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Postby Night Ember » Thu Jun 19, 2014 7:45 am

I will be posting often, ranging from every day to 2 months. This page is going to be made up as I go, the more views/comments I get, the better. I hope you enjoy reading about the Vampyres. The plot has been created as I go. Commenting is always welcome, due to the fact that I think other people's opinions are helpful and very important. Please do not take this as your own work, just as the site says not to.
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I run through the leafy forest, the Hunters hard on my heels. It is in the dead of the night and my kind, the Fanged Ones or Vampyre, in Greek. They had crossbows, armed and loaded. My instincts were in a frantic haze, and the adrenaline rushed through my body like a flooded river, ever gushing, and never stopping. I was hunting in a pack for elk or any other animals, when the Hunters came. Then they picked us off, one by one, capturing or killing until I was the only one left. This is the second hunt my kind has been on with an interruption from Hunters, and no food. The Hunters had been encircling us, until our hunts were shorter and weaker, and food has become scarcer and scarcer, because of the Hunters, this place was our prison, not our home anymore. Generations had lived here, with no disruptions, but somehow the feeble humans had created a large force of armored and dangerous Hunters, and now we run for our lives. If we get captured, word of our home will be discovered, and we will either be captured or killed. Neither one sounds pleasant.
I am running to the willow tree which shrouds our hidden coven. The tricky part? Trying not to show the Hunters where the Coven is. I run, trampling and knocking things behind me to slow their path and block their way. This tactic has provided some results, but for the most part, it has been effortless and useless. We are running out of ideas to conceal ourselves. We cannot create a war force ourselves and fight back either. Our population has dwindled, thanks to the oncoming attacks from the Hunters. We need to move somewhere else, or die in our homes. It won't be long until the Hunters get there anyway. Our weapons consist of swords, claws, and teeth. We have some magic, but most of it shields us to become invisible or protects us from the sun. It is mostly illusion magic, meant to conceal or trick the unwary. The only magic we have that damages creatures is a stun spell, used to trap prey and if constantly used, it will kill or put the target into a coma. It mildly hurts the target, just enough to stun, but it won't work on the Hunters armor, somehow they made the armor to where it blocks spells...
I ran along the stony cliffs and showered large boulders in their way, which somehow proved to be very effective. I heard them mutter to themselves, and yell a few things, split up, and look for alternative paths. I ran straight to the willow tree before they could relocate me.
I forgot to introduce myself, I am Ember, a 300 year-old Vampyre, and a hunter. My brothers are soldiers and my father is the Coven leader. My mother died, she was a hunter when Vampyre Hunters killed her. My sister is only 25, so she just started hunting. I heard rumors that the Hunters like killing young fledgling Vampyres for sport or game. The thought of it sends chills up my bones. I would give anything to protect my only sister. My brothers are my half-brothers, except for Stone, which is my true-blood brother, and my sister is my actual, blood-sister. In the coven, it is supposed to mean a lot when you are true-blood related. Half-siblings can mate (odd, I know), but true blood-siblings cannot. My father is reaching his 1978th born-date soon. He may be old, but he is stronger than any Vampyre in the Coven. This is how leadership works, if you want to be the new leader, you have to challenge and kill the other leader using swords or claws (it depends on the agreement between the two Vampyres). After you've done that, you need a mate, it is a rule, no Coven leader is single. Then you must create one male heir, just in case you die. I have at least 20 half-brothers and 1 true-blood brother, all soldiers, and 1 true-blood sister. I am a lonely person, I have only had 1 mate, who died right after we had a Bonding Ritual together, I still remember him when I see the scar on my wrist A Bonding Ritual is like Marriage, only you cut your wrists an mix the bloods, and the Coven leader announces you and your mate together. You and your mate will be together, forever, until one of you dies, in which you can have another Bonding Ritual. After you mix bloods in the Bonding Ritual, a scar appears on your wrist forever, and a spiritual mark appears on your right arm, showing how many rituals you've had. The mark is a 1 inch line, on your upper arm up and down line in a deep black.
