Fool's gold-Book one:The fight

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Re: Fool's gold-Book one:The fight

Postby opalnecklace » Thu Jun 12, 2014 3:32 pm

End of part Three,book One
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Re: Fool's gold-Book one:The fight

Postby opalnecklace » Thu Jun 12, 2014 3:37 pm

{I will write more later.Please tell me what you think so far!}
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Re: Fool's gold-Book one:The fight

Postby opalnecklace » Thu Jun 12, 2014 3:39 pm

{Bump.}
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Re: Fool's gold-Book one:The fight

Postby opalnecklace » Fri Jun 13, 2014 9:21 am

Part four Book One
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Re: Fool's gold-Book one:The fight

Postby opalnecklace » Fri Jun 13, 2014 9:56 am

I finnaly get the haybird off of me.I draw my bow fast and shot it.It lays there.I run off with a bad feeling.Then I climb a tree swiftly and disappera in the leaves.I see someone.I don't know to trust the person or not.I draw my bow.Then I see that it's Jake.I gasp for air greatfully.But then I see it's not him it's a image of him.But the image is so real that it fools me at the time.The image pulls back it's bow and points it at my heart.I fall back."What are you doing"i ask?"Killing you"the image says.I look at the image.It's Jake I can't,I can't.But I can.I pull back my bow and let go.I hit the image in the heart.The image falls to the ground.I put my sleeve in my mouth and bite it.Then a tear runs down my eye and I run off.
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Re: Fool's gold-Book one:The fight

Postby xToxicWolfx » Sat Jun 14, 2014 11:00 am

Liking it so far! :)
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Re: Fool's gold-Book one:The fight

Postby opalnecklace » Sat Jun 14, 2014 11:00 am

Thanks!)
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Postby xToxicWolfx » Sat Jun 14, 2014 11:08 am

Np i like the drama and the so called survival)
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Re: Fool's gold-Book one:The fight

Postby opalnecklace » Sat Jun 14, 2014 11:15 am

Who is your favorite character?)
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Re: Fool's gold-Book one:The fight

Postby xToxicWolfx » Sat Jun 14, 2014 11:16 am

Madison)
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