Raddy wrote:Image/Description: White short fur, cream tabby tail, green eyes
Name: Saptail
Gender: Female
Clan: Thunderclan
Rank: Warrior
Personality/Skills: She is hyper and funny, but sometimes a bit obnoxious. Her favorite prey is Squirrels and she can sit still in a tree for a while, waiting for one to pass by. She is very adept at collecting moss and can be seen doing that in her free-time. She loves kits and (With the mother's permission) sometimes takes them moss hunting with her. She also babysits them from time to time because she is one of the only warriors that has the energy to keep up with them, so she is quite popular with the queens. She is a great friend but can't keep a secret to save her life.
Important Notes: Nihil
Image/Description: Dark brown tabby with amber eyes and a white dot on chest
Name: Mudlotus
Gender: Female
Clan: Riverclan
Rank: Queen/Elder
Personality/Skills: Patient but a no nonsense attitude when it comes to rules. She is a great story teller and loves doing so for her clanmates. She hates laying around camp all day, so she likes going around and patching up the dens. She gives sound advise to those who ask and is respected by her clanmates for it. She doesn't have the crabby attitude of most elders but she does have bad days...
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Image/Description: Small, white fur with odd eyes (Green, Yellow) and one brownish red foot.
Name: Clayfoot
Gender: Female
Clan: Windclan
Rank: Warrior
Personality/Skills: She is quiet and was picked on as a kit for her eyes. She holds grudges for a long time and acts indifferent when she has to do something with one of them. She is the best hunting partner or patrol member in the clan because she pays attention to her surroundings.To hunt, she covers herself in clay or mud to hide her scent and pelt. Because of her size, she is used to flush rabbits out of their warrens for her clanmates. She has a few friends who are protective of her and she is deathly loyal to them and her clan.
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SaptailName Rating: 7/10
Name Type: Creative
Name Reasoning: Ain't never seen Sap- before, I can tell you that. But it doesn't work well, since sap is kind of a weird thing to name a cat for, and, well...if anything, it's a goldenish or reddish color, rather than white.
But since she spends a lot of time in the trees, I will assume that she's adept at climbing them to get moss and squirrels. I don't suggest -flower since she doesn't really raise the kits herself, she just takes them on adventures.
Alternative Name: Lightningtail/Mallowtail. Both prefixes indicate a white cat (bet you didn't know that Lightning- was traditional), and -tail stays as it is.
Character Rating: 10/10
Character Reasoning: Overall, there's no real issues with her. She's a good character, and seems like a great person to have babysit once in a while. I do want to know if she just likes kits but has no interest in having her own, or if she does want kits but hasn't really gotten around to that yet. (Do keep in mind that single queens with no known father of their kits is just fine; she doesn't need a mate to have kits, just someone looking for a good time.)
MudlotusName Rating: 8/10
Name Type: Canonical
Name Reasoning: At the most, -lotus would be a rendition of -flower, which is repetitive, and not too necessary. Mud- fits her just fine, though, and I'm glad to see it being used.
Alternative Name: Mudstripe/Mudpelt. Since she doesn't have any skills that have a name to them, at least traditionally, I suggest the defaults, which refer to a general skill set or specialization in something without a suffix. And since Mud- refers to a brown cat without any indication of a tabby, I suggest -stripe.
Character Rating: 10/10
Character Reasoning: She also seems pretty solid. I wish that there was a role in the Clans for a storyteller, because that would be absolutely amazing, and add a lot to the culture of Clan life. Unfortunately, there isn't, but one may hope.
ClayfootName Rating: 5/10
Name Type: Canonical
Name Reasoning: Clay- isn't suggested mostly because clay is only found deep underground, where cats aren't likely to see it (much like slate or jet), and she's more of a hunter than a fast cat, which -foot suggests. One could argue that she was named that for her foot, but that's a pretty tiny thing to name someone for. She's got a nice white pelt, and if that foot gets torn off then her name means absolutely nothing.
Alternative Name: Cherrywhisker/Palewhisker. Both prefixes refer to a white cat, and -whisker indicates her hunting abilities.
Character Rating: 7/10
Character Reasoning: The thing is, I can't really imagine why anyone would have a problem with her having different colored eyes. She doesn't have blue eyes, so she's not deaf, and her eyes can see just fine, so who would really care if she has a different color per eye? It's a petty thing to tease for.
There's also the red foot. Cats have what's called white spotting (what gives them white feet or a white chest when they're a darker color), and a white cat is generally when the spotting completely takes over the body. The spotting starts at the bottom and makes its way to the top, so having a singular red foot is a little weird - if it was patching in other places that would be relatively fine, but just one white foot is...odd. I suggest making it a reddish tail or facial markings
like so.
Other than that, she seems fine!
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