I came up to the Coven's willow tree to find the entrance slightly cracked open, with a pair of glistening red eyes glaring back at me coldly. I stated my name and the password to the Vampyre guarding the door. The password was "The Predator and Hunter", but now it is "The Prey and Hunted". My father changed the password to suit our abilities. He thought that we no longer ruled the woods around the villages. I walked into the coven to find father in deep conversation with the Coven elders, the commanders (of what little soldiers we have left), and my 876-year-old brother, the heir. My father looked at me and said "No blood? I expected better of you, Ember. My people haven't eaten in days, and soon they will get weaker, until sickness kills them." I hung my head in shame and said "There's no food, father. The Hunters ambushed my pack and killed all of the prey. We cannot afford to live here any longer. Yes, I know that the tribe is getting weaker, but there is no way to cure their hunger, especially with no prey. We will have to draw from the stocks if we want food. Rationing and moving is the only way to survive." "We cannot move! Our ancestors lived here before us and so did their ancestors and theirs before them. It would be unholy to move!" He retorted. "Our stocks are lower than you think, Ember, we have been drawing from them since the first killings for the sick and starving. But now those numbers are limited, and we have to pick and choose who to give food and who to die!" For Vampyres, they were immune to disease and poisons, unless they weren't mature or crumbing away from their age. If they were starving, though, their immune systems got weaker, and instead of dying of hunger, they died of a common cold, or poisons. My father stood up and said "From now on, at least two soldiers will accompany any hunting party, and we will hunt near and in the Deepwoods, as far as away from the villages as possible. Night patrols and Night Hunting Packs will be established, and every Vampyre will carry a sharp-ended sword, and will be forced to fight, instead of run, even Fledglings or Newborns." This meant that there would be more Vampyres busting around to get fresh blood from scarce areas. The animals were not plentiful anymore in the Deepwoods. Our 'great and holy' ancestors killed all of the prey in the Deepwoods. That is why we always hunt near human civilizations. Even if prey is scarce, human blood will always be available.
I grabbed my sword, Ripjaw( A black, obsidian-onyx mix blade, a lizard-skin hilt with a black diamond gemstone at the hilt. It is a one-handed sword made for slicing mostly, but can stab sharply. It has the words Rilovas-Havaskai carved into the side of the blade, meaning Ripping Jaw, or Ripjaw.) and joined a hunting pack consisting of 4 mature, able-bodied hunters and 3 mature soldiers. One of the soldiers was my brother, his name was Stone and he is the youngest male Vampyre in my family (age:270). My father had picked him because this was his initiation to be apart of the Elite Guard. If he failed, he didn't come back. I was the leader of this pack, so I lead the way into the night-black woods.
As we entered the Deepwoods, every sound or stir in the night stopped. We cast tracking spells, and after some time, we found out that a male elk had travelled through the area in the past hour. I nodded to the pack and we spread out in a fan-like formation to block off all escapes. When we came upon the elk, it was grazing peacefully, but there was something on his leg. It was some sort of leg-chain that had a blinking light. One of the pack members took a step forward, but I raised my hand to stop him. It was a trap of some sort, set up by the Hunters. I had been pondering the thought of why there had been no sight or scent of the Hunters. Now it made sense. They were trying to lure us in with the prey. If we killed that elk, an alarm would send signals to its base and a troop of Hunters would come after us and we'd be dead by dawn. I shook my head, not safe. I made a hissing sound and scared the elk away. It was plump, too. I suppose the elk was born in captivity and released to the wild when it got fat to lure us in with the thought of plump prey. I cast another scent-trail spell, and faintly scented a lone rabbit, injured, trailing through here. I pointed west, the way the rabbit had gone, and we were in a tightly-packed group, perfect for rabbit chasing. We were lead to an open plain of grass, with a rabbit, dead in the center. It was normal for an injured rabbit to die, and normally, the blood was fine to drink. Instead, there was blood marking the grass, in a ring around the rabbit. It looked as if someone was marking territory. The blood was fresh enough, but the marking of the grass was too complex for an ordinary animal to make, it was another trap.
