- @ariadne: it looks freaking amazing. very elaborate, and clean. I love it. however, some of it isn't lined up? I don't know if that's just my computer or not.
@chag: I think is looks absolutely lovely, but if you feel it looks strange,
maybe you could try replacing the corner decals with something else for the center box that contains all the text? maybe something simpler that won't distract?
@beatus: you have the right idea with the first one, it is very lovely, but it's plain. maybe you could add some veer fonts to liven it up?
the second one is lovely as well, but maybe you can find an image that is a bit taller so that the form all lines up with it?
I need a little critque for a form as well. I have no idea how I feel about this form.