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Re: NightClan's Untold Stories

Postby fish out of water » Fri Jun 13, 2014 2:42 pm

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Sunkit slumped in the nursery, eyes darting around, she was just the same as every other kit, and she didn't like it. If i could be anything, i would be like her. she whispered, watching a group of kits gather around Greyshade, an elder that was wowing them with amazing sparks generating from her paws. with a sigh, Sunkit longed for attention. she carefully looked around, but all the cats were watching Greyshade.


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Re: NightClan's Untold Stories

Postby fish out of water » Tue Jun 17, 2014 1:14 am

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Featherclan warriors mreowed as the Nightclan cats leaped. Yes, it was a rumble, and Nightclan had the upper hand. Cat's vissions were blurred by reds, browns, whites, blacks, and oranges as the brawl continued to escilatee quickly though the river that Featherclan and Nightclan shares together in what used to be peace. One cat pushed and shoved between cats, yelling "Stop!" and more tellings in hopes to conclude the battle, but nothing seemed to help. Finally, everyone paused when they heard a yowl of frustration comming from above. All heads turned towards the two leaders Cinderstar and Spiritstar, both glaring at the fighting bunch. "Stop fighting at once, all of you." Cinderstar hissed. Some cats blushed while others tapped their claws in frustration. "Listen well warriors, if we catch any of you starting another of these brawls, we will kill the cat on the spot, no questions asked." Cinderstar and Spiritstar hissed. The cats grumbled and parted ways, watching as Cinderstar and Spiritstar parted also.

Cherrypaw sat next to his brother Jaypaw boredly. "Did i see you watching Rosepaw (made up cat) hunting?" he asked, bumping his brother with a chuckle. Cherrypaw blushed and looked down at his paws with a nod. "Yeah, she is such a beautiful she cat, her eyes are like embers and her pelt is like sunset." he sighed, "But she doesn't like me back." he whined. "well why don't you go find another she cat than?" Jaypaw asked, tilting his head. Cherrypaw shot him a glare and padded away.

Meanwhile, Hailpaw (another made up cat) padded over to Rowanpaw. "So have you thought about me becoming your mate yet?" he asked, looking over at Sandstone (another made up cat) Rowanpaw's father who was smiling at the match. Rowanpaw sighed "I am not even a warrior yet Hailpaw, i think i should at least wait until than." she told him unhappily. Sandstone glarred at his kit, padding over to the pair. Rowanpaw quickly got to her paws and padded back to the apprentice den. "Why don't you have some cats meet in a clearing soon for a gathering of Nightclan and Featherclan?" he whispered, hoping that Hailpaw could win the heart of his daughter there. Hailpaw agreed and quickly padded into the forest.

Cherrypaw and Jaypaw continued to discuss Rosepaw, as a featherclan cat padded into view. "Excse me you two, but would you meet me and some other featherclan and Nightclan cats tonight for a gathering of the clans to celibrate peace?" Hailpaw asked the two. "We will both be there sir." Jaypaw quickly announced. Cherrypaw shoved his brother out of the way and looked at hailpaw. "Will Rosepaw be there?" he asked carefully. "Er- i guess!" Hailpaw told him with a nod. Cherrypaw approved and padded back to camp with his brother.

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Long Before Our Time

Postby #Spirit » Tue Jun 17, 2014 7:36 am

back when there was no warrior code to rule over them, clan cats roamed freely and did as they chose, however, Brackenstar did not wish to be shown as weak at any cost, so he raised his own 'army' of warriors to attack the other groups of cats now considered clans. These are some of the stories, absolutely, positively, untold.


