jun 23, 2014 7:15 am

Oh also ignore that weird hump thinger on the back I was just derping but the back
shouldn't be completely straight animals backs curve slightly in lots of animals like that
kinda? Not that important. And I dunno if they have paw pads like dogs or if, like a
pine martin, they have none to help grip onto stuff? cx
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Re: Whiptail Dragons 3.0 sketch

Postby RenaiRoa » Mon Jun 23, 2014 9:39 am

As far as I know they're more dragon than mammal, so they have more of a reptile-ish build than oder animals ? If that makes any sense at all :b


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Re: Whiptail Dragons 3.0 sketch

Postby Check the PO Box » Mon Jun 23, 2014 1:38 pm

nonononOno
Can you /PLEASE/ just use the original lines? I am NOT trying to sound rude, but omg the first lines are so perf.
Can' you just like, use the old lines and make a new thread, but using the old lines. Old lines = the ones that Pafooch made? Or however you spell her username?

To get them back up and running we don't need new lines, we just need active staff (unlike who we had before) and lots of advertising. I can help a /lot/ with advertising because you KNOW I am /still/ obsessed with WTDs.
So like, omg WtdS omgGggG
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Re: Whiptail Dragons 3.0 sketch

Postby gecko » Mon Jun 23, 2014 2:36 pm

I think that new lines are necessary, to indicate new ownership and new ways of doing things. Especially due to the introduction of Whiptail Drakes, now, it'd be... Odd, to add them to Pachoo's lines. It's also kind of frustrating for things such as making a nursery and such that matches those lines. Pachoo is no longer really doing anything today for WTDs to my knowledge anymore, so I think it's a good idea to retire the lines.
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Re: Whiptail Dragons 3.0 sketch

Postby Check the PO Box » Mon Jun 23, 2014 5:14 pm

If I saw WTDs with other lines the first time I'd seen them (I first saw them on Pachoo's lines) then I probably would never have even clicked on them. I think that the original lines kind of catch your eye apposed to the new ones. I love the species times infinity no matter what lines they are on, so don't think that I hate them just because of different lines or something, I just probably won't be trying for anymore. I think I've hit my cap when I got Necro though anyway.

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Re: Whiptail Dragons 3.0 sketch

Postby Cranberries » Thu Jun 26, 2014 10:31 am

I agree with Check ;n;
Like I love the new lines, I really do like them I'm not just saying that, But I really like the old lines and hate it when a species changed lines no matter how much better or nicer it looks, Like the old lines are so
Classy
or something
like that
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Do whatever you want Ren, I'll support you either way ^.^
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