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Re: Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer

Postby Arcaii » Wed Jun 11, 2014 9:31 am

hazel. wrote:
      Okay, i think this will be the last time i come to improve Silverclaw! Yay!

      Image/Description: Silver tabby with vibrant green eyes.
      Name: Silverclaw
      Gender: Female
      Clan: LightningClan
      Rank: Warrior
      Personality/Skills: Silverclaw is sarcastic and rude, but an excellent fighter. She'll comment on another warrior's/apprentice's fighting/hunting to their face, but like constructive criticism. Silverclaw is frequently annoyed by careless queens, who don't pay enough attention to their kits.
      Important Notes: Nothing, but thank you so so so much for all your help with Silverclaw and all of my other warriors I sent in.


Always happy to help, my friend.

Name Rating: 10/10
Name Type: Traditional
Name Reasoning: On top of sounding radical as all getout, the name fits her perfectly. Ain't much else to say!
Alternative Name: None!

Character Rating: 10/10
Character Reasoning: I really like characters who are blunt-bordering-on-rude, but are justified because what they're saying is true and born out of wanting to help the other person improve. Something about them is endearing.
Anyway, she's a great character. Her traits all fit perfectly together, and I can see her having a hard time lying or understanding that what she's saying can be considered hurtful. Good job on her!
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Re: Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer

Postby Oliverstorm » Sun Jun 15, 2014 6:57 am

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Name: Fletchlander
Gender: Male
Clan: MistClan
Rank: Warrior
Personality/Skills: Fletchlander is a happy go lucky kind of cat who never does anything wrong, it seems. He's always there to cheer everyone else up and always puts others ahead of him. But when he does mess up, he takes it hard and always blames himself. He tends to avoid fighting and enjoys apprentice tasks.
Important Notes: Fletchlander was an ex-kittypet who strayed away from his fence and was taken in by the soft-hearted queens of MistClan after he got a taste for Clan life and begged to stay.
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Re: Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer

Postby Arcaii » Sun Jun 15, 2014 9:15 am

Oliverstorm wrote:Image/Description:
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Name: Fletchlander
Gender: Male
Clan: MistClan
Rank: Warrior
Personality/Skills: Fletchlander is a happy go lucky kind of cat who never does anything wrong, it seems. He's always there to cheer everyone else up and always puts others ahead of him. But when he does mess up, he takes it hard and always blames himself. He tends to avoid fighting and enjoys apprentice tasks.
Important Notes: Fletchlander was an ex-kittypet who strayed away from his fence and was taken in by the soft-hearted queens of MistClan after he got a taste for Clan life and begged to stay.


Name Rating: ???
Name Type: Who even knows
Name Reasoning: I really was certain that Fletchlander was from something, because I've never heard this name in my life. I'm not even sure what it's supposed to mean. Fletch- turned up nothing, except two Pokemon, and its correlation with -lander is unknown to me. That's the reason there's no real rating; I have no idea what to rate it.
I was going to give him -cloud, but he sounds a little more energetic than a -cloud cat. If he isn't, let me know.
Alternative Name: Briarpelt/Elmfur. Both prefixes allude to a brown tabby, and since he has no nameable personality traits ro skills, he gets the defaults.

Character Rating: 8/10
Character Reasoning: He seems fine, but he might have a hard time in a Clan. He doesn't fight or hunt much, and he still preforms apprentice tasks even though that's not his job. I recommend giving him something a little more productive, like having a good tracking ability, or good eye for fortitude, or something.
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Re: Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer

Postby Oliverstorm » Sun Jun 15, 2014 1:24 pm

Thanks! I know he's got a weird name, but I made him a while ago.
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Re: Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer

Postby Arcaii » Sun Jun 15, 2014 1:36 pm

It's a first on the internet, I can tell you that. It sounds like a name for a boss battle or something.
Let me know if you need any more help!
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Re: Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer

Postby Oliverstorm » Sun Jun 15, 2014 1:40 pm

I'll come back with more cats, for sure. I just wanted to share what I had named Fletchie for, exactly.

The Google definition for 'fletch' is this:
fletch
/fleCH/

verb

verb: fletch; 3rd person present: fletches; past tense: fletched; past participle: fletched; gerund or present participle: fletching

1. provide (an arrow) with feathers for flight.
"most arrows are fletched with 3- to 5-inch feathers"

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noun

noun: fletch; plural noun: fletches

1. each of the feathered vanes of an arrow.
"a four-fletch arrow"


His twolegs named him Fletch after the feathers on the arrow, and the -lander, well, I've got no idea. It just came to me.
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