Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer [CLOSED]

[Arcaii]

I just thought of a new name(I think): What about Rust- as a prefix?

It could indicate a dark ginger or reddish cat, or maybe even a very dark brown/red cat?

The issue with Rust- is that the color comes from the actual process of rusting. Rusting only takes place on Twoleg inventions, like cars, bikes, houses, etc. Most cats would not be interacting with those things regularly, so it stands to reason that they would have no idea what rust is. If they were a Clan living in an abandoned house or junkyard or something, I imagine they might know, but that's a highly unlikely situation.

[quitting,,]

I just thought of a new name(I think): What about Rust- as a prefix?

It could indicate a dark ginger or reddish cat, or maybe even a very dark brown/red cat?

The issue with Rust- is that the color comes from the actual process of rusting. Rusting only takes place on Twoleg inventions, like cars, bikes, houses, etc. Most cats would not be interacting with those things regularly, so it stands to reason that they would have no idea what rust is. If they were a Clan living in an abandoned house or junkyard or something, I imagine they might know, but that's a highly unlikely situation.

I was thinking of using it for a clan that lives very close to two-leg contact, not to mention they live very close to junkyard

[Arcaii]

If it fits the situation, then go ahead. I would be cautious of how much contact they have - humans might find a large group of cats to be a possible vermin problem, and there might not be a lot of prey around for those cats.

[Oliverstorm]

Image/Description:

Name: Tangle
Gender: Male
Clan: DewClan
Rank: Elder
Personality/Skills: Tangle is a very caring, old tom. His age is 156 moons, and he has a special skill with kits. If one can ignore his half furred state, they'll find a very gentle cat who hates fighting.
Important Notes: Tangle is the grandfather of Pine (below) and he is a Lykoi breed of cat. I need names for them ^.^

Image/Description:

Name: Pine
Gender: Male
Clan: DewClan
Rank: Kit
Personality/Skills: Pine is a very, very energetic little kitten who tries to be friends with anyone. That's his flaw though, he'll trust anyone - which means he's bound to get stabbed in the back sometime. His mother died when Pine was 3 moons old, and his grandfather took him in and raised him the best he could till he gave in and joined a Clan - at his old age, he can hardly hunt, and Pine was too young to hunt.
Important Notes: Pine is also a Lykoi breed of cat, which explains his looks.

[quitting,,]

Image/Description:

Name: Tangle
Gender: Male
Clan: DewClan
Rank: Elder
Personality/Skills: Tangle is a very caring, old tom. His age is 156 moons, and he has a special skill with kits. If one can ignore his half furred state, they'll find a very gentle cat who hates fighting.
Important Notes: Tangle is the grandfather of Pine (below) and he is a Lykoi breed of cat. I need names for them ^.^

Image/Description:

Name: Pine
Gender: Male
Clan: DewClan
Rank: Kit
Personality/Skills: Pine is a very, very energetic little kitten who tries to be friends with anyone. That's his flaw though, he'll trust anyone - which means he's bound to get stabbed in the back sometime. His mother died when Pine was 3 moons old, and his grandfather took him in and raised him the best he could till he gave in and joined a Clan - at his old age, he can hardly hunt, and Pine was too young to hunt.
Important Notes: Pine is also a Lykoi breed of cat, which explains his looks.

Those pictures made me feel so sad ;-;
He looks half-starved to death D:

[Arcaii]

They're a newer species of cats commonly called Werewolf cats! They all look a little sick and scraggly, don't worry. Those two are just fine.

[Arcaii]

Image/Description:

Name: Tangle
Gender: Male
Clan: DewClan
Rank: Elder
Personality/Skills: Tangle is a very caring, old tom. His age is 156 moons, and he has a special skill with kits. If one can ignore his half furred state, they'll find a very gentle cat who hates fighting.
Important Notes: Tangle is the grandfather of Pine (below) and he is a Lykoi breed of cat. I need names for them ^.^

Image/Description:

Name: Pine
Gender: Male
Clan: DewClan
Rank: Kit
Personality/Skills: Pine is a very, very energetic little kitten who tries to be friends with anyone. That's his flaw though, he'll trust anyone - which means he's bound to get stabbed in the back sometime. His mother died when Pine was 3 moons old, and his grandfather took him in and raised him the best he could till he gave in and joined a Clan - at his old age, he can hardly hunt, and Pine was too young to hunt.
Important Notes: Pine is also a Lykoi breed of cat, which explains his looks.

I'd really have to wonder where a lykoi started mingling with a Clan cat and the Clan cat somehow didn't see them as sickly or mangy, especially considering that these cats might actually have some issues living out in the wild, much like a sphinx would. Regardless, they have enough fur for proper naming, so here we go.

