Fool's gold-Book one:The fight

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Hello everyone this is a book I will be writing once I start it feel free to read it,once I finish I will be making I role play on it!Hope you like it!Please comment about it and tell me if you like it!Please do not copy it.

Here is the role play:

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I run down my small hill.I keep away from the fence that breaks the village apart from the forest.They send warnings about this beautiful forest.Good thing I came here or I would be dead by now.The same way my family died.The people.They thought my family were criminals they thought they kill people.They are wrong.My dad a very poor man was a miner and my mom was a cook.My brother and sisters hunted for the family to keep us alive.My family worked together.I am willing to tell the story of how I got away.

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I ran down to the stream.The jade water flows down the rocks.My blue eyes shine in the water.They match.I see some behind me.I turn fast drawing my bow."Whoa calm down"the person says to me."Oh it's just you"I say throwing my bow down."Just me what do you mean"he asks."It's just you Jake"I says."And it's just you Mad"Jake says."Don't call me that"I says.My real name is Madison Grace."Sorry Mad"he says.I push him to the ground and walk back up the hill."Wait up"he calls."No way"I call back and rush up a tree.

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My legs hang down.Jake trys to climb up after me but he falls.I laugh out loud."Madison get down here"he says."Maybe I won't"I call down.Then the wind picks up.I jump down.We run deep in the forest by the burnt tree.I call it the ash tree.I trip and fall down the hill hitting my head on a large rock.Jake shakes me."Madison wake up!Madison wake up"he says.Blood runs down my mouth.He wipes it away and carries me back to the small house my dad built.

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I wake up a watery rag on my head.Jake is on the other couch."Hi"I say weakly."How long was I out"I ask?"Three days"he answers."Did you go back to your house"I ask?"No"Jake answers."I was here the whole time.I smile I look at my brown messy hair and find flowers in it."Did you put those in my hair"I ask pulling one out.He nods.I trace my scar with my finger.The scar I got mining with my dad.That was the only day he let me close to the mine.That was when I was 12.Now I'm 18.The same age my sister was when they killed her.This takes me back 6 years ago to the village.To my old house.To where they died.

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I was running.The boom of the gun breaking my eardrum.That was how I lost hearing in my right ear.A young Jake running from a village house to my younger motionless body lying in the soft grass.He drags me deep into the woods.My father still alive runs after us.My mom,sister,and brother lay lifeless on the ground.I hear 2 more gun shots.I was still consist.That was the end of them.My father start to build a small house.7 days later they find him.He never finished the house water drips into the house through the roof."Madison wake up"Jake said shaking me."What happened"?

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"You passed out"Jake said."You need medicine"he said."No"I say."That is how my little sister died I am not dying like that".Jake sighs."Come on"he says."It's the medicine your dad made"he says."Don't talk about my dad"I rage running out of the house.Jake grabs my arm."Stay"he says."Let go of me"I says shaking my arm trying to get away.Jake pulls me inside.He locks the door."You need to be quiet so they don't find you"he says.Then he wakes out."My mom is probably looking for me"he says then runs off.

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I wipe a tear from my eye and wave.Why am I crying?Because he talked about my dad.I look at my head in the cracked mirror.I go outside and in my hidden cave.I see a sparkle and grab my hidden pickaxe.I mine it out slowly.It falls.I look at it.Mica.Not silver.I pick it up.My dad tough me the difference when I was little I walk back to my house and lay it on my table.I will give it to Jake in the morning.For him to sell.The market people don't know the difference between mica and silver.They will pay him the price of silver.To bad I didn't find fool's gold.Jake would be rich and he would help me get back on my feet.And we could buy a big house for him,his mama,and me.I smile and fall asleep on the patch work couch dreaming.

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End of part one,book one.

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