A rustling sounded from the bushes the ancient leader, his eyes sparkling like gold among his pitch black pelt, despite his oddly-colored brownish paw in the front right that earned him his prefix, entered a small, dark clearing in the dead of night and then sat down, tail snaking around his paws, as he thought. He pondered over quite a few things in his time, happiness, misunderstanding, the cursed, the dead, and simply fate. Suddenly his chest felt as if it were a burning sensation, he choked and then pressed himself against a tree out of agony, everything was a blur except for one vision, redness cloaked his sight as a brown cat came into mind, slashing against his screen of thought. The large brown cat clawed a trembling golden and white tom down the neck and then stomach as the cat fell and smacked against the hard thunderpath. He gasped out of much pain and confusion, for these cats were surely unfamiliar, the scene was then whisked away by something as fast as the flash of a claw and a beautiful young, grey spotted kit lay at her mothers belly, that was now drowned and then a white cat with black spots, seeming to be a kittypet, or house cat, held down by a grey seeming blue cat that was kittypet, too. A swirling sensation of thunder interrupted this and then came a cat calling to it's mother as being struck by the claws of a cat with one eye, and then like fire it was burned and there was his son, looking around frantically, the leader called weakly, "Frogkit! FROGKIT, FROOOOGKIT!" And awoke to see the roof of a den, the cave where cats in need of being treated went. He woke to claws ripping against his face and quickly slashed the cat who did so across the neck, "where's Frogkit?!" He inquired quickly and turned to see the kit hiding behind his mother, the leader's mate, RabbitTail. He sighed in relief, "oh." He was answered with, "you've been sleeping for two days!" The herb-master, Brownbee, hissed at him and wiped the ancient leader's blood from her claws angrily. The leader growled, "who cares?" And with that he stormed from the den and padded to the clearing where he greedily snatched a fish from the small pile of prey near the entrance an d took it to the clearing where he hungrily wolfed it down. Suddenly, Talonkit, Weaselkit, Fishkit, and Wetkit came racing up to him

Talonkit inquired quickly, "what happened?!" her face grew worried

"Where were you?" Wetkit suddenly burst out, paws itching with curiosity

Weaselkit piped up, "was-" She was interrupted by her brother, Fishkit

Fishkit asked, "was it scary? Did somebody attack you?!"

Brackenstar hissed, "Shut up! All of you!!" The kits trembled as he stood to his paws, fish bones dangling from his strong jaws as his eyes blazed, "I won't tell you what happened," he growled and watched as little Frogkit came running up to his father, now there was no doubt that the ancient leader surely favored his son over any other cat.

Frogkit squeaked, Dad! That was really scary, could you tell me a story? The kit plopped down right next to Talonkit as well as Wetkit and stared up at his father with wide, round eyes. Talonkit slowly sat herself down and stared at Fishkit, Weaselkit, and Wetkit

Brackenstar let out a sigh, "fine, listen well, all of you. For I have more knowledge than any of the cats in NightClan, for I have a gift."

Long ago, long before the noble first cats of the clans and even longer than the clans of big-cats, there was a group of cats that called themselves the cave-diggers, they lived in small groups and were often picked by the leader of them all to be in a certain group. There were about six-ten to each group and each layering of the claw moon (week) they would meet for a day to have a feast to eat and share prey, celebrate their accomplishments, reunite, and of course, help dig the caves. Sometimes while digging in groups they may often run into each other and stop quickly to say their greetings then carry on. The leader would split each kit in a litter to a different group, and each group had a cat with milk, there tended to be many queens since this was normal for a she-cat to have kits a lot. The leader was a light grey she-cat with darker grey flecks, the other cats knew her as Spirit, their savior as well as founder, and in the modern clans she has a reincarnation. There had been no deputy since that did not come to mind to any of the cave-diggers. They often spent their time building the caves that in modern time is now known as the tunnels of CaveClan, but back then it was their shelter. One day, a giant title wave suddenly came from nowhere and washed into the tunnels, filling it with water and drowning the cave-diggers. The last thing that Spirit saw before death was the image a small black kitten crying out into the forest that then faded. That cat later grew to be Nightstar, founder of NightClan