Tangle-
Name Suggestion: Fircloud/Nettlecloud
Name Reasoning: Tangle- has been talked about before on here, and basically the reason why it's not suggested is because the color of the coat should go over the texture of it, since you probably won't be able to tell if the fur is knotted or not from a distance, but you can tell the color. Besides, I don't think this feller has enough fur to really get it all tangled.
Anyway, the prefixes are for a grey colored cat, and -cloud references his gentle and caring personality.

Character Rating: 7/10
Character Reasoning: Being 10 and a half years old is absurdly long-lived for a feral cat. They tend to only live 5 years, maximum. This guy is either extremely lucky or absurdly careful with how he lives his life. I'd kick down his age to about 80-90, tops. Anything above that is really pushing the borders.
There's also the factor of his fur, and his breed, which are exclusively domestic. How on earth did he get out in the wild? Why would the Clan take in someone who's not only obscenely old and can't hunt or fight, but looks sick and mangy?


Pine-
Name Suggestion: Pinefur/Pinepelt
Name Reasoning: Since he doesn't have any particular outstanding skills, he gets the defaults. His prefix stays as it is.

Character Rating: 8/10
Character Reasoning: The issues from his grandfather include him, but otherwise he seems just fine.

[mistywater]

Me again! Sorry, it's just that I'm planning a fan-fiction, and I want my charries to be rather well-created.

Image/Description: Grey-brown tom with copper eyes, slightly small and skinny, dusky too.
Name: Shrewcloud.
Gender: Tom.
Clan: ShadowClan.
Rank: Medicine Cat.
Personality/Skills: Shrewcloud was always a bit of a runt, but he always found the life of a warrior exciting and fun. His brother, Fennelpaw, was always caring and kind, so he took up the medicine cat apprentice rank. One day, Shrewpaw got appalling news that Fennelpaw was killed, struck by a falling branch. He felt a certain responsibility to take up his brother's rank, especially that the old medicine cat was weaker by day. He found his new position just as fun and unusual, and his mellow nature and curiosity led him to being a respected, friendly cat.
Important Notes: Nope!

Image/Description: Wiry, thin black she-cat with green eyes.
Name: Dipperpaw (Dipperfur).
Gender: Molly.
Clan: WindClan.
Rank: Medicine cat apprentice.
Personality/Skills: Dipperpaw was always a curious and demanding cat, who respected and pitied her future mentor, an awkward, absent-minded and lonely molly named Wasp-pelt. She quickly stepped up as her apprentice, keen to use her sharp nose and delighted with her unusual tasks. That is what she truly wanted.
Important Notes: Nope!

[Arcaii]

Me again! Sorry, it's just that I'm planning a fan-fiction, and I want my charries to be rather well-created.

Image/Description: Grey-brown tom with copper eyes, slightly small and skinny, dusky too.
Name: Shrewcloud.
Gender: Tom.
Clan: ShadowClan.
Rank: Medicine Cat.
Personality/Skills: Shrewcloud was always a bit of a runt, but he always found the life of a warrior exciting and fun. His brother, Fennelpaw, was always caring and kind, so he took up the medicine cat apprentice rank. One day, Shrewpaw got appalling news that Fennelpaw was killed, struck by a falling branch. He felt a certain responsibility to take up his brother's rank, especially that the old medicine cat was weaker by day. He found his new position just as fun and unusual, and his mellow nature and curiosity led him to being a respected, friendly cat.
Important Notes: Nope!

Image/Description: Wiry, thin black she-cat with green eyes.
Name: Dipperpaw (Dipperfur).
Gender: Molly.
Clan: WindClan.
Rank: Medicine cat apprentice.
Personality/Skills: Dipperpaw was always a curious and demanding cat, who respected and pitied her future mentor, an awkward, absent-minded and lonely molly named Wasp-pelt. She quickly stepped up as her apprentice, keen to use her sharp nose and delighted with her unusual tasks. That is what she truly wanted.
Important Notes: Nope!

Don't stress it. That's what the thread's for!

Shrewcloud
Name Rating: 10/10
Name Type: Traditional
Name Reasoning: He has a good name! I'm not quite sure what dusky refers to, but I'll assume it means he's a little darker than usual. His prefix should still fit him as long as it isn't a huge difference in color.
Alternative Name: None!

Character Rating: 9/10
Character Reasoning: Something always weirds me out when it comes to siblings or children taking up their family's mantle when they die. Given that a large part of Clan life resides in choice and earning your position, inheriting or taking up a position based on a feeling of obligation kinda goes against that. But, whatever. He works out just fine, aside from that.


Dipperfur
Name Rating: 10/10
Name Type: Traditional
Name Reasoning: She does appear to have good senses, especially nose-wise, but if she doesn't really use them for tracking, then I'd say that -fur fits her perfectly.
Alternative Name: None!

Character Rating: 10/10
Character Reasoning: She's good all around! I don't have too much to say, other than good luck with your fic, and good luck with these two.

[Arcaii]

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