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Re: Fool's gold-Book one:The fight

Postby opalnecklace » Sat Jun 14, 2014 12:09 pm

Part Five Book One
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Re: Fool's gold-Book one:The fight

Postby opalnecklace » Sat Jun 14, 2014 12:25 pm

The person passes over the bridge.But then sees me.The person also has a bow.I can tell it's made of birch wood.Mine is made of oak.I can also tell the person is a girl.She draws her bow.I draw my bow pointed at her bow then I let go.My arrow strikes her bow and it splits the bow's fine face and the girl drops it.She jumps into the water and swims very fast over to me.She jumps on my and pins me down to the bottom of the lake.I am going to drown is all I think right now.So I grab a arrow and stab her with it.She lets ok of me and I swim to the top of the water then I cough and weakly swim to the shore.I see a lighting strike.Jake grabs me and pulls me out of the water.After that everything went black.
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Re: Fool's gold-Book one:The fight

Postby opalnecklace » Sat Jun 14, 2014 12:43 pm

{Please tell me if you want more!}
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Re: Fool's gold-Book one:The fight

Postby xToxicWolfx » Sat Jun 14, 2014 12:48 pm

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Re: Fool's gold-Book one:The fight

Postby opalnecklace » Sat Jun 14, 2014 12:49 pm

C:}
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Re: Fool's gold-Book one:The fight

Postby opalnecklace » Sun Jun 15, 2014 8:30 am

I woke up.Not in the woods.Not in the lake.Not in Jake's arms.I wake up in a room.It is full white.Not doors no windows that I can see.Just white.I try to get up but I am chain to the wall."Where am I what happened"I ask?"Your in a white box"a voice answers."And everyone died"."Did Jake Grim die"I ask my throat tightens."He is in a medical room"the voice says."Being treated for his wounds"."What happened to him"I ask?"He saved you then some one attached him"."Oh"I say putting my hand on my forehead."Why did you save me Jake"I ask my self."Can someone let me out"I ask?"No not until you calm down".Then a girl walks down the hall.A door appears and she unlocks me and leads me to a room.It isn't a white box but the walls are black and the ground is white and black tile.There are 5 windows and 2 doors.I am taken to a seat."Please sit down"says a man.I can tell who he is.He is the President.I sit down as he tells me and I look at his long black beard and black hair.
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Re: Fool's gold-Book one:The fight

Postby Galaxy~Nova » Tue Jun 17, 2014 4:04 am

awesome))
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Re: Fool's gold-Book one:The fight

Postby opalnecklace » Tue Jun 17, 2014 4:05 am

Thanks!}
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Re: Fool's gold-Book one:The fight

Postby opalnecklace » Wed Jun 18, 2014 5:43 am

End of Book One!


Please tell me if your exited of book two and how you liked book one!Thanks!
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Re: Fool's gold-Book one:The fight

Postby Galaxy~Nova » Wed Jun 18, 2014 7:56 am

opalnecklace wrote:
End of Book One!


[i]Please tell me if your exited of book two and how you liked book one!Thanks![i]

I can't wait to read book two!!! XD
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