Long ago there was a loving pair, now becoming a mother and a father to a handsome tom which they named Night, and a scrawny she-kit who was named Day. Night was a full black tom like his father and Day had her mother's long golden fur, they all lived happily together until one evening, Night awoke to the clash of battle, now five moons old, to see his only known family dead at the battle-side, the cats were fighting over a rabbit, he gasped out and ran as far away from the scuffle as possible, angry and sad at the same time. For a long time he sulked and learned to hunt and fend for himself, he felt superior in his honesty. When he was 12 moons old, he decided to find the cats who did this, and as he entered the small of cats, blood, and lake-water he found two cats 'training' using tooth and claw, constantly slashing at each other. Night hid in the shadows, eyes narrowed, he couldn't tell what was going on, he rose to his paws but was stopped from moving any farther by a beautiful she-cat. He gaped up at her as she narrowed her eyes and asked his business there, he replied with, 'none of yours,' and snuck past her but was stopped again, they asked each other's names and carried on. Soon, Night seemed to have been hypnotized by them, in a way, and soon was soaked in the violence of the strange everyday life of these battling cats. They marked their own boundaries and soon there were about 20 new individual 'territories' for the cats. In his dream, Night was visited by his sister, Day, and told him that he made a wrong turn and had to fix it. He didn't understand how she was in his dream, but she replied that she was in StarClan. When he woke up he padded to the clearing where most cats met and stretched, unsure of what to do. Later on there came a time when there had to be four leaders chosen, and Night happened to be one of them, he had -star added to the end of his name and became Nightstar of NightClan, the first official leader of NightClan. There was Feather who became Featherstar, the beautiful she-cat that he had met when he arrived to the place by the lake, she took FeatherClan as her clan's name, and all of the clans were named after their founders. Leafstar of the new LeafClan, he was strong. And the speedy she-cat Applestar of AppleClan



One peaceful day in the life of Nightstar turned confusing when he had seen his sister in the clearing motioning with her tail for him to follow her, she was in StarClan but he didn't get how she could be in NightClan territory. He took a walk to clear his mind, hoping that his sister would come and explain to him, but it still would be odd. He ran into a snake and it spoke to him, Nightstar felt as if he'd lost his mind, it said to beware of the things coming. He ran and bumped into the ghostly spirit of his sister, he wondered if these odd things were all warnings about a rising danger, and so it came, he dreamed and awoke in a gloomy forest, where one single cat was living. He smirked evilly and let his claws loose, he told him that this was the Dark Forest, where the merciless roamed, his name was Tooth. He told him that the NightClan race could communicate with the dead as well as cats that were not of their kind, Tooth seemed lonely. For many moons, Nightstar and Tooth would speak secretly, but one day Tooth turned on him, attack, and made him lose a 'life,' he cursed and screeched at the thought of leaders having nine chances, and he was soon killed a second time by Nightstar. He faded away, and that was the discovery of NightClan's ability


Brackenstar rose to his paws and padded from camp once it was nighttime, he felt eyes stare into him and his claws suddenly slid free and he stalked among the grass, picking up the scent from the bushes. There stood two starry cats, Willowstar and Owlclaw, the cats that he had killed for his position as leader, Owlclaw for deputy and once he was deputy, he took Willowstar's last life. "A bit close to the edge, eh, Brackenfoot?" Owlclaw taunted as he was near the edge of a deep gorge "you don't deserve your position as deputy, never EVER so much as leader, you never earned it, I was wrong about you, and now I'll fix that mistake. Silverclaw will make a great leader," Willowstar growled, they had killed the current deputy, Leopardtail, and he was sent to the Dark Forest. Owlclaw stepped forwards and lashed out a paw but Brackenstar quickly caught it and clawed down his neck. They battled for a long time before Willowstar finally heaved Brackenstar towards the cliff, sending him plunging into the rocks, it was over for the ancient leader.
















