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[glassea]

right so i've been using this one form multiple times because i'm really lazy. but i'd love some critique on it, for if i'll be using it a lot, i want it to look as nice as possible c: suggestions?
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[solstice.]

@rose/mil; i'm not in the slightest bit good at coding.
i honestly just slap things together at random. ._.
i just told you my ultimate secret to coding.
oh another thing, i haven't decided which to call you.
hence the double names up in the tag x-x

@glas; i truly do like that form, it's so well put.
but i believe in the third one, the name is all
wonky for me. maybe resize that part to fit it?

[glassea]

ahh, thanks guys c: but criticize me plz

@ lissome
i'm afraid i don't see what you're talking about...? it does depend on your browser, i think, because they each format symbols slightly differently, or maybe your screen is narrower than mine. that one's resized slightly but it shouldn't be making a major difference.

[solstice.]

@glas; it's probably screen width getting me.
other than that detail, it honestly looks great.
i'm so bad at criticizing people i'm sorry xp

[charmey]

*cough cough cough* like i was literally just watching frozen like ten minutes ago YAASSS this should be fun!

[chagrin]

can i have some critique from you lovely bunch? xx

[pratt]

okay, finished it. what do you guys think?

[chagrin]

@milenia - those were kind of bugging me too. i changed them now :) thanks

@tundra - the bottom corners are a bit off for me [too low]
delete the empty rows you've left rows between the text and them?
also i think the blue is too strong for that color palette.
it looks nice but i think it'd be better if it was all black and white
or a really pastel and light blue.

[pratt]

@'chagrin
okay thanks for the critique. i will definitely try that.

[Phione Mango]

y'know when you have made the template for a pretty roleplay form, and you just wite 'words words words' etc., do you sometimes find it hard to get the right amount of words?


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[b]Do you some times find it hard to write the right amount of words in a role play template you have made?[/b]


Do you some times find it hard to write the right amount of words in a role play template you have made?
I know I do, but normally I make the details first and pretty it up later, I didn't know how unusual that was 0.o