One of the pack members, my brother sadly, could see that it was a trap, but he ran out there to drink the open blood. Immediately, when Stone ran up to the rabbit, a bear trap clamped on his leg, and he screeched louder than a dying hawk. There must have been some poison on the trap, because Stone's foot was melting and sealing to the trap. Steam was everywhere too, he still continued to scream, giving away our position and giving the Hunters what they wanted. We drew out our swords, and started to get in a defensive position around the circle. Stone screamed ''Help me, Ember, help me! You are my sister, I have a family, and I don't want to die!" We couldn't last any longer with his screaming rampages waking up the whole forest. I scanned the ground in front of me, stepped in the circle, careful not to step in any traps, went up to the Vampyre and said "I'm sorry, brother, but this is for the greater good. Our family will have to do without you." He shouted "'Nooooooooooo!" as I beheaded him. My black blade was dripping with inky Vampyre blood. It hurt to see the blood on my blade, even though I had killed plenty of Vampyres and humans alike. It was because this was the first time I killed a part of my family that hurt. As soon as I stepped out side the circle, a swarm of Hunters ran up to me, swords in their hands. I slashed one of them in the calf, disabling his left leg. I delivered a killing blow to his head as soon as he collapsed. I stabbed another Hunter in the side, injuring him badly. I rushed to help a Vampyre killing the last Hunter, the Hunter with a helmet and full set of armor meant to protect from Vampyres. I smashed the hilt of my sword into the side of his helmet, which felt like a thin piece of sheet metal when hit by the strong hilt of Ripjaw. He fell over to the ground, passed out. I removed the helmet and took al of the blood he had and put them in vials. When I was done, I saw that the rest of the pack had done the same. We put it into our leather packs and took their armor. We burned the bodies, never to be found as we buried the ashes 7 feet under.
When wee arrived at the Coven, we showed the blood to the Coven leader and he said "Well done! Put them into the stocks to be rationed. We are still running low. Any casualties?" I looked at the pack and back at the Coven leader and said "We all had minor injuries, one major, and one death. The dead body is in the cathedral, on an altar, waiting to be buried." He asked "Who passed away?" I answered "Stone."
"His cause of death?"
"Decapitation(or beheading)"
"Who? The Hunters or was it a murder?"
"I did, sir. I killed Stone. I did it for the greater good, his leg was caught in a trap, and if I didn't kill him, we would all be dead. I had to do it, sir."
"I see. Go to your quarters until the burial. Your rations will come at dawn and do not leave your quarters until I say so, Ember. The rest may either join another hunting patrol or guard patrol. You may be dismissed."
I was in my quarters when a Vampyre entered with a golden chalice (or goblet). It was filled with blood to the brim. The Vampyre set it down on a table and left the room quickly. My father entered the room a few hours later. He said "Now let me get this straight, you killed Stone when he wasn't going to die. By that definition, you killed him in cold blood." I replied "He was going to die, father. He gave away our position. I did it for the greater good. For the Coven! If I didn't kill him, then we would've all died. Reinforcements would've come, and we would all be dead, or worse, captured. If I didn't kill him, the whole coven would be dead. Stone's death was inevitable. You must believe me, father. I did not kill him mercilessly. After all, he was the one who walked in the trap." My father shook his head, and said "you can come to the burial, but terrible things will happen afterwards. I have no choice to punish you for the death of a brother. You of all people must know that." I did not like those words, Terrible things. What would those things be? Exile? Lashings? Torture? Many thoughts flew in my head as I walked down to the cathedral.