Years later, Spiritstar sent Killer plunging off the edge of that very cliff, but Thornstar appeared and sent Spiritstar down with him, knocking her off the edge as she slipped, falling to her doom, or at least the first life taken from her. She fell and before hitting the ground, she saw dry blood, that of which was quite old, and a patch of bracken-colored fur.
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Bluemoon and Stormheart's Story<3

Postby Henry is Bae » Tue Jun 17, 2014 10:33 am

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Re: NightClan's Untold Stories

Postby #Spirit » Sat Jul 05, 2014 4:44 am

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When we used to be friends

Postby Henry is Bae » Thu Jul 10, 2014 8:11 am

Starring Bluekit and Sandkit



Hi im Sandkit my mother is Crookedheart,my father is Slateshadow but i never see him anymore which stinks,but i have a friend who is named Bluekit her mother is Applewing and her father is Speckclaw,but they fought which is sad,well im her to tell you about how me and Bluekit used to be friends.

Hi im Bluekit as you know my father is Speckclaw and my mother is Applewing,i have a friend who's name is Sandkit and she likes Frostpaw ohh,well here is how we were friends



Well it started when i was born,i saw Sandkit playing with Crookedheart as i was the first to open my eyes and i stumble dover to her

I Saw Bluekit come over to me and i mewed"Hi Bluekit want to be friends?"

And i said"Sure Sandkit!"and we played togeather till Applewing mewed my name"Bluekit!"and i said"see ya"and left

The Bluekit left and i was lonely again and i cruled up next to Crookedheart

~~Time skip to 4 moons~~

Me and Bluekit woke up to battle cries as the camp was getting attacked and crookedheart lef tme with the kits and we then stumbled to the leaders den and hid as the cats attacked


I ran into the Leaders den and i wanted to fight so i did and i ran out after magpiekit tried to grab me and i got away and i killed atanother mkit as then a big russet cat came and grabbed me in its jaw then i heard a cat yell"Nice job Rowanstar!" and i found out the cats name was Shadowstep the one who tried to posion Sandkit


I watched Bluekit run out as i yowled for her but she dissapered then i heard a kit yowl as it then went silent and it was a long time trill the cats came back to camp and i saw Applewing crying with Bluekit limp in her mouth"Bluekit!?"i yowled as i ran to her and looked at her as she was not bluish color anymore she was sticky with blood i wailed as Crookedheart came and coaxed me and then Applewing set Bluekit down and cleaned her pelt as i found out she had died and i was heartbroke"Bluekit!"i wailed as Bluekit opened her eyes

I opened my eyes for a second"Bye Sandkit,by Applewing"i mewed as i then fell and it went black,now i Bluekit now hunt with Starclan

"Bluekit!"I wailed as she went limp and i Sandkit just lost a friend that day and Applewing and Speckclaw were still fighting
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Re: When we used to be friends

Postby pinkdepths » Thu Jul 10, 2014 8:15 am

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Starring Bluekit and Sandkit



Hi im Sandkit my mother is Crookedheart,my father is Slateshadow but i never see him anymore which stinks,but i have a friend who is named Bluekit her mother is Applewing and her father is Speckclaw,but they fought which is sad,well im her to tell you about how me and Bluekit used to be friends.

Hi im Bluekit as you know my father is Speckclaw and my mother is Applewing,i have a friend who's name is Sandkit and she likes Frostpaw ohh,well here is how we were friends



Well it started when i was born,i saw Sandkit playing with Crookedheart as i was the first to open my eyes and i stumble dover to her

I Saw Bluekit come over to me and i mewed"Hi Bluekit want to be friends?"

