[JamBlack]

Mah trick or treat wolf. Was meant to be dog but my sister said its more like a wolf.

EDIT: Added more shading and a moon

EDIT 2: Added more fur over collar and light shading

Crit?

JB

[JamBlack]

anyone? I really wanna move to intermediate so crit is wanted ^^

[Zigzagoon]

You could maybe add a bit more obvious shading, but it is good picture ^-^

[JamBlack]

thanks ill edit it now ^^

[JamBlack]

up

[Zigzagoon]

Thats a bit better, but you could also try out some light shading on the parts of the dogs body where the moon is shining, cause that would look nice ^-^ I hope you don't think that I don't like your picture by giving you all of this critism, because I think its great ^-^

[ay4u]

The Hair going over the collar bit needs to be overlapping the collar more.

You could overall clean it up, there are places where the color goes outside the lines.

The basic drawing is nice, you did well on the ears, the "lips" could use some work, although I suspect it's meant to be like that because of the candy.

The bits of "highlight" or "light" adds well to the drawing.

Is that okay? I was trying to be honest.

[JamBlack]

thanks guys i wouldnt have thought of this ^^ dont think your being harsh because i need this to get to intermediate

[JamBlack]

muah ha haa! slowly getting there. added crit comments ^^ still more to do me thinks

[Berylite]

OMG i luvs eet!!!
(i can write properly,but the pic is just too awesome!)