I arrived to see that it had not started yet, and my siblings glared upon me. My sister stood there, crying, and my brothers circled her defensively, like I would kill one of them the minute I got the chance. I glanced around innocently. My father placed Stone's body on the altar in the center. Then he said "Kcylunum Monice Entenium" which meant "Spirits accept him" And the body went afire the minute he said that. He said "Stone is in The Shadowlands now, my brethren. Now we have a court to attend." A few Vampyre soldiers escorted me to the courthouse. In the dank, dark, courthouse building, there is a podium and a few pews for the court to sit on. The court is full of family members and the Coven leader. Everything was full when I entered.
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Postby Night Ember » Fri Jun 20, 2014 1:06 pm

working on part two, i hope you enjoyed the first entry
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Postby Night Ember » Sat Jun 21, 2014 4:33 am

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Postby The Last flower » Sat Jun 21, 2014 4:36 am

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Postby Night Ember » Sat Jun 21, 2014 5:22 am

yes, and I have completed part two, which is either just as long, or longer. I have been working on these for months and when I get an idea, I just write and see where it takes me, which happens to be far in this case
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Postby Night Ember » Sat Jun 21, 2014 5:27 am

I was in the courtroom, awaiting trial. Then the leader, my father, beckoned to the court officer to read the charges. The officer read out, "Ember, daughter of our gracious and merciful Coven leader, Ozark, and his respectful, but sadly dead, Cerda, has been charged with the murder of her true-blood brother Stone. She has also come back empty-handed in hunts and has not fought in a battle with the Hunters. She has proved unproductive and unhelpful to the Coven. Therefore, no work would equal penalty." My father said " is there anything to...disprove... about these statements? " I replied "It was not my fault that the forest is empty. The Hunters are circling us in, like animals. They took the prey or scared it off. It isn't my fault that there is no prey to hunt. As for the murder of Stone, I did it for the greater good. If I didn't kill him, the large forces the Hunters would've arranged would've killed him and the whole pack, with no blood either. Why do I have to repeat this to you? His death was inevitable, I tell you!" The Vampyre court seemed unconvinced. "Nevertheless, you still killed Stone. Punishment is exile, therefore, you are exiled. Case closed. Court dismissed." The guards grabbed my arms and escorted me to my quarters. I gathered nothing, because everything seemed useless to me. That night, before I left, a black wolf with burning ember eyes appeared in my dreams. It said "Hello, Ember. It seems that you have been abandoned by your family, your friends, and all you ever cared about. I am Rage, leader of Death and Shadow Stalker. Your ancestors have abandoned you, no? Where will you go when you die? Will you dissipate, like those in the Shadow Realm? I have a... proposition for you. I will let you in my cairn, if you do one simple task for me." I answered "And what might that be?" Rage answered, " Never go to your ancestors for help, or guidance. Do not turn away from my power. And give me your life and your soul. That is all I wish of you. You have three days to answer. Choose the right choice, and when you die, join me. the black wolf disappeared and I awoke to guards standing over me.My father walked up to me, and said "No luggage? Surprising of you. Get this piece of scum out of my way!" The only thing I had bothered to collect was Riptide, and a steel dagger, just in case." I walked to the center of the clearing, where the whole Coven, consisting of about 50 (a decline of at least 300% in the last year due to disease and Hunters), was waiting. I knew what was a out to happen. They were going to shun me, and my ancestors would turn away. My father spoke, "Ember has murdered Stone, her brother, in cold blood. Therefore, the Ancestors shall shun and disown her, she will never be allowed to enter the realm of the Vampyre-kin. May her death be slow and cold." They turned me loose outside of the hidden entrance, and left me for dead.