And i said"Sure Sandkit!"and we played togeather till Applewing mewed my name"Bluekit!"and i said"see ya"and left

The Bluekit left and i was lonely again and i cruled up next to Crookedheart

~~Time skip to 4 moons~~

Me and Bluekit woke up to battle cries as the camp was getting attacked and crookedheart lef tme with the kits and we then stumbled to the leaders den and hid as the cats attacked


I ran into the Leaders den and i wanted to fight so i did and i ran out after magpiekit tried to grab me and i got away and i killed atanother mkit as then a big russet cat came and grabbed me in its jaw then i heard a cat yell"Nice job Rowanstar!" and i found out the cats name was Shadowstep the one who tried to posion Sandkit


I watched Bluekit run out as i yowled for her but she dissapered then i heard a kit yowl as it then went silent and it was a long time trill the cats came back to camp and i saw Applewing crying with Bluekit limp in her mouth"Bluekit!?"i yowled as i ran to her and looked at her as she was not bluish color anymore she was sticky with blood i wailed as Crookedheart came and coaxed me and then Applewing set Bluekit down and cleaned her pelt as i found out she had died and i was heartbroke"Bluekit!"i wailed as Bluekit opened her eyes

I opened my eyes for a second"Bye Sandkit,by Applewing"i mewed as i then fell and it went black,now i Bluekit now hunt with Starclan

"Bluekit!"I wailed as she went limp and i Sandkit just lost a friend that day and Applewing and Speckclaw were still fighting


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Dewpaw's Story

Postby areadbhar » Sun Jul 20, 2014 2:42 pm

As the rain pounded hard, the three kits where left by Nightclan's territory. "They'll do better if they are taken by the cats living here." A she-cat's voice says. The silvery grey kit without a leg fought hard. Her sisters froze to death. The silvery kit slept in a dry burrow.

The next day, robins awoke the small kit. "M-mommy?" She cried.

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Blackpelt's Death

Postby #Spirit » Sun Sep 14, 2014 2:38 pm

A short, lazy story about how Blackpelt died and Spiritsong killed Thornstar, pretty much

Pain surged through Blackpelt's body as claws slice into his neck, Thornstar snarled in the face of her deputy, "traitor! You swore that you would be rid of that supposed 'prophecy' cat that you told me about from your dream. Now that mousebrain will take over my clan, imbecile! Tell me or I will slice you open from head to tail." She spat at him.

Blackpelt's eyes were narrowed as he struggled to get out from Thornstar's hard grip around his neck, his ears just about reached the thunderpath in which the cruel leader had caught him at. "I will never tell you, I'd rather die."

Thornstar chuckled, "your wish is my command." That twisted smirk grew upon her face as her grasp tightened, she began to strangle Blackpelt as he growled, lashing out sharp claws at the leader's cheek, but that was for no use since Thornstar quickly caught that and pinned it back to the ground. She threatened, "If you don't tell me, I will launch you right onto that thunderpath."
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"Do as you please," just as he said that, a most trusted warrior, Redclaw filed in beside Thornstar with the same creepy grin. He dashed forwards ever so suddenly and clenched Blackpelt by the back of his neck, obviously trying to locate the life vein.

"Redclaw!" Scolded Thornstar, "not yet."

Blood stained the grass around Blackpelt and he was so weak that he could barely move. He felt a push and Thornstar and Redclaw were hauling him into the thunderpath. The world was spinning it felt like. Suddenly, Blackpelt jumped to his paws and whipped around, lifting a paw and slashing against Redclaw's face, turning and running through the forest, StarClan help me! He willed, Thornstar was just close behind. His instincts instructed him to climb up the large tree once he reached the Great Oak. And so he went, launching himself forwards, blood spilling everywhere, it hurt but he had no choice, so he kept going and going until reaching the top, he remembered doing this as an apprentice. He was safe here, or so he thought that they had lost him. He sat for a few minutes before something else happened...

He could sense a presence, and it was an unwelcoming cat, Thornstar, yes. She swung at Blackpelt and he narrowly dodged, aiming for her chest and knocking her back, pinning her against the wood, "not so strong now, are y-" and just then, Redclaw came up from behind and rammed into the deputy, knocking him from the tree as he fell to the ground. Everything became dizzy as Blackpelt awoke to a row of starry cats.
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Re: NightClan's Untold Stories

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