Fool's gold-Book one:The fight

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Re: Fool's gold-Book one:The fight

Postby opalnecklace » Thu Jun 12, 2014 1:43 pm

End of part two,book one
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Re: Fool's gold-Book one:The fight

Postby opalnecklace » Thu Jun 12, 2014 1:44 pm

{I will write more later.Please tell me how you like it so far!}
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Re: Fool's gold-Book one:The fight

Postby opalnecklace » Thu Jun 12, 2014 2:08 pm

{Bump.}
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Re: Fool's gold-Book one:The fight

Postby Bulldog22 » Thu Jun 12, 2014 2:10 pm

I love it so far! It is wonderful and great! I can't wait to read more,
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Re: Fool's gold-Book one:The fight

Postby opalnecklace » Thu Jun 12, 2014 2:12 pm

c: who is your favorite?
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Re: Fool's gold-Book one:The fight

Postby opalnecklace » Thu Jun 12, 2014 2:30 pm

Part three Book One
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Re: Fool's gold-Book one:The fight

Postby opalnecklace » Thu Jun 12, 2014 2:38 pm

I woke up.I look around I try to get up.I am chained down to the hard bed I was laying in.A person walks down the hall.I can tell it's a hunter.He has a gold pendent on his selve.He stops at my cell."Calm down"he says."Let me out"I yell at him."I will"he says."My name is Minister Brandon"he says."I Madison Grace but you know that"I spat as he walks into my cell."Just kill me"I says."I am not going to kill you"Minister Brandon says."I have a peruse for you"he says.
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Re: Fool's gold-Book one:The fight

Postby opalnecklace » Thu Jun 12, 2014 2:46 pm

"No just kill me"I say."Your gonna kill me anyway"I say."Not if you live"Minister Brandon says."What are you going to do with me"I ask?"I am going to put you through a test"he says.What does a mean test?Like a mind test?"You will have to live in the wild"he says."I will die"I say."So just kill me"."No"he says.He leads me out to a room."You will train here"he says.I grab a bow and arrows.I shot a dummy in the heart.Brandon claps."Bravo bravo but you must shot faster"he says."I can't"I say."You can"he says.I nod I shot fast and douge fake weapons throw at me.I am ready.Ready for this so called test.
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Re: Fool's gold-Book one:The fight

Postby opalnecklace » Thu Jun 12, 2014 2:54 pm

I am taken to a room.I sleep in the bed.Well it's not really sleep.I look at the ceiling.I think about Jake.Where is he?Probably with his mom.I finally drift off to sleep.I wake up.I am shown to a feast.It has been two weeks sense I had been told about this test today is the last day.After I eat I am taken to a room.There are fake tree and a water hole.I have been told I have two days to get ready with the supplies i have.A knife.Just a knife.He leaves then the room is changed to a forest.I huge forest.The hidden door is locked.Then I here a gun fire.Go I tell myself I sprint to a tree and start to cut it down.I need it to make a bow.
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Re: Fool's gold-Book one:The fight

Postby opalnecklace » Thu Jun 12, 2014 3:04 pm

I finish cutting down the tree after around two hours I estimate.I cut the shape of a bow and I start to carve it.I finish and have cuts all over me.I kill a few birds and make arrows by making the shaft then putting the arrows on the end without the arrow head.The arrow head is made of rock.I have about 24 arrows when I am done.I sleep in a tall tree holding my bow and arrows.After the two days are up I get shaky and scared.I find out I am on tv all over the country.I shivered noce I find that out.There is a noise in the woods."What is that"I ask myself quietly?A large beast jumps from the bush.I looked like a dog mixed with a large bob cat but much more powerful.It jumps on me.I try to push it off.
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