I went into the forest, and immediately, a group of Hunters captured me. I put up no resistance, and raised my arms to see that I was no threat. They told me to get on my knees, and then injected sedatives in my neck. When I awoke, I had no armor, no sword, just my hidden dagger. I was in ragged clothing, with no shoes or gloves. I was in some sort of prison cell, with four bunks and a table with a candle and tray of 'food'. It was a mixture of mashed who-knows-what on the tray. It had a red tint of color, as if they wanted me to believe it was blood. I didn't eat, or sleep. I just stared at the iron door, until a guar came in their and said "Get up!" I stood up, and he explained things to me. "Now, here in the town of Biel, we have a place for Vampires like you. When a guard enters here, you stand up. When he escorts you to roll call, you say nothing. If you run away, we will not kill you, just send 7000 volts of electricity through your brain. Death is your option. Then, you go to the mines. When you see the Vampires on sticks getting eaten by the buzzards, you don't help him, just do your job. And you will eat your food. Hard work is happy work, until you get transported or die. Only one of them will happen to you, until you get tortured, which is a different story. Now come along, prisoner!" I followed him, expecting to go outside, but instead we went by a smelter. Their was a Vampyre there too, but he had a brander in his hand. The guard showed him my right arm, bare, and I felt an immediate pain run through my arm. On my arm read Vampyre, 958,694. It also had the symbol of a howling black wolf head below it. That was the symbol for the place. A black, howling, wolf head.
I was lead outside with a pickaxe to see poles made of wood, steel, or rusted iron outside. When I got a better look at them, I saw that some of them had bones chained to them, others had people. I saw these vulture-like buzzards perched on the poles. They looked like a vulture, only they were bigger and had longer, sharper beaks. We were to work from dusk till dawn, no breaks. There was at least 500 other Vampyres with me, pickaxing at a large stone. I looked at one of their arms and saw Vampyre, 879,603 I looked around and saw that only Vampyres were pickaxing. The guards were human, I could tell by the stench of their blood. Some Vampyres had no limbs, others, were scarred or burned terribly. I noticed that no one was sick and I asked the Vampyre, who I figured out was named James, who was beside me, why. He said "The sick ones die so fast, they cannot move the next morning. The guards strap them to poles, and let the Death Buzzards get them. You die slower when you're up there, because your a Vampyre. Humans get eaten in a blink of an eye." The work was backbreaking through the night. The guard always had a crossbow pointed at our backs, and every time he got bored, he said "You're not going fast enough" and drag one of our ranks out and beat him to death with the butt of the weapon. Soon, our numbers were reduced to lower than 50.
When the sun peaked up in the sky, the guard blew a whistle. The Vampyres who had done this before led the way to the barracks. The dead bodies were piled up and burned, and the ashes were kicked into the ferns. I saw another group of people pass us with pickaxes, and on one of their arms read Werewolf, 902,751 She had a look of sorrow and defeat in her eyes. For the first time, I got a clear view of the surroundings. Their was 9 lumber buildings: Guards Barracks, Vampyre Barracks, Werewolf Barracks, Dragonoid Barracks, Weapons Barracks, Blacksmith, Storage, Prison, and the Mess Hall. In the middle of the clearing was a whipping post, and the hanging post that was 12 feet high, barely tall enough to hang the tallest Vampyre that ever lived. There was blood al around the whipping post and the hanging tree. The prison was not made of lumber, but bones. Inside, I was told that there was one room, with an around-the-room bench. Everyone in the prison worked, and they slept, ate, and sat in that room. If you get put in that room, you will get tortured surely, and if you get a disease, you die. A train runs right beside the town/encampment, and it delivers livestock, supplies, and weapons, in return the guards give us over as servants or slaves. A werewolf costs 200$ in supplies or money, a Dragonoid/ Reptilian Being costs 125$,a human costs 85$, and a Vampyre costs 20$. The ones that sell the best are Dragonoids or humans, because of there little weaknesses and strengths. A werewolf sells terribly on full moon because of fables and Vampyres don't sell that much at all.
