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by opalnecklace » Sat Jun 14, 2014 11:18 am
I climb a tree.A pine tree.I put off a pinecone and look at the seeds hidden inside.It's amazing how something so small can hold this many seeds.Then I here it.A loud scream.I look around and see a blond haired girl running from the mix that pined me down.I found out they are called Bob-ways.I jump down Drawing my bow I shot bob-way in the forhead.I killed.Then I draw my bow again pointing it at the girl's heart."Please don't kill me"she begs."What's your name"I ask?"Why"she ask then I draw it back farther."My name is Lily"she says."And I mean no harm"she says.I let the arrow down and hold my bow."What happened to your cheek"I ask pointing to a large and deep cut on her left cheek."The boy"Lily says."The boy"I ask?"His name is James"she says."He pinned me down and got my cheek but then the bob-way got him..."she trails off.I nod.I think about Jake and then look at the say."We should head off out of here"I say."Maybe in a tree".Lily nods.I start to climb a oak tree.Then help Lily up.Then we fall asleep.
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by opalnecklace » Sat Jun 14, 2014 11:31 am
When I wake up I see Lily sleeping.She looks so much younger when she is sleeping.Does everyone look younger when they are sleeping?I hear a noise.I shake Lily softly but there is no need she is now awake."What was that"she asks?"I don't know"I say drawing my bow.Then I see the person.My eye widen and I let the arrow down.I jump from the tree.Well not really jump just fall.I hug the person."Jake your alive"I say!"Yeah"he replies."I thought you were dead after I..."I say but get cut off."After you what"Jake asks?"After I shot you"I say."You shot me"he asks?"Yeah you drew your bow"I say."Oh you found a image"Jake says."Oh I thought it was you"I say..I can tell someone is watching us.And it isn't Lily.I see a person walk from the trees.A girl with a sword."THERE SHE IS"the girl says."GET HER".Three boys run from the tree and one throws a knife at me.I move out of it's path.But it hits Jake.He falls to the ground.
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by opalnecklace » Sat Jun 14, 2014 11:46 am
I watch him fall.I draw my bow and shot rapidly.I kill,well knock the boys to the ground.The girl runs off.I don't chase after her.I fall to my knees and look at his cut.He is still alive I know because he is still breathing."Jake"I cry.Then I hear a bird an then remember that this is all over the country.The bird drops a pakage and I lands in my hands.I up it and see a small can of medicine in it.This is the expensive kind that heals a wound fast.I look at the wound and put some of the soft cream on his cut.The wound starts to heal.Lily jumps down from the tree.She puts some of the medicine on my cut."Thanks"I says."No problem"Lily says."Do you need any one your cheek"I ask?"That would be great"Lily says.I nod and put some on her wound.She grabs her knife and goes off to hunt.
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by opalnecklace » Sat Jun 14, 2014 11:56 am
Jake and I climb up the tree.Then we hear a scream."Lily"I think out loud.Then I run off.I find Lily on the ground.She is bleeding then I see a strike of lighting.Jake tells me that is what happens we someone dies.I nod.The I carrie Lily's body to the lake.I place her in the water.A tear runs down my eye."A friend"I say.Jake nods."A friend".We walk back to the tree.I hear a noise then see the flames.I run.Jake follows me.We jump over trees and run to the lake but there is no where to go.We are trapped in a circle sounded by flames.Then a fire ball flys at my.It hits my arm.I scream and fall back in pain.Jake catches me.Then some how the flames just stop.They just stop.Like that.Gone.Jake carries me to the lake.I wade in the water then see a person crossing over the natural brigde.
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by agolivia990 » Sat Jun 14, 2014 12:03 pm
This is an amazing story! I'm love to see more!

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