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by I r o n. » Thu Jun 12, 2014 12:37 pm
Nice job! I like the drama acts in it when she falls. Your like me. I always write Creative stories. I was actually thinking about making one my self like I did when I was much younger then I was now. Not saying I'm old old xD Keep da drama up!
im quitting this game, i dont even enjoy it anymore, but i really did while it lasted!
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by opalnecklace » Thu Jun 12, 2014 1:24 pm
I woke up.Jake wasn't here.I walked outside and looked around.The wind wiped my night gown.I smiled.The wind was my only friend out here,other than Jake.My dream was about him.We were in the woods,deep in the woods.I had seen wanted signs with my face printed on them.Jake had ripped them off on the oak tree.I walked down the hill.I saw the rock it had my blood stain on it.They could find me now.The hunters.That is what was call them,me and Jake.They hunt helpless people and lock them up or kill them.Which ever they feel like.
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by opalnecklace » Thu Jun 12, 2014 1:31 pm
I heard foot steps.I ran into the house,quickly got dressed in a black shirt and pants.My shirt was covered by my leather jacket.I drew my bow ready for a fight.A man ran down the hill.I back up onto my house.This was a hunter no doubt about it.He had a gun in his right hand ready to shot.I point my bow at his heart.I let go.The arrow cut though the air with a whistle but it missed him by a inch zoom pass his neck.I hid again and put another arrow in my bow and drew it again.I was not going down with out a fight.I let the arrow got but this time it hit his stomach.His fell to the ground in pain.I could hear him dying.I covered my left ear the only ear I could hear in and hid.
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by opalnecklace » Thu Jun 12, 2014 1:36 pm
Even if it was a hunter I couldn't hear anyone dying.I would loose my lunch.I ran off to go hunting my stoumch by this time was no biger then a walnut.I saw Jake run from the village.His was looking for me."Over here Jake"I calls waving my arm that didn't have a bow in.Jake smiled and ran over.I hug him."Whoa what's with the hug"he asks?"I can't do it"I say."I can't kill people".Jake nodded.He pulled out his bow."Let's go hunt"he said.I nod trying to leave killing that guy out of my mind.
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by opalnecklace » Thu Jun 12, 2014 1:41 pm
I walk into the overgrowth one of the best places to find turkey.Jake smiles and follows trying not to make any noise.I pull back my bow and point it at the turkey.It hits it in the side killing it but all I saw was a vision of that man I hit.I fell back gasping her air."It was him he was there"I yell.Jake looks at me."It's ok I am here you are safe"he says."He was there"I says breathing in and out fastly.Just then I hear a gun shot.I fall back as it hits me in the side after that everything goes black.
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