The next morning, it was another backbreaking workday when the guard blew the whistle early. All of the Vampyres were very confused, and then we saw why. Dragons. Not the Dragonoid beings who were like humans, no, these dragons were the real deal, fire-breathing, flying, the whole package. We were rushed in the inflammable barracks and the guards called upon a group of specified people to kill the Dragons. I had heard of these people before. They were the Dragon Hunters. They used up everything that Dragons provided; bones, pelts, even dung was used. They were the only group of people brave enough to fight a dragon and they normally won. The thing about them, was that they didn't care what race or being you were, only if you provided coin.
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Postby Night Ember » Sat Jun 21, 2014 6:23 am

thanks for the feedback, part three is still in progress unfortunately but it will be out soon.
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Postby Night Ember » Sat Jun 21, 2014 7:48 am

I watched as the Dragon Hunters threw a spear with such precision, it split a Dragon's wing from its body, rendering the Dragon crippled. It landed right where they wanted it to. Then, they took a celestial sword and plunged it far into its eye, killing it. The Dragon shuddered and jerked, but then it was motionless. The Dragon Hunter caught my eye and beckoned for me to come over there. The guards surprisingly didn't mind and let me go over to him. The Hunter said "Hello, young Vampyre. I am your only escape. Rage sent me to fetch you from this place and turn you into a Hunter like us. After that, Rage said that he had other plans for you." The Hunter gave the guard coins and led me out of the camp. I caught James staring at me with a pleading look of not desperation, Jealousy, or disgust, but instead he had eyes filled with sorrow and love, like he is losing the person he loved most in his life. I didn't know it, but I had broken the poor Vampyre's heart by choosing to leave. Rage's voice filled my head He is an unbeliever, leave him and find someone worth being the mate of. Remember your end and I will remember mine. I looked away and realized that there was a horse already saddled for me. I got on the horse, which I named James to remember him. The horse was a sandy brown which looks 'metallic' at some angles and it was thin and light, just like Vampyres. I learned later that it was an Akhal-Teke horse. I rode with the Hunters to a camp 70 miles off. I saw the terrain and learned that I was not that far from home, or what was home-not that I wanted to return to live with them, but I wanted revenge for there punishments against me. I heard Rage's voice again Yes, my apprentice, get revenge for both of us, you have no idea what they did to me, I want to crush their bones as repayment for their crimes I was confused. Apprentice? I didn't know about my status towards Rage. Rage said again Yes, apprentice. You have passed the tests and the barriers. Once you get the proper training from my followers, the Dragon Hunters, then you will be ready for training from me. When that day comes, be ready and be clever. I have lost too many apprentices for their foolishness. Then we arrived at the camp when the sun peaked just above the trees, and quickly falling down them. The leading Hunter looked at my arm and said "Who are you? I have never heard of a prisoner who escaped Biel. You must be brave to do such a thing. You probably don't want to tell me what it's like there and I don't want you to tell me. Tell me, though, who do you worship?" I was nervous, this was the ending point, the certainty. I either said 'Rage' or I didn't. I said "Rage, I believe that Rage is the answer to my problems." The leader stood up and turned to the Hunters and said "All hail Rage!" and the camp replied "All hail Rage!" The chieftain accepted me. I fell asleep and entered the Nightmarish world of Rage.
In the word of Rage, I appeared before a council on black rocks. Rage was on the tallest rock with a beautiful white female wolf with Icy blue eyes. A voice in my head, as beautiful as birdsong, said Snowball, I am Snowball. The wolf on the rock to the left is Venomfang. The one below him is Scarface. On my right side is Bone, and the one below him is Night. We are the council of Rage, judging the dead and accepting the newly apprenticed, especially to the great, beloved Rage himself. Welcome, Ember. I asked them "You aren't Vampyres, though. You're all wolves. Rage told me with wisdom in my head Look again, my apprentice. We are shifters. From Vampyres to Wolves to Humans. I looked back at them and saw Vampyre-kin.
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